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Chapter 168 Tools and Information

🕑 Added 2019-01-31 17:59:21 +0000 UTC

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Arkeus

Rereading those parts, but man. Ilea, you yourself saw all those deaths. They aren't "statistic" to you, you personally saw a lot of people you knew dying. Dammit.

G. Harthane

Corrected, thanks!

G. Harthane

Changed to "likely even more"

G. Harthane

Changed, thanks.

Adurna

I think it fits quite well.

Gardor

[Not only was it more fun to move through the city like this but also a better way to stay hidden from the guards watching the skies]

Gardor

It turned out that it was both more fun to move through the city like this but also a better way --> and also

Gardor

maybe I’ll bind in some way with Iana but with all those runes I’m not quite sure of anything anymore --> these runes; he's talking about himself after all

Gardor

Tens of thousands have already died, more likely --> most likely

Gardor

That someone I can’t point out to you even if I wanted to -->That's. Unless you're referring to a specific someone. But the proceeding sentence shows him to have morals, so he should want to. Maybe say "I'd point out whoever did that if I knew" or something

Xwaderman

“Alright, so let’s get to work. In the middle of the night. Don’t tell me I’m turning into my father. Don’t.” strange dont at the end seems out of place

Corwin Amber

thanks for the chapters


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