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Circus Freaks pg 36 (commentary)
Oh, so she just happened to forget her underwear?
Circus Freaks pg 36 inks (commentary)
Such good actors.By the way, Glitz's top usually has a ball on the collar. When she opens the door, you'll notice that not only is it gone, but there's a small rip. Glitz had pre-ripped the shirt so it would be easier for Striker to tear off.
Circus Freaks pg 36 draft (script)
P1: Striker slams Glitz against the wallGLITZ: You fucking stalker shithead! Get off me!STRIKER: Not until ah get what ah want.P2: Glitz trembles as she's pressed against the wall.GLITZ: N-no, wait, I'll do it. I'll sign whatever you want. Just let me go.STRIKER: Ain't happening. Not when ah'm so close.P3:Striker rips down Glitz's shirt, exposing her chest.GLITZ: AIIEE! Stop!P4: Striker leers into her eyes.STRIKER: Open your sl*t legs for me.
Helluva Trio 2 pg 80 (commentary)
New kink unlocked?
Helluva Trio 2 pg 80 inks (commentary)
Biiiiiiig stretch.
Helluva Trio 2 pg 80 draft (script)
P1: Moxxie spanks her.P2: Loona looks back up at Moxxie.LOONA: Daddy... I'll never learn if you hit me that soft.P3: Millie shakes Moxxie by the shoulder, excited by what's happening.MILLIE: Oh, hell yes!
Circus Freaks pg 35 (commentary)
Sheesh, Glam had so much preamble and foreplay, but with Glitz, it's right down to business.
Circus Freaks pg 35 inks (commentary)
Should be obvious by now that this comic is about the exploration of kinks and personal desires, and partners playing along with these interests despite not being strictly into it themselves. Of course, there will be more for the characters to discuss, but for now, Glitz just wants to have her fun.
Circus Freaks pg 35 draft (script)
P1: Glitz pulls out a marker and rolls her eyes.GLIT: Ugh, fine, you ugly bastard. Where do you want it?P2: Striker gestures to his erection through his pants, but his expression looks annoyed.STRIKER: Ah want it right here, on my--ugh, this is so stupid.GLITZ: Don't break character.STRIKER: On my massive erection for you. P3: Glitz pretends to be shocked.GLITZ: Ick! You're disgusting, you filthy old man! I'm not going anywhere near your dick!P4: Striker barges in and grabs Glitz by ...
Helluva Trio 2 pg 79 (commentary)
So even Moxxie has a streak of boldness, once he's comfortable enough. And I think Loona would want to play along now that Moxxie is taking charge.
Helluva Trio 2 pg 79 inks (commentary)
Just double-checking for consent without breaking the mood.
Helluva Trio 2 pg 79 draft (script)
P1: Moxxie leans in towards Loona.MOXXIE: Loona. Don't you think you were being bad today? The way you exposed yourself like that?P2: Loona quivers.LOONA: Well... yes...MOXXIE: And don't you think that bad girls should be spanked?P3: Loona hides her face in her hands.P4: She peers through her fingers, trying to hide her smile and blush.LOONA: Yeah... just a little...
Circus Freaks pg 34 (commentary)
A slight tweak to Glitz's design. Her upright hair made things difficult to fit into panels. Her long tail-hair was also very confusing, so I simplified it for myself.I had considered designing new clothes for her, or having her wear pajamas, but considering the setup to their roleplay, her keeping her work attire made the most sense to me.
Circus Freaks pg 34 inks (commentary)
What kind of game are they playing now?
Circus Freaks pg 34 draft (script)
P1: We cut to later. We are looking at Glitz's dressing room door, with the bold star on it. We see Striker's hand knocking on it.NARRATION: A little later...KNOCK KNOCKGLITZ (from inside): Who is it? I just had a longass day being the best and I don't want to be bothered.P2: She opens the door, sneering.GLITZ: Oh. It's you. I've seen you around every performance for the past month. How'd you get past security? P3: We see Striker in Glam Sisters fan apparel, sneering as h...
