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Devil In The Waters, Book 3, Chapter 1a (partial)

🕑 Added 2020-02-14 13:55:45 +0000 UTC

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DavidnDaria

I'm happy you think Kimmy's timid. :) We don't think so at all. Then again, you know her better than we do! Then again, you could be entirely tongue-in-cheek writing...dunno. It's not uncommon for high profile women in the States to use their maiden name, especially if they're known to professional contacts. In this case, it's definitely something that tweaks Josh. I guess we'll see.

Wess

I think Josh has a right to block it. Josh knows the big D humped her while hubby snoozed. But then what's the fun in that? I can't wait for her to succumb, forcing serious deceit with Josh and allowing Devlin to humiliate him. Plenty of time for all that while KT fleshes out more details from their past. Lots of fuel for the fire still out there.

KT Morrison

I think Kimmy could be convinced to use her maiden name, but not to drop the Mrs. She wears a wedding ring and all. Devlin has to do these terrible things in steps. Kimmy's a timid little bunny he's luring into a trap (kind of, ha ha) Can't show the snare right away!

JamesIsAsleep

Sure, but why? If the money is good and you trust someone, even if you personally dont like the guy it's, as Kimmy's internal dialogue demonstrated (though obviously she is rationalizing her decision which includes other reasons to be near Devlin, lol), a real tangible opportunity and not a potential one. They're trying to start a family and Josh knows what it could do for them. Just saying it's not necessarily as easy as you say, and I like that drama.

Chinookfan72

I’d say you know more than most, including me. If Ms./Mrs. isn’t usually on a card then I could see him getting tweaked there is any prefix on card at all, but since Ms. and Mrs. are both acceptable for a married person I don’t see how Ms. is more upsetting than Mrs. i suppose it’s a to each their own thing.

DavidnDaria

Tweaked just because it IS neutral. Typically, business cards do not identify marital status, anyway. Kimmy becoming Ms Chang, might really get to Josh. What do I know, anyway?

Tim ziegler

Tell her she can work anywhere but there,I know if I were in a similar situation rolls reversed my wife wouldn’t say no she’d “Hell No”

Chinookfan72

my bad, I always use Mrs. for married and Ms. for single females TIL.. That being said how can a person get tweaked over a neutral term? I do truly think Devlin wants everyone to know she’s married though.. I think Devlin is looking to maximize the salaciousness of his and Kimmy’s interactions at work. I think he wants the rumor mill turning at full bore cause he is looking to cause max discomfort to Josh, and he knows Josh isn’t going to do anything to stop him or retaliate.

JamesIsAsleep

I didnt catch the Mrs. Chang (emphasizing Mrs.) thing, that is a puzzle, I love it! I really enjoy a bit of social dynamic play, Kimmy cant let on to Tami that she has a thing going with Devlin, who in turn likes making Kimmy squirm. Points for making Kimmy blush and making her toss ideas around in her head that Devlin might like her romantically (not saying anything about how true it is, just that she is once again ruminating briefly with those thoughts). I really, really like Josh's struggle, because it feels true to me. A woman that has been truthful is now doing semi-shady activity, and Devlin is saying specific and terrible things that are so counter to the world he knows that believing it just doesnt register. It's very realistic (take a shot if you're playing the TBTH cliche's drinking game). Of course you let her have a job right? How can he honestly tell her that she cant work with Devlin, why because shes going to want to fuck Devlin? How can he honestly explain his fears when he doesnt have proof? I love that drama.

DavidnDaria

Ms doesn't indicate married or unmarried, it's neutral. It may tweak Josh more. So, there you go.

Chinookfan72

Devlin says having the asian last name will help get clients (he’s not entirely wrong), but I’m also thinking he wants Josh to find out as it’s another way to fuck with him. Their is no benefit for her being single for the business , and I think Devlin would rather people know she’s married.. Again to fuck with Josh if the rumors ever make it to him.

Tim ziegler

Mrs Chang man that’s hard!

DavidnDaria

Integrating Patreon and KT'ville, cool! Mrs. Chang? I'm wondering why that? Why not Ms. Chang? I mean that distances stuff further, then again, I suck at this stuff. Happy Valentine's Day, everyone! We're off to see the Wizard! Time for Valentine's Day dinner!

Chinookfan72

I hope the reason for poor Mel’s departure remains left up to the reader to determine for themselves. Devlin told her the job and sex are separate deals, so unless Devlin changes his tune I don’t see her ever questioning her qualifications (what millennial does?)

TF

Hmm, seems like someone was fired to make a place for Kimmy—was he in the way or just not satisfactory? She seems to have her head screwed on right wanting, at least, to keep her ‘messing around’ out of the office but it only took flowers from her boss on the first day to shake her resolution…and immediately suggesting lunch is moving things along. I wonder how long she will continue to believe she got this position for her talent only…looking forward to the developments of this chapter. One small typo I noticed: “is” instead of “his”.

Chinookfan72

KT, can we still expect a reveal regarding Kimmy purposefully leaving her phone in the car during the last episode? Or did you decide to rework that part of the story and we’ll just have to wait until the book is released? I’m good with eitherway.

Chinookfan72

Great start to book 3.. Glad to hear there is a way forward, and I hope this way also provides a way for future episodes as well... I’m a little disappointed nothing has happened for three weeks, but hopefully the Devlin/Kimmy dry spell doesn’t last much longer..

Glaucon

I'll take your stories over dry legal documents any day

KT Morrison

The P&G building I guess is not the same building because my building def has some window walls. Things may happen in front of windows, we will have to see haha.

KT Morrison

This is the series where it's obvious IANAL, ha ha.

Glaucon

We did not have window walls, sadly, windows from about the waist up. Are Kimmy and Devlin gonna get up to something near those windows? ;P

RCH

It's going to be tough on Kimmy to keep from jumping Devlin again. James & Glaucon agree your comments well said. Have to see how thing go now that Josh senses a "disturbance" as Kimmy slides closer to the dark-side. (Keeping my "Star Wars" analogies until Disney contacts me).

Glaucon

Personally I didn't call it that, just knew what you were talking about. 10th floor is basically individual offices rented out by a single office space corporation, mostly a lot of self-employed people in my experience sharing secretaries and board rooms. mostly people renting individual (fairly small) rooms. But I try to forget what I know professionally, or what I might think of Kimmy's qualifications :P, I'm just weirdly intertwined to this particular one (might have gone to school with Kimmy too lol).

KT Morrison

I hear you—and it is going to be dealt with in this book (without saying much more ha ha)

Glaucon

Especially since Kimmy, who went to school with both of them, would be aware of this past.

Glaucon

I am still interested in more detail/texture on what it was like for Josh with Devlin in high school. I think that past deeply, profoundly colours Josh’s entire experience of this, and it would be hard for a guy like Josh to not be reliving that torment when this possible ultimate humiliation is being teased. I feel like it was vaguely touched on in the opening chapter but not much since then. It might be that KT wants to avoid writing about characters as teens that in other scenes are being described sexually, but the interpersonal stuff from high school is formative and overridingly relevant for these relationships. I feel like Josh, fearful of losing what he has now to his worst enemy, wouldn't be able to avoid flashing back to /thinking of other times Devlin took something from him or rubbed in his superiority in one way or another.

KT Morrison

(kidding of course) Y&S is an area I'm reasonably familiar with—it appeared in Cherry Blossoms too—and I just did a search for available office space. I guess that means it's pretty suitable. Do they have window walls? I didn;t mean for it to be the Proctor and Gamble building, so I just called it P&G and thought it would go by unnoticed. But I guess everybody who's familiar with it probably calls it the P&G, don't they?

Glaucon

oh thanks, it's n-hey waitaminute!

KT Morrison

LOL, that's it exactly.

KT Morrison

That's crazy! And no, I'm not stalking you. But I did like that shirt you were wearing yesterday.

BNR

Nice little tickle!

Glaucon

Happy Valentine’s Day, Josh! Holy shit, I used to work on the 10th floor of the P&G Building at Yonge and Sheppard! KT, are you stalking me? Love the angle for humiliation via office gossip – all these young women knowing what’s going on with Josh’s wife. Also interesting – she was willing to go with Devlin’s preferred “Mrs. Chang” I knew Devlin’d pull back a bit – he’s inspired the lust in her and now she can’t give it up. This is basically pick up artist bullshit lol. Typo - “but we should some fit some time in”

JamesIsAsleep

lol at Kimmy talking to Tami, "Hi I'm Kim, I definitely didnt fuck your boss, see my ring?" I haven't finished, just enjoyed that moment...


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