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Kartoon Warz #4 update
🕑 Added 2025-08-08 19:04:48 +0000 UTCI think these are the last pages of the 4th issue. I don't like the last panel much. And there is a sketch for the cover, kim grabing a tablecloth to cover her. What do you think?
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ReddyHeart
Thank you very much for the help!
Niccab
Ah, what a cliffhanger! And I like that you took into account the physical damage advice I gave you. Anyways here are the corrections: 3rd page, second panel: It's either "is growing by the second" or "is growing each second"; I prefer the former, IMO. 3rd page, third panel: Two things: One, "Hey, where are going? Don't make me take off my heels"; Two: "and come up with a plan" 4th page, third panel: simple typo: "For God's sake!" 4th page, fourth panel: "No matter what you do, you can't touch me!" What does she mean by "touch"? As in defeat, surpass her? I think it would be better as "you can't beat me".
ReddyHeart
I am glad you liked! It should be ready next week.
Joey Fernandez
Looking good thus far! I like the idea of the cover art, Kim kept the most decency out of all the girls infected by Shannon... when she's not near her, at least.
