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(Complete) Devil In The Waters, Book 2, Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2020-01-30 19:32:53 +0000 UTC

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JamesIsAsleep

Chapter 11!! 😀

Chinookfan72

new chapter is out so this will all be moot, however.... Glauc, while a time skip is possible I think the build up to the first day of work for both Josh and Kimmy is too juicy to pass up for KT to explore. Also with the sexual momentum between Kimmy and Devlin I can’t see them continuing to come up with things that stop them from going all the way. It’ll become like the boy who cried wolf. Also From a greedy standpoint I want them to get the first fuck out of the way so we can get to the second, third, twenty-seventh sexual encounter. The build up is great but I don’t want to be 5 books into the story and there has been no full on sex either. BNR, I look forward to their first trip out of the country ( or area). Your extra predictions sound good to me.. My additional prediction that Devlin will schedule the/a trip on Kimmy and Josh’s anniversary as a way to fuck with Josh... It also sets up one of my favorite scenes where the wife is talking to the husband on the phone and she is pleasuring and being pleasured by the other man.

BNR

I was thinking: If Kimmy doesn't give in to sex in the car right now, She will on their first trip out of the country. Two extra predictions (just because I'm a bit twisted) 1) Kimmy's luggage is "LOST" and Devlin has new clothes purchased for her so that he can show her off to their clients! 2) And she might get very wild on that trip! Maybe forget to take her *Pills*

Glaucon

An observation - Devlin's referenced a few times that Kimmy was a diligent student. reminds me of some law school friends that I always noticed seemed to have big thing for authority. I could see the dynamic between Devlin and Kimmy. As his employee she's seeing him more and more as an authority figure she needs to please for her job, which leads to her psychologically valuing his approval more and more.

Glaucon

Another possibility - minor time skip into Kimmy working for Devlin, but before anything more's happened between them. I could see that working narratively.

Glaucon

last time was also an end of the month too - might be KT feels generous around the time Patreon's about to process the monthly payment - hey I can dream :P.

Anjali

So she's still not said yes to the job yet. Come on KT don't make us wait more!!

Chinookfan72

As I’m bored and I don’t know when KT is going to release the next chapter, I’m want to give my predictions for where I see the rest of this book and the next one going (knowing full well I’ll be wrong). 1) As noted above I don’t think Devlin and Kimmy are going to have full on sex. I believe Devlin will make Kimmy come with his hand (hopefully more than once) and she will return the favor with a blowjob (will start as a handjob, but she’ll get curious). 2) Kimmy will go home and talk to Josh. Ultimately I think this book is going to end on a cliff hanger revolving around the job offer. I’m not sure if Kimmy and Josh will talk tonight, or if she’ll wait for tomorrow, but I expect the book to be over in a chapter or two. 3) Book 3 picks up where book 2 left off.. Ultimately after a lot of back and forth and promises by Kimmy, Josh will agree to her taking the job. 4) within 48 hours Kimmy and Devlin will have their first full on sexual encounter. This will depend on when Kimmy and Josh talk about the job.. I’m betting on them talking tonight, so my guess is she’ll call Devlin and let him know tomorrow, then on Thursday he’ll surprise her on Thursday at the apartment. Kimmy will try and deny Devlin like she is now, but ultimately he will succeed.. and I’m hoping she ends up in the lingerie that was supposed to be for Josh. 5) Josh saying Amy is still in town for a week is actually true, and when Kimmy calls to tell her of the job Amy gets Kimmy to agree to drinks on Saturday... unbeknownst to Kimmy, Amy let Devlin know about the plan... Amy will pick Kimmy up and take her to TO, and proceed to get them both drunk enough so neither can drive back to Ajax. Kimmy will call Josh and Amy will convince him it’s innocent. Once that call is over, Devlin shows up and in the end there is a threesome.. 6) Josh is gonna continue to snoop and possibly go to TO to find Kimmy lying (there will be a lot of circumstantial evidence but no smoking gun). Ultimately Book 3 ends on the day before Kimmy starts the job as Josh continues to question if Kimmy is cheating and Kimmy is questioning if she can ever actually resist Devlin’s advances and is thus questioning if the job is right for her.

Chinookfan72

the last time KT provided two chapters in a day she followed up with two more the next day. I’m not sure they’ll be that quick, but I’m holding out hope. It’s not looking too good for you at the moment, but I’m still leaning towards no penetration, unless they go to a motel.. I can’t imagine they’d have full on sex in a car for their first encounter.. That being said, I think Kimmy is going to go home well satisfied with a stomach full of Devlin.

RCH

Only down side to two chapters is it may take more time too see how far Kimmy goes in the car. I could still win this! No Devlin sausage it's meatless Tuesday!

RCH

Artfully done! Just went from blue balls to purple! If I have a stroke it's KT's fault!

JamesIsAsleep

Chapter 11? (!!!)

TF

Had to look them up: 1. Limbo, 2. Lust, 3.Gluttony, 4.Greed, 5.Anger, 6.Heresy, 7.Violence, 8.Fraud, 9.Treachery. Definitely indications of 2, 4, 5, 9 but I’m not sure how 1 and 6 could be incorporated. 8 suggests interesting possibilities—maybe Devin’s big business is based is an international Ponzi scheme. Gluttony, not so interesting. But no doubt you have your own version in mind, ha.

Chinookfan72

agree on all accounts.. These chapter’s were hot and now the wait, which is usually tough, is going to be near unbearable... and I’m glad you emphasized the at least part on the number of circles... There seems to be so many directions and worlds this story can got that I hope it goes on for a long long time... At this point if KT said she is bagging all her other series to focus solely on this one I would not be upset.

Glaucon

ps hoping for nine circles of hell AT LEAST :P

Glaucon

Another two excellent chapters! Oh damn, it's between chapters like these that the waiting's especially tough! Seems like the shape of the series is beginning to take form - but there are still more questions and unknowns than I usually have, which is fantastic! Can't wait for the next entry!


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