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Devil In The Waters, Book 3, Chapter 1b (complete)

🕑 Added 2020-02-15 21:43:31 +0000 UTC

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RCH

It's the classic advice to deal with a bully (if you don't have the option of eliminating him) is ignore him don't let him know he is getting to ya. Josh isn't dealing with any physical bulling from Devlin at the moment. It's up to Josh believe and give power to Devlin's taunts. By cutting off communications and ignoring Devlin he has lessened Devlin's enjoyment he got out of bulling Josh. Devlin is currently focused on Kimmy. His corrupting of Kimmy is a win whether Josh knows or not. He may get tired of the situation later and start taunting Josh again. For now he will enjoy sending Kimmy home to Josh with a changed perspective on what sex is. Devlin needs to work on sending her home to Josh with sloppy seconds.

Chinookfan72

Hey Glauc I know you are interested in the Josh/Devlin back story. I just re-read chapter 5 of the last book and It seems like whatever happened between Josh and Devlin, Kimmy doesn’t know because Josh kept it to himself.. I missed that originally.

Chinookfan72

Per KT we are supposed to get some more back story on the Josh/Devlin front in this book as well, which should help explain Josh’s hold up.

Chinookfan72

Josh asked Kimmy about the business card in chapter 4 of book 2. He doesn’t believe her explanation, but comes up with his own explanation in chapter 5 which is Josh came over to apologize and offered her a job and left the card to fuck with Josh. He then surmises that Devlin is doing all this cause he has the hots for Kimmy, but Josh doesn’t want to confront Kimmy with what Devlin has told him, because of personal pride issues. He says to himself he doesn’t want to look weak to Kimmy as an adult, and that he’s holding onto a bunch of trauma that Devlin afflicted as a kid that he never shared with Kimmy.

MTO

Clearly,Josh cannot confront Kimmy . But with all the circumstantial evidence of an "affair", how can Josh ignore Devlin directing him to the business card ?

Chinookfan72

I don’t know Tim, Devlin has an alibi for the whole day, and I’d imagine if nothing has happened between the three weeks between book 2 and book 3, then nothing probably happened in the couple hours between part 1a and 1b... probably :).

Chinookfan72

It’s been 4 weeks in the story since Devlin and Josh had any communication, not sure how much more time he needs to give to let things settle.. Heck Devlin hasn’t even tried anything with Kimmy in 3 weeks. If he slows down any further the game would be comatose. And I’m worried the story is going to get repetitive if Josh isn’t somehow keyed into the things that are going on between Kimmy and Devlin once they start back up again. Sure Josh can get tweaked, but these petty grievances aren’t going to inspire Josh to snoop. Instead what we’ll get is more of the same with this chapter, just some internal dialogue. Furthermore, she works in Toronto he works in Ajax, I can’t imagine he’d be able to snoop all that well, and Josh doesn’t seem like his job would allow for multiple hour absences in the middle of the work day. To me the only thing that is going to get Josh to go on his journey is more prodding from Devlin. I’m be surprised if Kimmy’s behavior towards Josh doesn’t change, once her and Devlin start hooking up in the regular, until then though I think she’s going to be able to continue to act the way she has been. As for the historical stuff, personally I hope it’s brief. Half the fun is filling in the details yourself.. As for Kimmy attraction to Devlin what more is needed? He’s physically attractive, rich, confident, and is intelligent enough. Not to mention Kimmy watching Amy and Devlin go at it on at least one occasion in high school so I’m sure she’s had at least some fantasies about Devlin in the past.

DavidnDaria

A LOT!

Tim ziegler

A lot missing between job discussions and restaurant.

RCH

I think that Kimmy still believes she can control the situation. We'll see how well she does with that. She still thinks she hasn't cheated on Josh, just fooled around! She's still on that river in Egypt. I still think Devlin needs to stop with Josh for awhile let things settle. He has Kimmy working for him and we'll see how thing progress at the office. Josh will have plenty of things that will tweak his paranoia. Will there be changes in Kimmy's behavior towards Josh? We've already see her step up her oral game in the last book! A guilt BJ? Things like this could correlated with working late at the office. Josh may start putting the two together. His guilt in fantasizing about Devlin and Kimmy together while getting a BJ from Kimmy will further mess with his head. Why does Kimmy not want Josh to reciprocate after the fantastic BJ? Patterns, will make him suspicious, he doesn't need Devlin taunting to motivate him to snoop? KT indicated in the comments section for 1a she 'll be uncovering more history in this book. Looking forward to that, it'll possible uncover some of Kimmy motivations and her attraction to Devlin.

Glaucon

One quick note - Kimmy isn't capitalized in "kimmy nodded, then looked his way."

Chinookfan72

KT, I’m not buying Kimmy is a timid bunny... She might look like that on the outside, but I think, as Devlin has rightly pointed out, she is a killer.. She just needs the right person and opportunities to draw that out of her. Though I do agree she needs to be lead slowly.. She does still love Josh so she isn’t going to disrespect her marriage too much publicly. That being said I’m looking forward to tomorrow, hopefully Devlin and Kimmy can fit some time in, and fit something else in well. Also, I hope Devlin renews his humiliation efforts on Josh because Josh needs some new evidence to help him along in his journey.

JamesIsAsleep

When Josh said that Kimmy got back on the pill I couldn't help but feel a little disappointed. So when Kimmy gets so enamored with Sophie, the Mr. Burns conspiratorial fingers start involuntarily tenting themselves, "Excellent ..."

DavidnDaria

So, it's all normal, just a little tension at the table... interesting. Kimmy's slick.


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