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Helluva Trio 2 pg 78 (commentary)
It was either this or taking away her phone for a week.
Helluva Trio 2 pg 78 inks (commentary)
Note how she willingly lays down anyway.
Helluva Trio 2 pg 78 draft (script)
P1: Loona nervously approaches.LOONA: Y-you can't be serious. There's no way we're doing this.MOXXIE: Do as I say.P2: She obliges and lays chest-down on his lap.LOONA: I think you're taking the d*ddy role a little too literally--P3: Moxxie hikes up her dress, exposing her ass.P4: Millie gasps, red in the face.P5: Moxxie raises his hand.P6: Loona looks back, panicking.LOONA: W-wait! Are you messing with me? I mean, I don't know if...
Circus Freaks pg 33 (commentary)
Sounds like she wants a little r***play.Wonder how this will turn out.
Circus Freaks pg 33 inks (commentary)
A bit brash, huh?I had to do some interesting reading and ask several other women about their thoughts on this kind of fantasy.I hope I made it entertaining and true to life.
Circus Freaks pg 33 draft (script)
P1: Glitz nuzzles up to Striker, who's still annoyed.GLITZ: Just you and me, big guy. You're not still upset, are ya? Not when you get to play with allll of this?STRIKER: Ah ain't like you two. Sex is... sacred to me.P2: Glitz tickles his chinGLITZ: Sacred, huh? Well, I prefer to be defiled. You can do that for me, can't ya?STRIKER: Why should I?P3: She wraps her arms around his shoulders, hanging off of him, grinning.GLITZ: You like getting paid, don't ya? Wanna keep working...
Helluva Trio 2 pg 77 (commentary)
How will he punish them?
Helluva Trio 2 pg 77 inks (commentary)
It's about time he took the lead.
Helluva Trio 2 pg 77 draft (script)
P1: Moxxie glares back at them.MOXXIE: Somewhere where I can punish you two in private.P2: Loona and Millie glance at each other, unsure what to say.P3: Deep into the park, they come across a bench in front of bushes, sequestered away with no one around.MOXXIE: Good. There's no one here.P4: Moxxie takes a seat.P5: He pats his lap.MOXXIE: Loona. Lay here on my lap. You've been a bad girl tonight.
Circus Freaks pg 32 (commentary)
From what I've seen of the sisters, they're greedy and mean, but nothing implies that they're completely heartless. They're just jerks to their opponents.Newer episodes of the show may prove me wrong, but I wanted to have the sisters with a somewhat screwy morality compass, but not outright cruel. Glam does drop hints of who she wanted to be if she wasn't a performer.
Circus Freaks pg 32 inks (commentary)
So maybe it wasn't all an act.
Circus Freaks pg 32 draft (script)
P1: They grin.GLITZ: We've all got our personal twisted desires. The kind of shit we can only share with complete strangers or people we trust. GLAM: We're not here to judge. I was telling the truth before: we keep our lives separate from the stage.P2: Striker sneers.STRIKER: Ah... ah told you things... that were private. Ah thought you cared, but you were just laughing at me, is that it?P3: Glam goes silent.P4: She averts her eyes.GLAM: Not at all. In case no one's told you, Striker...
Helluva Trio 2 pg 76 (commentary)
So what could Moxxie be planning?
Helluva Trio 2 pg 76 inks (commentary)
Finally out of that stuffy restaurant and all its peepers.Buer Park is named after Buer, one of the Great Presidents of Hell, from the book On the Tricks of Demons, which is probably most notable for arranging Hell into hierarchies and, in the real world, leading to the abolishment of witchcraft trials.Buer is one of the kinder Great Demons, a teacher of philosophy, logic, and the healing arts, so it seemed only right that he'd have a rather nice and pleasant park named in his honor.
Helluva Trio 2 pg 76 draft (script)
P1: The trio are walking down the sidewalk, laughing, still exhilarated. MILLIE: Who WAS that pervert?LOONA: Some people have no respect for privacy.P2: Moxxie snaps at them.MOXXIE: I can't believe you two! Of all the irresponsible... the most egregious...! The... the...!P3: Moxxie's attention is caught by a sign across the street, the entrance to a park.P4: Close-up of the sign, detailing the park as "Buer Park," with a sigil of Buer on it.P5: He grabs Loona's hand and drags...
