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(Complete) Devil In The Waters, Book 2, Chapter 11
🕑 Added 2020-01-31 18:27:53 +0000 UTCSteve was on a solo mission, laying down an Urzikstan killstreak, Meyer standing behind the couch leaning with both hands on the back and giving unheeded advice. Josh was in the kitchen grabbing beers for everyone. He popped all three tops, eyes turned down waiting for his phone to display Kimmy’s current location. Old habits die hard.
And yes, there Kimmy was, roughly in the same spot the last time he’d checked. Right by the Jumpstart Complex. What the hell was wrong with him? Why was he so convinced something was wrong?
Oh, probably because everything that has transpired up to this point. You remember Devlin taunting you, all that shit . . .
But it didn’t amount to anything, did it? Kimmy was at the gym. This primordial worry, a premonitory sixth sense that was wrenching on him—it was just lying to him. It was nonsense fabricated by years of youthful torment at his ripening age when he was most sensitive.
You can see her pinging blue dot right there, Josh. And Kimmy would never cheat on you. You know it.
Meyer slid into the kitchen on sock feet, moving quiet. He eyed Josh, gave him a wink, then grabbed another bag of chips off the counter. He held them softly between both hands like he didn’t want to crinkle them and make too much noise, coming to stand next to him at the pass-through, both of them watching Steve light up four terrorists with his modified M4A1.
Meyer said, “That’s not really a thing, is it?—what he said.” Meyer nodded his chin out toward Steve on the couch.
They both looked down at the phone, the obvious map showing its throbbing blue radar. He swiped the screen away, turned his phone over.
Meyer said, “You’ve gotta be kidding. Is it really a thing?”
“No,” Josh said. “It’s not. But it gets in my head sometimes because the guy she fought with was this guy that I hated in high school. Shit, he hated me more, that guy . . . not just in high school—all through public school, too. He’s a real asshole.”
“Kimmy wouldn’t do . . . that.”
“I know,” he said, “the guy just gets in my system.”
He considered divulging more, but there was too much shame involved. Devlin taunting him, coming in the tent and showing him his erection . . . He didn’t like the retelling of that story. Didn’t like how it framed him as this passive loser. Besides, it was crazy because Meyer was right.
Anything Devlin told you was a lie.
Just lay low, don’t fight back, keep it to yourself. Devlin will move on to something more entertaining if he can’t get a rise out of you.
Josh passed Meyer his beer, took his and Steve’s, jabbed the neck of his bottle against Meyer’s saying, “Let’s just drop it. You’re right and I know you’re right. It’s not about kimmy, it’s about high school . . . and that was a long time ago . . .”
***
As Devlin’s fingers rhythmically thrummed between her legs, the touch driving her wild, she dug her heels on the footboard, pumping her hips against his teasing, her body hungry for deep penetration. She sighed and gasped, the whole while a soft wet clicking from between her legs. A puffy cloud of condensation filmed across the passenger window; out the windshield oblivious traffic hissed left and right.
She gasped and moaned with his ministrations; every time the need grew great it was as though Devlin knew it, pushing two fingers deeper inside, giving her what she need when she needed it. It was like sex. His hand large, two combined fingers as big as an erection.
While he pleasured her, she’d worked her left arm into an awkward fold, and her hand up the inside of Devlin’s thigh. She could feel the muscle under the wool fabric, the hardness of his long legs, her wrist now bumping against a softness. That would be his scrotum, bundled between his legs. A quick elbow jabbed up, and she was able to put her hand on it. Could feel now the softness in her clutch, not pliable really, but two moveable objects within. His naked scrotum would fill her hand.
Her wrist bone detected his hardness.
“Oh God,” she sighed, knowing how wrong this was, knowing how bad; but it wasn’t the worst thing. As Devlin said, everybody messes around, and this was just that: messing around. Playing. Just a little pleasure. Maybe some unfinished business . . .
His fingers moved faster while she squeezed his balls. Her breaths came in quick darts, soft whisk-whisking like someone tearing newspaper in short starts. Devlin grunted in her ear, going in time with her breathing, like they were syncopated together, doing this thing with each other. Quick wrist flip, and her hand landed across the long hard shape of his penis inside his pants.
“Oh my God,” she whispered, “God, you’re so huge.”
His cock was bound under the fabric, rising from the softness of his scrotum in an arc over his hip bone, the end of it extending beyond. She stroked her hand awkwardly, not able to reach the tip, the part she knew would feel good for him. She scrunched closer, but the console prevented it, jabbing a white line of pain across her ribs. She brought a foot up, resting the heel of a sneaker on his burgundy leather bench seat, spreading her legs wide for him.
“Deeper,” she told him, and he leaned over her, his cheek pressing her temple, stubble scratching, the smell of sandalwood and pine flooding her nostrils.
Arm hooked over, now instead of teasing he was driving those fingers in and out of her, hard and fast. She gripped his hardness mid-shaft, squeezed, not able to even get a grip on it. It was too large, constrained by the bundled fabric at his fly. And now all she could think of was the sparkling lights behind her eyes, a whirring, whooshing sound in her ears. Her hips drove up and down autonomously, her body knowing what it wanted.
“Yes, yes, oh yes,” she gasped and cried, the wet click clicking coming faster and faster and faster . . .
It finally got her over. She drew in a long swishing breath, thrust down with her heel and drove her hips and ass right off the seat. Devlin plunged as deep as his fingers would go, curled upward, prodding her front wall and setting off the liquid trigger that had her bucking. She twisted and writhed, tried to tear at his big hard cock but ended up with a handful of his inside pant leg instead, crying and wailing and fighting at her own lips to pinch off the loudness of her satisfaction.
Then that parrot-miming urge to pee was letting go, miming now the act of flux. She looked down, as the heel of Devlin’s hand wiggled and jiggled, his fingers deep inside her. Wetness squirted and spritzed around his hand.The sight of it, the sheer lunacy of what she did mated with the visual representation—a man’s ejaculate but from her own feminine body—drove her even higher. Her eyes went dim and gray, like standing up too fast. Sound closed off, and she was cocooned in cottony silence. All focus pointed on the sheer oceanic ecstasy between her legs.
“That’s it, come, come for me,” Devlin growled, each word emphasized as he jabbed into her deep. “That’s fucking it . . .”
He left her gasping; she kicked her heel out and collapsed noodle-like in his seat, his hand still inside her yoga pants. Her stomach heaved in and out, his fingers slowly pushing out of her body with her tightness; the wet giving no grip and expelling the large intrusion. Devlin let them slip, brought them out of her then massaged them on her clit, going clockwise in hard circles. Each time around got her jumping and hitching breath, her knees going up, a wild tickle racing through her brain. She started to laugh, closed her thighs against his hand.
They sat like that for minutes, his hand clasped between her legs and hidden inside her yoga pants, her laying there accepting what she’d done. For the second time, she’d allowed Devlin Stone to make her come. And here it was: world without end. No doomsday, no hand of God coming down to extinguish her. Traffic still passed left to right; oblivious. Nothing changed.
Just enjoy it.
She laughed again, still panting, trying to gather herself now. She tidied her hair, adjusted her top, both of them checking at the same time and finding her nipples still pressed out the sweater. They shared snickers.
“You’ve had some night,” he said.
“Yeah, I have,” she laughed, still smoothing her hair.
“This is what I mean, Kimmy. You’re going to take the job. We’re going to have fun. You’ll see . . .”
“Uh-huh,” she said, still looking out the window, her mind compartmentalizing her behavior. Putting things in boxes like Marie Kondo would do. This would be a box hidden within a box hidden within another box in the back of a drawer in a dresser in the closet. Something real, but something secret.
She caressed Devlin’s hand now, still half tucked inside the front of her tights. She rubbed her thumbs on the veins across the back of his hand, tickled her fingers up beneath his shirt cuff, squeezed. Head rolled his way, she caught him staring at her profile, devilish smile poking up one half of his mouth. She whispered, “Are you going to take it out now?”
Together, she and Devlin got his fly undone, but his erection was too long to come out without unbuttoning his pants and undoing the belt. With the fly of his pants flapped open, he tugged down the front of his underwear, brought out his huge cock. It stood upright for half a moment, then fell heavily away to his left hip. She leaned over the console, her shoulder rubbing his arm, hand slipping up the inside of his thigh.
“I want to see it,” she said, a certain comfort now in accepting the truth. She did want this. What was she going to do, fight it forever?
Devlin began unbuttoning his shirt, and she ran her palm on the hot sticky belly of his erection. Ran it from the base where it poked up from the humped out waistband of his underwear, reaching across to get to the tip. It was twice as long as her open hand. Even near the head, she almost couldn’t close her fingers around it. She had long fingers . . .
She stroked downward, gripped the base and angled it up right. “God, it’s so huge,” she sighed, truly marveling at his endowment. She’d held it before, saw it briefly, even been presented with it in her hallway—but had never kept her eyes on it, never enjoyed exploring it.
It was more than twice as long as Josh’s, and so thick she didn’t know how he could have sex with a girl. The base of his cock was a veiny trunk she couldn’t grip around, her fingers and thumb an inch apart. “So big . . .”
Devlin opened his unbuttoned shirt, and she let his cock fall back against his hard hairy stomach. Now her hand stroked the angled edges of his muscular midsection. His skin was warm to her touch, lightly furred, all angles pointing toward the tight slit of his navel. Devlin worked out a lot. His body was incredible. Her hands stroked up, his cock riding over the back of her hand until she went to his chest, felt the muscle there, swirling around in big circles, thumb plucking at his nipples.
She said, “Tell me what you want . . .”
“Right now? . . .” He put a hand to her cheek, and she leaned into it, let him cradle her face. He stroked her lower lip with his thumb saying, “I want to come in your mouth.”
She hid her face away, stifling a bawdy chuckle. She thumped her fist onto his hard chest. “You’re such a pig.”
“Come here,” he said, weaving fingers through her hair, gripping it tight, forcing her to face him. “You have a perfect mouth. I love watching it when you talk. You won’t let me kiss it, but I want my cock in there.” The index and middle finger of his other hand pushed on her lower lip to get her teeth apart, and she allowed him to slip them into her mouth. She accepted the pads of his two fingers forcing over the slick curve of her tongue.
Now she was flooded with the smell of her own sexual arousal. These were the fingers he’d fucked her with. She sucked them.
Instant revulsion hit her, her stomach rolling over, flinching like it wanted to get away. Lurid awfulness of what was happening making her heart beat harder than ever. Her breath came through her nose in snorts.
She let him fuck her mouth now with his two big fingers. Tasting herself, smelling herself. Hating this, but liking it, too. Loving it. This was something Josh would never do. Something she’d never want him to do. But she loved it from a man like Devlin and she couldn’t help it.
She brought a knee up and over, shifting and pivoting in the seat, getting on her knees. She put her hands on him, one on his chest one on his thigh to steady herself, then leaned over the console. He supported her with his large hands, holding her in place while she got comfortable, kissing his chest as her hand stroked his cock.
“Yeah, you going to suck it?”
“Yes,” she whispered across his chest, watching the hairs bristle with her soughing admission. “I’m going to suck it . . .”
Her hand stroked down the base, then slipped underneath his underwear like he’d done to her. She found the hot sticky abundance of his huge scrotum, squeezed, felt his big testicles roll in her grip, one of them squishing out, its weight against the inside of her thumb. She kissed the underside of his cock, pressing her lips on the spot just below the arrowhead chin. With her left hand, she ran the palm over the muscles of his stomach, used a knuckle to lever upright his long shaft. It was lit in the light from his dash, its ripe edges gleaming, so outrageously large.
She tongued the glans, bathing it with the flat of her tongue, the point then tickling at the slit, angling her head to lick down the underside. It got Devlin groaning. He still held a handful of her hair, his grip tight, occasionally tearing small stitches of pain behind her ear . . .
Comments
Chinookfan72
sI’m in the same boat..This story is so good, and so is the speculation in the comments.. As for Josh I’m not sure I see him with Karina specifically, but if him and Kimmy don’t work out then I’m all for him finding someone else.. As far a a BTB, I’m not a fan. If she were to fall for Devlin and then he dump her that’s fine, but I can’t see her doing anything that wouldn’t allow her to get back on her feet in short order.
Tim ziegler
Chapter 12 just showed up in email stayed 10 minutes than disappeared their is a I can’t SPOIL IT
Wess
Oh yeah, and I am now checking Patreon 3 times a day for next reveal. I may have a problem. So damn good though.
Wess
I like the dark stuff too but if it gets too dark I still want Josh to have Karina (maybe her other relationship ends?) She could be his Keely. He can move on knowing Kimmy will get what she deserves. Not quite a BTB but maybe a scorch?
Tim ziegler
Didn’t Kimmy say she was also bullied by girls in school?
Chinookfan72
I’m starting to look at this story like moves on a chessboard.These first two books, and I’m hoping the next one, seem to be all about setting up the game and getting the pieces in the right spots so the game can begin. From there I think we’ve analyzed the initial moves each of the main characters can make, but what has be most interested now is the what moves the characters will make in response to those initial moves.. For instance, If we do get a story that is inline with the original story synopsis where Kimmy think’s it’s an affair, but Josh is being kept up to date via Devlin’s harassment. Then how is Kimmy going to react when she inevitably finds out about Josh knowing, but not confronting her or trying to stop it? Is she going to call it off with Devlin for being so mean to her husband, or is she going to double down Devlin because the fact that her husband is so passive makes her lose respect for him? I think it would be interesting to see Kimmy get to a point where she too is humiliating Josh. It would have to start slowly, but I think it could end up in some very sexy and dark places.
RCH
There is an old tale of a wealth squire or such that admires the work of a lowly boot maker. In his desire to help he keeps ordering more and finer boots from the boot maker. In the end he is responsible for the demise of the boot maker. The squire enters the shop and find the boot maker has passed. The cause was such dedication to his craft that he worked himself to death. On the bench beside his body is the final order of finely crafted boots! KT don't let us over work you!
Chinookfan72
Good points all around. If Josh agrees to allow Kimmy to work with Devlin, with his current trust issues then he must be some sort of masochist unless he actually does have a cuck fetish. Because both Glauc and TF are right, regardless if Devlin continues to explicitly humiliate Josh or not, Josh’s mind is going to fuck him everyday and twice on Sunday. Personally, I want to see Devlin continue to humiliate Josh, but in a more artistic manner than just telling a Josh what is happening. For instance if you take TF’s scenario, but instead of the call happening at desert, what if it happened right before the car gets there. It’s an “emergency” so Kimmy has to ditch Josh and Devlin comes and picks her up. later Devlin could text Josh about how he can take Kimmy away any time. He doesn’t even need to mention the sexual acts they did (I’d very much appreciate at least an allusion to them though) because Josh’s mind would go there on its own. if Josh truly doesn’t like his wife cheating on him, and sticks around for other reasons, his life is going to be hell for sure.
TF
Yeah, you are probably right. But there is another aspect to Kimmy taking the job. It won’t be 9 to 5 and she will be traveling overseas once a month probably for a week (13.5 hrs to China). The position will always be demanding attention. So here’s Josh with his job, a few friends, X-box and beer with a wife he hardly sees and with plenty of time to think. So even if Kimmy never fucks Devlin (thereby disappointing most readers, ha) there’s going to be a lot of strain. Say Kimmy is feeling guilty and organizes a date night…nice clothes, hired car, fancy restaurant. It goes well, they interact like they used to and are having fun. Dessert arrives and her phone buzzes. “Sorry, got to take this,” she says. 15 min later when she returns to the table Josh is in a mood and it’s downhill from there. The prognosis is not good.
Chinookfan72
Karina is the biggest wild card in the entire book at this point.. How KT includes her in the story is one of the things outside of the sex that I am looking forward too... Does she stay out of it, spill the beans, or end up corrupted like Kimmy? All seem plausible to me at this point. Amy seems more straight forward (at least for now)... she is Kimmy’s devil on her shoulder and as such I think will be used to help further Kimmy and Devlin’s bonds. I still think the next book will include a threesome with Amy... I’m not sure how much she’ll participate in it, but I can totally see a scenario where Devlin and Kimmy hook up for the first time... Afterward Kimmy assures herself that it was a one time thing and it’s out of her system. Amy will get Kimmy to come to Toronto for drinks to celebrate the new job.. They’ll have too many for Kimmy to drive home, Amy will help Kimmy convince Josh that staying in Toronto is best. Once they are done talking to Josh Devlin shows up (all planned perfectly by Amy)... They go to the room and they all start playing... Amy eventually extracts herself and watches the two of them go at it like the puppet master she is.
Donkatsu
Excellent points from both of you. KT will need to give us additional data and perhaps we can set up a shared drive and run the calcs on Excel (should not need Mathematica, I think). If Kimmy comes back with a splinter on the bottom of her foot from kicking Devlin’s burled walnut dash in passionante, would that be a hint for Josh or would Kimmy just be able to tell a story about the wooden planks in the sauna? Will Devlin dock her first paycheck to pay for the dash (likely to be in four figures for that model) or will his magnanimity triumph?
Chinookfan72
yeah we can’t really say how good she is at her job since we’ve never witnessed how she works. However, as someone who has worked in banking in southern california and has witnessed how weary the asian community is from outsiders... I can say that I have no doubt having Kimmy at the company will open more doors for Devlin’s business. From there she just needs to be competent to be very successful and I don’t see why she can’t be at least that.
RCH
I can see Karina maybe having her own relationship crisis and possible spilling the bean on Kimmy. Misery love company! So far Josh fantasy is in a infancy stage he hasn't come to terms with it yet. It's been a crutch or a tool he's used to get through performance issues. Amy may jump in at any point as she is still in country.
Chinookfan72
well said a Glauc, I should have made option C wider (ultimately option C is Josh finding out but not stopping it or removing himself from the situation, and thereby allowing it to continue) wether he likes that it’s happening or not... I think you are spot on in regards to torment as well. I think both Kimmy and Josh have a lot of torment in their lives coming up. And by no means to I think the process is going to be quick and easy, as ultimately that is going to let the story continue for as long as it can.. If all the road blocks and drama is removed, it becomes a pretty boring story regardless of how hot the sex is...
Glaucon
I think that, if Kimmy starts working for Devlin, Josh won't need any more active hints or teasing from Devlin for his imagination to run wild and become deeply jealous/suspicious.
Glaucon
So, to get revenge on Kimmy cheating on him, he has Karina cheat on her boyfriend?
Glaucon
Personally, I side-eye Devlin's assessment of Kimmy as some sort of legal/corporate wunderkind, but I try to keep my professional opinions away from my enjoyment of fiction!
Glaucon
I think it's also possible that Josh eventually finds out and is unable to stop it for various other reasons, not solely due to his wanting it to continue. I think it's also important to keep in mind that the whole process will likely be longer and way more complicated. It's almost the end of book 2 and Kimmy and Devlin haven't even had sex. There are many phases Josh can go through (denial, bargaining, anger, depression, acceptance maybe :P). I think there's a good chance of the emphasis being on Josh's torment over his enjoyment, even if there is a degree of that too.
Chinookfan72
for sure...Kimmy reaction to what she finds out could send this story in all sorts of directions.
Chinookfan72
RCH, I figured as much, but I just wanted to keep the convo going cause it was an interesting one. Completely agree with regards to length being an issue, and if it were real life I’d assume she wouldn’t. That being said literary vagina’s seem to be somewhat more accepting than real life ones. Personally I don’t think they are going to fuck in the car because it’ll be their first time. My prediction on Devlin and Kimmy fucking is Thursday... I’m thinking Kimmy goes home tonight and tells Josh about the job... It initially doesn’t go so hot, but it gets resolved over dinner tomorrow. Kimmy will let Devlin know she is taking the job tomorrow night, and Devlin will text Kimmy he’s coming over the following day to celebrate.. They will have the first round she won’t take it all the way, but she’ll want to prove to Devlin she can take it all so the second time she’ll get it all the way in.
TF
Thanks. A lot depends on Kimmy's reactions, too. But agree that your C gives the longer story and, given the hints of Josh's arousal at the thoughts of Kimmy with Devlin probably is the likely path.
RCH
Devlin maybe smart and stop taunting Josh directly. He is undermining Josh if Kimmy takes the job. That alone creates a weird dynamic all on it's own. I can see this going on and Josh chooses to believe Kimmy wouldn't cheat on him. I think it could take the path of every thing settling in and the bank accounts is growing. Josh, is embracing his secret cuck fantasy. Kimmy is enjoying her success and power. All is fine and good until some slip up happens. Josh, is faced with some compelling evidence that Kimmy is cheating. How's it goes is up to KT.
RCH
Chinookfan72, I have a sore on the inside of my cheek from my tongue being so firmly planted there when I wrote the above. While it maybe possible for Devlin to force it to the hilt it will be uncomfortable for Kimmy until she has time to adjust. Like any set of muscles the vagina will stretch to accommodate a wider range of width and additional flexibility. Stretching out muscles doesn't necessarily mean a loss in tightness that is more a muscles tone issue. Width is less of an issue for a woman to accommodate as she is built to stretch in diameter for birth. Length is a bit of a problem after a point as it can be painful because there are things in the way. Sexual position may help in eliminate the discomfort from deep thrusting. If Devlin and Kimmy go for full intercourse in the car it will be a bit difficult to get balls deep as you say just do to the limited space. I have stated before that one of my wife's lovers was of good length and it took awhile before her discomfort from deep thrusting disappeared. He moved in with us for about a month before going in the military. They went at it like rabbits 2-3 times a day. Prior to this they had been getting together once or twice a week over the course of 3-4 months. Around the second week she realized the discomfort had disappeared. Not all women can handle deep thrusting.
Tim ziegler
I’d like to see Josh hook up with Karina for payback.
Chinookfan72
I think it’s likely Josh leaves in the end cause he’s had enough... If that is the case I don’t see him leaving soon though as that would probably draw the end of the story. Other partners are possible for sure.. This wouldn’t be the first story in the genre where the wife goes and works for the bull and the bull uses her body to secure business... I doubt KT will go that way though. Devlin seems to want Kimmy to work for her because of her qualifications and he seems to respect her too much to pimp her out. That being said I could easily see a threesome with Amy and Karina.. Amy is obviously friendly with Devlin and the three of them were in a situation in high school so they could relive that night and this time a Kimmy can participate instead of just watch... Karina is more tricky, but ultimately Kimmy needs dirt on her to make sure she stay’s silent (even though a Devlin is already telling Josh everything so it doesn’t matter).
Chinookfan72
Lol RCH.. looks like KT needs to provide much more data... I think simple cylinder equation is close enough approximation given we aren’t tryin to find actual volumes but yet a ratio of Devlin’s volume to Josh’s. Utilized volume would be an interesting calc too, but the question at hand is how much bigger is Devlin’s penis, not how much more will Kimmy feel... The visual to me matters more because that is what Kimmy will think she’s getting (even if he can’t fit it all in)... Also something tells me Devlin is going to be an amazing fuck... It’ll take a while, but Kimmy’s going to be determined to take that cock to the hilt.. Before the end of the first session Devlin is going to be balls deep in Kimmy, making the utilization factor moot.
Chinookfan72
TF, that would be a highly likely scenario if Devlin doesn’t continue to try and humiliate Josh... However, if we go by how KT pitched us the story (a high school bully who hooks up with a guy’s wife after a five year reunion then insinuates himself into their life, working one against the other, tormenting the husband, taunting and humiliating while he rocks the wife’s world, the whole while her thinking this is a secret affair she hates that she craves, meanwhile hubby knows everything that’s going on. High humiliation) plus what has already transpired that you’ve noted and say it’s highly unlikely Devlin doesn’t continue to humiliate Josh along the way with notes about what Devlin and Kimmy have been up too. As the pitch insinuates Josh isn’t going to be in the position to put his head in the sand, or be unaware of the wife’s transgressions like the tow truck driver in Six Weeks. Instead, there are three main ways this story can go (each of the main ways have multiple variations for how they are resolved). a) Devlin gives Josh just enough info to fuck with him, but not enough to outright prove the affair and Kimmy is able to continue to lie so Josh doesn’t know for sure... Josh’s paranoia continues to grow and he continues to track and spy on his wife hoping to catch her in the act...Eventually he does catch her and then the story resolves itself. b) Devlin’s information is enough for Josh to believe Kimmy is cheating.. He confronts her and lays it all on the line and the story resolves itself. c) Devlin’s information is enough for josh to believe Jimmy is cheating, but Josh realizes (wether or not he actually told Devlin his fantasy at the reunion) that he gets off on his wife sleeping with other men. Josh then accepts the fact that Kimmy is cheating internally, but doesn’t confront Kimmy (doesn’t want to confront Kimmy for fear of losing her, and doesn’t want to admit what he’s into etc.) Josh spies in hopes to actually catch them in the act b3cause he desperately wants to see it live instead of just getting the recap from Devlin. to me A seems unlikely. Josh already has his spidey senses tingling regarding Kimmy cheating so I don’t think Kimmy would be able to keep up the lies for this story to last very long. A also seems inconsistent with the KT’s story pitch. B also seems unlikely... While B would be the most true to real life for most people, it makes for a very short story and given the feedback here in comments we all seem to like the story too much for it to end quickly.. This leaves option C as the way I think the story will unfold. Option C allows the story to continue for a long time, and allows KT the most options, in my opinion.
Tim ziegler
Not crazy about the cheating,Devlin said traveling with others multiple partners?KT has written books where hubby leave after he’s had enough Cherry Blossoms!
TF
Not being all that familiar with the cheating/cuckold side of this genre, I wonder if someone might comment on the likelihood of the following. At the moment, although his 6th sense disturbs him, Josh continues to put his faith in Kimmy not cheating and to trust her (using ‘find my phone’ undermines this conclusion somewhat). Suppose he loves her enough to actually continue to suppress whatever future suspicions he might receive (Kimmy after all is an accomplished liar who seems to think enough of him to hide her cheating) as she takes on the position with Devlin and ‘messes around like everyone does’. If Josh is really strong (some might say weak) this appears to me a realistic possibility. Devlin would probably tire of Kimmy after a while and then Kimmy could put the whole affair in her little box in a box and lock it away. However this would reduce the sturm and drang of the novel so probably won’t happen. And I think Devlin won’t let it. He says in the car ….Josh need never know… but given his in your face bullying at the beginning of this tale, this is more BS. I suspect he’s not going to let Josh not know and, despite the blocked phone, would communicate enough information to torment Josh more. How much of this could Josh take I wonder? And I also wonder what Kimmy’s reaction would be if Josh finally manned up and told her exactly what Devlin was doing to him (them). Would she be so seduced by Devlin’s money and body by then she would laugh at Josh or, having discovered Devlin has so easily led her down the garden path, would she turn on Devlin or do something else?
RCH
Well there are a number of factors to consider here. 1. Are we using simple cylindrical volume calculations? We are talking about an object that isn't round in cross section. It's really two cylinders side by side. Spanned across the top by a straight line. the bottom is a little more complicated. It's another cylinder that lays in the valley between the larger cylinders it's usually of such a diameter that it will protrude 1/3 -1/2 a diameter below the main body. This adds to the overall volume of the main body. 2. We would need to take into account any taper in the main body. Perhaps a to simplify we could average out the peaks, valleys and average out the taper. 3. The head is another variable. Is it an arrowhead or a giant mushroom. Is it covered foreskin would add to the overall volume even when retracted. 4. Curvature of main body. This will further complicate length calculation. 5. Utilization factor. This is a necessary unit in that whatever part is not utilized should not be considered. This factor will probably have a time component as frequent use may allow better utilization of the length. Summery: Looking at the complex shapes involved it would be easiest to measure Devlin's volume using displacement. If we have a cylinder large enough to fit Devlin and fill it with water to the top. When we place Devlin into the cylinder the water will overflow if we capture the over flow it will give us his volume. This method allows us the ability to check the utilization volume accurately. By allowing Devlin penetration into the water to match that of Kimmy's. This will let us know the utilization volume at anytime. Math is for perverts too!
Donkatsu
Of course he will.
Chinookfan72
With Kimmy accepting that she likes messing aroubd with Devlin, my expectations are that Devlin won’t have to surprise Kimmy at the apartment to celebrate her getting the job, but instead she’ll begin to sext with Devlin and they’ll set up a date... Still holding out hope she surprises Devlin with the lingerie she bought earlier, and I believe she will start with condoms, but ultimately agree to allow Devlin in bareback... This one might be a stretch as KT stated Kimmy needs protection for 6 weeks, and Thursday will be exactly one week from when Kimmy started b/c.. but from the interwebs ortho tri-cyclen is effective in as little as 7 days.. Perhaps Devlin will get bareback privileges while Josh is on condom duty for the next 5 weeks?
Chinookfan72
as Kimmy is currently blowing Devlin, I think she is in the perfect position to notice how much more she needs to open her mouth to accommodate Devlin that she does josh.. I’m pretty sure the woman’s wrist estimate for Devlin’s girth was not at full attention, but probably just half chub.
Chinookfan72
the length being twice as long was known from the beginning and the calculation I did assumes that... The part that would change the calculation would be girth. We don’t know what Josh’s girth is so my calc assumed normal girth (this is in as much debate as the average length so I just went with the first number I saw), and Devin was the size of a woman’s wrist ( again used a number I found in the web). Perhaps KT can give us a girth difference in the next chapter and then a definitive calc can be done. if girth is also 2x then Devlin would be 8x the volume.
Donkatsu
It’s not all about Devin’s size, either. Once again KT has gifted the cuckold with a pathetic excuse for a vehicle; I had to look up that model and, needless to say, it was not pitched to the hot guy crowd. How can Kimmy resist Devin when she hears the throaty burble of the SL V-8/12 (how far we goin’ here, KT?) compared with the asthmatic wheeze of the Qashquai. The SL V-12 certainly worked on those gals in “Pool Party” and I’m sure it had ABSOLUTELY NOTHING to do with length and girth. Speaking of which, if we are talking more than 2x on length then the mathematician in the group will have to rework his volumetric comparisons.
Chinookfan72
The anticipation for the next chapter is so high that it feels like weeks since the last chapter came out... KT I have no idea how you are able to get me to feel this way, you must be a wizard....
Glaucon
Kimmy's size talk and fixation are crazy hot in this chapter, 10/10!
Tim ziegler
Just reading Thur and Josh say his dick is a little longer than his I phone mine 6 inches which in every study I’ve seen say that around normal not Devlin but who is!
RCH
If Devlin is smart he'll start dittling Kimmy as she takes him orally. She just needs to swing her legs over and mount Devlin reverse cowgirl. It'll be all about dick she won't be looking at his face well maybe the mirror. I like Devlin need relief!
RCH
BNB I have to agree with you regarding support and the treasure we receive. The treasure is the participation. I when ahead and purchased "Circle One" on Amazon and left a review!
JamesIsAsleep
Lovely read, I can't really add anything to what has already been said. It would be nice to hear Kimmy verbalize what else besides Devlin's member she finds attractive, though I do love how hot she gets over it. If Kimmy sucks Devlin off let's hope she can remember to get rid of Devlin's evidence, lest we have a 'Something about Mary' scenario ... "is that hair gel?"
Donkatsu
When Devin runs for party leader/PM will his campaign book be titled: “Getting to Yes: Lessons from Life, Love, Business, and Politics (Sometimes It’s Not That Hard)” [sorry, my bad]. Great staff, KT.
Tim ziegler
Characters have alway been the most important part of a long series for me,but with Patreon it’s more personal and intense
Chinookfan72
updated my user name here cause I didn’t want my actual name used if I don’t have too..biggest issue I have with using Facebook login. was able to change it on the website though simply enough.
Chinookfan72
thanks James! A broken watch is right twice a day, and I’m pretty sure I’ve made so many wrong predictions about this story that I was bound to get one right...That being said Kimmy and Devlin’s time is not up yet... Based on Josh’s reaction regarding Kimmy being at the gym...Perhaps there is time to grab a hotel room after all...
JamesIsAsleep
I'm talk about the whole shebang, lol
JamesIsAsleep
Jordan - you nailed what would happen in the car between Kimmy and Devlin!
BNR
LoL! (Fan club?)
JamesIsAsleep
BNR for president ...
Chinookfan72
couldn’t agree more BNR! well said.
Chinookfan72
it was always my understanding that burn the bitch has more to do with the ending (meaning the woman is burned in the end and the husband is left better off).. personally I hate those endings. The story doesn’t have to have an emotional happy ending, but I like the story to end with each adult being able to live a happy life going forward (wether with or without their spouse). I especially hate the ones where they turn the wife into a crack whore, or damn near destitute.
BNR
I had to wait for the blood to return! I couldn't think straight! WOW... I can't imagine these last few gift (yes i know we actually pay but they feel like treasured, "No reason, just, I Love You!" gifts.) This book is shaping up to be the Greatest series of all for an author, KT, that is become legendary to me. I am floored with how crazy KT's writing make me for the next bit, and the next bit, and then next! I was very happy when you asked if people who already participated with comments in your blog would support a Patreon. I'm even more pleased to see the response here. And I'm thrilled with these Patreon rewards beyond description! Thank you KT! Keep up the great work! To mirror what other have said, I plan on buying all your Completed works! Even MAGGIE, though I own the individual books. I have to have everything KT MORRISON to be able to read at any moment! CHEERS!
Tim ziegler
Another writer I like is Ben Boswell and he will tell you if the wife is really “screwing over the husband bad it’s a”burn the bitch”book.I think it’s heading way fast guilt is already gone,name change,travel with other people ,buckle up Josh it’s going to be rough!
Chinookfan72
indeed!
Chinookfan72
agreed James.. I think it’s okay for Kimmy to continue to have internal conflict, and she can still play hard to get with Devlin, but ultimately it was nice of her to accept that she is into in the moment (she can go back to conflict once it’s over). I look forward to the time when Kimmy initiates the sex with Devlin... my guess is that will be down the line say after she finds out Josh is into her sleeping around so she stops feeling so conflicted and is also pissed at Josh because Josh never told her so she’s been feeling bad for weeks unnecessarily.
BNR
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK~!~!~!
JamesIsAsleep
I agree with your first favorite part, I was going to comment that it was getting kind of unsettling to keep hearing Kimmy say she "doesnt want it," "hates him," no," "no," "no," even if we know her thoughts contradict them, it hurts my arousal after a while. Feels rapy. Here she gets into it and initiates in some instances, really loved that contrasted with what has transpired previously.
JamesIsAsleep
I especially love (regarding the juxtaposition comment) how Josh is comforted thinking she has her phone with her at the gym and how he has his cousin saying, theres no way she would cheat.
Chinookfan72
my two favorite parts to this chapter are 1) Kimmy beginning to accept this is something she wants and 2) her response of I’m going to suck it... As Glauc said above the juxtaposition between Kimmy and Josh in this moment was great too.
Chinookfan72
god damn what a hot chapter... My theory of regardless of how much KT gives us, we’ll never be happy is being proven by the day... We’ve got the three best chapters of the book so far and yet here I am waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter, and the one after that... Thanks again KT for all you do, I’ve spent a whole lot more money on things far less entertaining than this patreon.
Glaucon
Amazing chapter! Damn, that was good. Love the juxtaposition of the husband worried at home while Kimmy’s asking to see Devlin’s monstrous cock unprompted, clearly getting off on it. Kimmy’s well on her way from loyal wife to size princess to size queen. Possibly even a size empress. There might be a size duchess in there somewhere, too. Boring typo patrol – “giving her what she need when she needed it”
