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(COMPLETE) Devil In The Waters, Chapter 4, Mondays
🕑 Added 2019-11-25 15:19:51 +0000 UTC
The morning had been difficult at first, getting into work and all that was on his mind was Kimmy. There was a sick and sinking feeling in his stomach, a heavy feeling he wished he could shake but was unable. The events of the weekend weighed on him, so did his performance last night, the revelation, too, that Kimmy was looking to conceive again and they hadn’t discussed it at all. Of course he was ready, it was just sprung on him unexpected. Add to that the awkward exchange with his own wife this morning when he was leaving for work. What the hell was that about? He felt like he did back in high school and he wasn’t dating her and he just had that godawful crush feeling. Shit, that’s that feeling in his stomach—that’s exactly what it was like.
Steve was in the office already when he pulled in, parked next to his pickup truck, but he didn’t get a chance to talk until their break at 10:15. So over a croissant he ambled around the subject of the weird weekend he’d had. Steve brought it up first, asking him how his reunion went. He started the story casually, saying how he and Kimmy had fun back at Dalton, how weird it was seeing the old school, how everything seemed so much smaller than it did when he was younger; the place had little of the dread he’d attributed to it when he attended. The dinner had been fine, it was weird seeing all those familiar faces changed by time and maturity. Steve asked how the party at the lake was. Steve didn’t attend Dalton, didn’t grow up in Kingston at all, but over their time at A.J. Swanson Market Research they’d become quite good friends. He’d told him how weird it was going to Tiffany’s cottage because she was the rich girl in their high school, the pretty one, and Steve could commiserate because, hell, every high school had one of those girls in one form or the other. So he told him the truth, said how it was fun. Surprisingly fun. And it had been at first—probably why he felt loosened up enough to drink too much. While he’d been friendly with Tiffany in school (or at least not enemies) there was a certain trepidation dealing with her kind, so when he got there and most of that angst from high school had dissipated there was a noticeable lightening of spirit. Plus, Amy was there, and he hadn’t seen her in so long, and Karina too, who was a friend. Tiffany had left the invitation to her party open to anyone, not a select few. So there were plenty of people he knew there who also weren’t in with Tiff’s crowd. But this is where the story got difficult—but it was also the part of the story he was most intrigued by, and looking for a good soundboard to bounce with for feedback. Only how was he going to relate the part where Devin had come into his tent and showed him his erection? That was way too weird, wasn’t it? What the hell would Steve think of that? And how would he relate what it was that Devin had said: that Josh’d proposed he surrender his wife to the more alpha male and that Devin was there to see it was done. Want proof?—smell your wife’s pussy on my huge dick. Yeah, that would not be said.
* * *
The cafeteria where everyone took their break at Swanson was a cavernous space that could probably seat a hundred people. But for now, the 10:15 to 10:30 break time, there were only maybe forty workers, all in shirts and ties, skirts and slacks, gathered in small clutches at the tables. Josh and Steve had a spot by the towering windows looking over the parking lot, shielded from the sun this time of day by honey locusts that rimmed the walkways outside the building.
Josh delayed for time, wedging the blade of a stainless knife to pry up the top layer of the croissant, drizzled in zigzags with white and brown chocolate stripes. He took the buttery wafer, put it in his mouth.
Steve could sense something was up, putting his bagel back down on the plate and looking at him. “So then what happened?”
Josh said, “These two guys from the lacrosse team, this guy Winston, this other guy whose last name was Zephyr—everybody calls him Zeph—come out to where we’re sitting with bottles of bourbon.”
“Oh Jesus,” Steve said then laughed.
“Oh Jesus is right. So I’m at a table with Kimmy, those two guys from lacrosse, Kimmy’s friend Amy from England, this other girl Stephanie . . . I’m in a good mood . . .”
“I can see where this is going . . .”
“Right,” Josh said raising his eyebrows, looking at his croissant. “So we’re doing shots of bourbon—”
“My stomach’s queasy already.”
“I like bourbon. And this was good bourbon. We weren’t doing shots, it was just going into plastic cups and being sipped . . . but I kept drinking . . . It was really good bourbon.”
“What did you do?” Steve said in a tone that suggested the story would end somewhere embarrassing.
“Well . . . I drank too much.”
“Did Kimmy drink?”
“You know Kimmy doesn’t drink.”
“No, no,” Steve said and was smiling—the smile making Josh feel all right for a moment or two, forgetting that there were elements of the story too terrible to relate.
He said, “Anyway, I drank too much, Kimmy had to help me into our tent. I don’t know what happened after that.”
“That’s it? I thought you were going to tell me you went streaking or something.”
“No, that wasn’t me. A couple guys went skinny-dipping when I was passed out.”
“So you didn’t do anything?”
“No, I just drank too much. End of story. But here’s the thing,” he said now, tongue working around his mouth as he shifted his seat closer to the table. He leaned over, spoke quieter even though there was no one else nearby, and everyone at the other tables engaged in their own stories about their weekend adventures, an incessant murmuring chatter throughout the concrete and glass cavern. “When I wake up, there’s like this big kerfuffle when I go into the house.”
Steve wiped his mouth with a napkin. “What’s a kerfuffle?”
“I go into the cottage, and it’s like Kimmy has been in a fight.”
“Oh shit.”
“Right? Like she’s not even talking to me, but all her girlfriends are around her, and all like rubbing her arms telling her it’s okay.”
“Who’d she fight with?”
“It wasn’t a girl. It was a guy.”
“Oh yeah?”
“This guy she hated back in high school—we all hated back in high school. This guy Devon Stone, his dad owns like this import-export business in Kingston, real hot shot.”
“What’d she fight about?”
“She won’t really tell me.”
“That’s weird.”
“At the party I’m asking what’s up, and everybody’s saying hey just chill out, let Kimmy deal with it, so I do. But I’m like seriously hung the fuck over, man, like seeing double, on the verge of puking, so it’s totally easy for me to lay back and let it all play out.”
“So what happened?”
“Kimmy deals with it. That guy Devin is there, and she goes over and they’re talking it out. I’m standing by trying not to throw up, trying to maintain my dignity, I keep expecting all the pieces to fall into place, you know . . .?”
“What’d she say happened?”
“That’s just the thing. She didn’t say what it was.”
“She didn’t tell you what they fought about?” Steve showed a look of puzzlement—almost disbelief, like he was taking Kimmy’s side already, good old Josh blowing this out of proportion and making it a bigger deal than it was.
“Yeah, I know that’s not like Amy,” he said, “but she was still riled up. We left the party, like right away, she’s saying she’s gotta get out of there, we get in the car and I’m right out, sleeping instantly. I go home, I sleep some more, wake up and I feel better.”
“And you asked what happened?”
“I did,” he said, shrugged and poked the croissant.
Steve said, “She didn’t tell you what happened?”
“She said she argued with him.”
“About what?”
“Politics.”
“Yeah, so they don’t see eye-to-eye. This some rich kid white guy?—I can already see where this is going . . .”
“I know,” he said, shaking his head, unsure of where to take the story next.
Steve said, “Josh, man, she told you what it was. She said they fought about politics.”
“I don’t know about what though,” he said, “because she doesn’t want to talk about it.”
“Maybe she’s embarrassed.”
“I can get that. But of all the people in the world she could talk to, aren’t I one of them? Couldn’t she tell me why she’s upset?”
“I suppose, but I don’t think it’s a big deal—”
“She said they physically fought, too, that she tried to hit him, and he grabbed her arms.”
Steve frowned. “Oh . . . oh shit.”
“See? Holy shit, right?”
“That doesn’t sound like Kimmy.”
“Thank God,” Josh said, laughing now and looking up at the high ceiling. “Thank God, you see it . . .”
“Yeah, but so . . .?”
“But so? . . . She gets in a fight with some guy, she won’t tell me what it’s about?”
“Josh, what are you saying?” Steve held up his hands like the answer was obvious, but he couldn’t believe the implication.
“What?”
Steve said, “She’s embarrassed . . . That’s not like Kimmy at all. Getting in a fist fight with somebody? When has she ever been in a fight? When’s she ever even raised her voice?” Steve took a moment to laugh. “Look, she’s embarrassed, she doesn’t want to talk about it. You could be a good guy and leave her alone.”
“I did leave her alone.”
“Maybe she’ll tell you sometime. It’s Monday, she’s probably still stinging over it, whatever it was.”
“You’re probably right.” he poked at his croissant again, put his cheek in his palm.
“Fuck,” Steve said, laughing now, lighter. “The way you were dancing around it there, I thought you were trying to say something . . . happened.”
“Something happened?”
“Between the two of them.”
Now he frowned. “Do you think that could have happened?”
“No way. That was my point. I was about to slap you in the noggin. If that’s what you think, you’re out of your mind . . . Kimmy’s not like that. She’s just embarrassed.”
“I hope that’s it.”
“That’s totally it. Or, shit, maybe you embarrassed her.”
His stomach tightened at the thought. “You think I could’ve?”
“She said you just passed out?”
“She did.”
Steve looked away, thought a moment. “Maybe that’s part of it. I don’t know . . .” When Steve looked back at him, he was smirking.
Josh laughed, relieved Steve’d meant it as a joke. “Why would you even say that?”
Steve laughed too, said, “Because sometimes I can’t imagine what she’s even doing with you . . .”
* * *
Josh arrived home at his usual time, 5:45. Parked, elevatored up, he trudged to the apartment door, bushed, a terrible cramp running from both sides of his neck down his shoulders. Hangover residue. But he’d made it through the shift at work, and tomorrow was another day.
When he went in the apartment, it was dark.
“Kimmy?”
There was no smell of cooking, and for a moment he thought maybe she was out.
But Kimmy answered then, saying, “Hi, Josh,” her voice coming from the kitchen. He slipped off his shoes, joined her by the fridge, Kimmy putting her phone down. Hand on her waist, they kissed. She asked him how his day went.
“Well, I made it through.”
She asked him how he was feeling and put her hands on his cheeks, the coolness of her hands making him feel feverish. “I feel fine. My back’s a little sore, but I had no headaches or nausea . . .”
“That’s good. You ready for dinner?”
He asked her what she was making, showing a look of puzzlement glancing around the kitchen that had obviously been cleaned and not seen any duty since.
“Dinner’s in twenty minutes.”
Still puzzled, he asked what they were having.
“Your favorite.”
Now it was coming clearer. “Wait a second . . . Bifanas?”
“I called our order soon as I saw you pull into the parking lot.”
“God, Kimmy, that’s great,” he said, “I’m starving. The bitoque?”
“With fries,” she said, rubbing his arm.
Bifanas was a Portuguese place, the bitoque his favorite, a steak and egg dish served with rice and olives, and fries if you wanted. Kimmy asked him if he’d like a Coke now.
He looked down at what he was wearing, said, “I just walked in the door.”
“Go get changed,” she said.
When he gave her a funny face showing her actions were strange, she laughed, came and kissed his cheek. “I missed you today.”
“I missed you too,” he said.
“Your want to play some red Dead Redemption?”
“You going to go to the gym?”
She shook her head no.
He walked down the hall, glancing back to see Kimmy heading into the family room. It was quite the welcome, not completely unusual, but there was still something bothering him. At her studio he stopped; the lights were off, but he poked his head in. On the worktable there was an array of rush grass partially woven, forming the base of the basket, the ends of the grass spread around the base like a child’s drawing of the sun. He went into the bedroom and changed, putting on sweatpants, shorts, and a T-shirt, coming back out to the family room. Kimmy was on the couch, the Xbox turned on, a glass of Coke poured and resting on the coffee table.
He said, “Boy, you’re really going all out tonight.”
She took the compliment, laughing.
“I like it,” he said, “I should get drunk and embarrass you more often.”
“Don’t you dare,” she said and narrowed her eyes at him slyly. With her back against the couch’s arm, she lay stretched out wearing soft cotton capri pants, her legs casually crossed over, feet bare.
He pinched her toe and she smiled. “Sorry about the party.”
Kimmy raised her eyebrows and made an expression like it was all in the past anyway, saying, “I told you I didn’t want to talk about it.”
He offered up: “If I did something really stupid, if I did something that really embarrassed you, you don’t have to spare my feelings. I want to know the truth . . .”
“You didn’t do anything except drink too much and pass out, Josh.”
“You certain?”
She pointed to the floor at her side indicating for him to take his spot where he liked to sit with his back on the couch and play video games. And her request was so inviting and warm, he was quick to surrender all his doubt and hurt, and threw himself happily at her side. He played a few minutes of Red Dead Redemption before the apartment buzzer went off, the Door Dash driver in the lobby. “I’ll get it,” she said, “you keep playing.”
He did, Kimmy paying the guy, taking the bags into the kitchen and preparing plates for each of them then bringing them out to the coffee table. Game paused for the moment, they watched TV while they ate.
After dinner, when Kimmy took the dishes to the kitchen to clean, leaving him to play Xbox, Josh got a text from Devin Stone.
Comments
RCH
Jordan should have been "we're" more aimed at the group. Sorry if you felt singled out there! I love all the ideas and insights that pop up here! Wouldn't it be funny if KT took us down the path "WE" think this is going only to find out it's something completely different.
DavidnDaria
Well, there's something there and Josh is terrified of it. He's been told what happened by Devin. His wife doesn't want to talk about a political argument. If it were a simple political argument, would Devin text her? Would she masturbate in the bathroom? Would Kimmy's friends run interference for her when she was talking to Devin? There is a lot of circumstantial evidence that something other than a political "fight" took place. Then again, what if nothing happened and Devin was just tweaking Josh? You're right, we don't know if anything happened, but it's driving Josh nuts and his wife is not talking. Such actions only fuel suspicion. You're right JW, at this point, it's not a hotwifing story, it's a bullying, perhaps cheating wife story. It's great! I'm pretty certain it will morph.
Chinookfan72
RCH is your comment directed at me or DND? Cause I’m not assuming anything. This is why I said Kimmy is potentially pissing on the relationship. I’m calling it a cheating wife story because of the pitch KT presented (secret affair). At some point Kimmy is going to fuck Devin, and as far as Kimmy is concerned Josh won’t know it’s happening. Wether they have fucked yet in the story is up for debate, but to me that is irrelevant to the point I was making above.
RCH
You're assuming that anything beyond mutual masturbation has gone on! We have no indication that Kimmy had intercourse with Devlin! We're just assuming that happened.
Chinookfan72
Again I’m cool with him spying at some point. I just think it needs to wait until he is morally justified to do so. His wife is already potentially pissing on the relationship, no reason for him to do so also. To me this isn’t a hotwife story. It’s a cheating wife story. The intrigue is the wife’s internal struggle with how she rationalizes her actions. Thus I need to care about her marriage, and for me to do that Josh has to be respectful. In most hotwife stories this isn’t the case so the husband is free to operate in the moral gray area so by all means he could start spying now. Also to me this story ends once Josh finds out, so to allow it to go long I think it’s best Josh goes o a winding investigative journey. Therefore, he can skip all the way to spying.
TF
Good point!
DavidnDaria
Looking at text messages, checking phone calls, unintended/intended eavesdropping, etc., are staples of the hotwife genre. It is just a story, not real life.
Chinookfan72
To me spying, stalking, snooping, tracking etc. are all the same. My point remains the same.
Chinookfan72
If you noticed at the end of chapter 3 KT wrote “Devin Stone: We need to talk” At the end of this chapter it just says Josh got a text from Devin Stone. It’s a subtle difference but one that allows KT an out if necessary.
TF
The difference between the two in intent rather than the action....just saying.
TF
Sure, that's possible. I just assumed when he looked at his phone it read DS. I don't even look at texts from unknown numbers but maybe he does.
DavidnDaria
I don't know what you were reading bro, but I never wrote stalking. I wrote spying.
RCH
It will be interesting to see what transpired to bring about the events that night at the cabin? Kimmy wasn't drunk as far as we know. Devlin was not someone she liked or had interest before. So it will be very interesting to see how it all transpired. Even if Josh gave Devlin the green light in his drunken state Why would Kimmy go along with it? What motivated her to do anything with Devlin? We'll just have to wait to see what kind of cuckold terror KT dreams up. David and Daria love your thoughts above; "Will he wait it out and start to notice the subtle and not-so-subtle changes in Kimmy?" That is always my favorite part of hotwife/cuckold stories is the changes both physical and attitude that happen. Still there is so much to speculate about at this point.
Bwood
This is really outstanding so far. I hope that, especially as Josh and Devin prepare to meet in the light of day, KT elaborates further on what that bullying back in school looked like. High school can be such a weird, traumatizing, formative time, with its caste systems and its casual cruelty. And obviously whatever Devin did left a real mark on Josh. Bonus points if Kimmy was aware of or a witness to the bullying, because it makes what she's doing now that much more of a betrayal and transgression. She says her love for Josh is unblemished and what she's done (doing?) with Devin has nothing to do with emotions, but she's still cheating with someone she knows left him with emotional scars. Besides, it's even more compelling if Josh can't easily accept or forgive what she has done, even if he ends up realizing he DOES have this fantasy/fetish and finds it hot.
Chinookfan72
But without solid evidence why would anyone rationally jump to full stalker status.. seems to be a bridge way to far for me. You are basically saying Josh, who has never had trust issues with his wife, is going to trust someone he hates over his wife. I’m not against stalking at some point, but for now he needs someone else to validate what Devin told him first. Otherwise Josh comes off as weak and pathetic.
Chinookfan72
I don’t even think you need to go that far. We don’t know Josh has his number, just that he got a text from Devin. It could be from an unkown number for all we know.
TF
Thanks RCH. You are probably right and the phone business is just sharing lists from the reunion or the like. With all the still unknowns one tends to grab at clues and blow them out of proportion. Your analysis is persuasive but time will tell...or rather KT.
DavidnDaria
Oh, and not to mention their sex...
DavidnDaria
I think we have baby races going on until that fateful day when Kimmy is discovered. See, this is why I suggested something really unpopular like spying on Kimmy. It will build tension every minute Josh is spying, hoping for that one solid bit evidence he's terrified to find. When he finds it what will he do? Will he wait it out and start to notice the subtle and not-so-subtle changes in Kimmy? They're already starting with Kimmy over compensating, yet refusing to talk about the "fight".
RCH
TF I think that you may need to chalk this up to literary license. Possible it is on both their phone due to a sharing of phone lists from the reunion. The handicap we are all under is we truly are clueless as to what really is happening between Kimmy and Devlin. As I stated before in an earlier post I could argue against penetrative sex. With the only circumstantial evidence and the word of a douche like Devlin we can only speculate on what is going on. Things we know: Some event or activity happened that night at the cabin between Kimmy and Devlin. It's nature was such that she is concerned about her fertility status afterwards. That only means that she got some unwanted sperm close enough to worry her. That does not require intercourse. I argue that there is evidence that intercourse did not take place between Kimmy and Devlin at the cabin. She still would have been sore when she had sex with Josh the first evening they returned home. We are just assuming Kimmy met with Devin during the day Monday. If she did it could have been at a neutral location Starbucks?
TF
So can someone help me out here? I still don’t understand how Stone’s phone number is on Kimmy’s and now Josh’s phone. In the first case, I expect she put it on or allowed him to do so which made me reevaluate my understanding of her (sorry, I’m slow I didn’t think she was in to DS in the beginning) but why would Josh have it? I suppose one could blame it on the bourbon but, really, the guy bullied him in high school and is continuing to do so—it would have taken an awful lot of bourbon in my estimation. Whatever, it’s a good series and I await the next bit…hopefully we will learn what these mysterious texts did.
Chinookfan72
Yep I think we are all in agreement here!
Glaucon
Yeah, that's what I'm saying - the process is slow but the pacing of the FINISHED product is great (even a little fast lol).
RCH
Taken as a whole it's not moving that slow. As Jordan stated it's because it's chapters one... at... a... time... That's not a complaint! Just a perspective changer. Go back and read it as a whole then the pacing is different.
Chinookfan72
I agree with you on why he went in the tent. He likes to bully Josh... But that is the Josh/Devin dynamic not the Devin/ Kimmy dynamic. What I was disagreeing with is Devin controlling Kimmy’s escalation of lust. If Devin is in control of that, then I’d assume he wouldn’t accept anything less than oral, and after the first or second time he’s going to want to. I don’t see Devin in the same light as say Finn in Scream Queens...Finn has managed Libby’s escalation pretty well, but Devin doesn’t seem to be the type to me to keep playing the game unless he’s getting the goods. If Kimmy resisted the first night I don’t think Devin tries the second time. Devin goes into tent because he had already fucked Josh’s wife and now he can mind fuck Josh at the same time. This is why I think Devin was telling the truth in the tent and what Josh was smelling was his wife’s pussy, and therefore they’ve already fucked. But if Kimmy turned him down or stopped at a hand job Devin isn’t going in the tent.
Glaucon
If it was just about sex for Devin, he wouldn't bother talking to Josh in the tent, or texting him now.
Glaucon
Admittedly we're extrapolating a lot from a limited amount of time with Devin, but I want to dig in to why he would come into Josh's tent in the first chapter. You say it's because he's an asshole, which he is, but that's not a motivation. That's an excuse to do whatever he wants. So why does he want to go in there? He wants to hurt Josh. he wants to rub Josh's nose in his metaphorical power (which he literally does by making Josh smell his dick). He wants to make Josh feel small. He's not doing this because he's attracted to Josh sexually. He gets off on the power dynamics.
Chinookfan72
It’s amazes me how each of us can come to different interpretations of what we read. I don’t get any of this from what I think I know about Devin. I personally think it is about sex to him. He’s probably always wanted to fuck Kimmy since grade school and he finally got his chance. Being a grade a asshole that doesn’t care about Josh now he just wants to rub his nose in it, and he enjoyed the first round so why stop.. I can see him accepting a blow job for a while, but I can’t see him ever settling for just a handy if him and Kimmy are by themselves.
Glaucon
Oh I def don't think the pacing of the story is actually slow at all.
Chinookfan72
True, but I’m not even sure this story is slow, just seems that way because we are only getting small pieces at a time. I agree the end product is more important.
Glaucon
It's definitely 100% from the way we're getting it - I hope KT maintains the slower pacing. Sure it's slow, but it's only slow once. If it's rushed, it'll be rushed forever. I care more about the finished product.
Glaucon
cheating partners often overcompensate (with gifts, etc.). These actions make psychological sense to me.
Glaucon
Based purely on what we know about Devin/Devon/Devlin, this doesn’t seem to be about sex for him as much as it seems to be about power and dominance, imposing his will and status on others. This is a game to him. If he just wanted sex there would be easier ways to get it. He’s intentionally involving Josh because the whole point is he’s taking what he wants and there’s nothing Josh can do about it. A cataclysm to Josh’s life is essentially a game to Devin. It’s the ultimate ego trip for him to ruin this happy marriage with his big dick for his own amusement. So yeah, I do see Devin as the kind of guy to draw this thing with Kimmy out long. If there’s anything he’d understand it would be the symbolic language of power. If Devin has Kimmy’s willpower giving out first, if he has Kimmy needy and sucking a cock four times the size of her husband’s (by volume), there’s pretty clear power dynamics there for him and I think psychologically that’s what he’s really getting out of all this.
RCH
Amen to that Josh is trying to ignore what happen at the cabin.
DavidnDaria
Kimmy is really, really defensive regarding that night at the reunion. She's trying to deny what happened yet is turned on beyond belief at what happened. We're wondering if she actually talked to Devlin, Devon/Devin or even Levon... Imagine DeeVON... and they called him DeeVON, and he would be an asshat... Every story in the cuckold/hotwife genre needs an asshat and Devon fits the bill. Josh is afraid of the truth, he wants to know but his not at the very least telling Kim about the confrontation in the tent shows that he's terrified of the truth.
Chinookfan72
So far so good! Also more loose strings for us to debate between chapter releases. The last two chapters have both ended with text messages from Devin.. part of me likes the suspense about what Kimmy was up to while Josh was at work and part of me just wants to get on with it. We are still waiting on the first potential encounter and now a second one.. I suppose we are only 4 chapters in, but due to the way this is released it feels longer. I’m sure the folks reading the completed version in one go would probably like more intrigue than what we’ve been given, but my impatient brain is wanting the good stuff. I do hope we will eventually get encounters between Devin and Kimmy in real time as opposed to flash backs or retelling from Devin to Josh. I just prefer to be a fly on the wall.
TF
dictates (gotta watch the keys ). I like that Josh loves high end bourbon as I do to....albeit I don't do cups full....needs to be sipped!
TF
I'm getting confused. Kimmy's internal dialogue does not match her apparent actions. She has DS's number on her phone, seemingly she has spent the day with him and is now playing loving spouse with Josh. Yeah, hate is an emotion as strong as love but, give me a break, they are not the same. Oh, well, it will evolve as KT's muse dictaa
Chinookfan72
I’m good with a gradual progression, but do you think Devin is the type of guy to take it slow? If it’s going to be slow I think Kimmy will have to control that part of it.
RCH
Now it reads better and clearer. KT your comment above regarding names change it! Devlin is closer to "Devil In". I got the feeling that the Patron was intended to give you feedback and the ability to rework stories accordingly. We didn't sign on with the thought that we would get polished finished chapters. You shouldn't hesitate to rewrite a previous chapter to improve the overall story. View us as your twisted perverse muses.
Glaucon
Well you can still change whatever details you want!
KT Morrison
Yes, and my computer thinks its better too, that's why you see those pop up. Devon, in my head, sounds like duh-VON and not DEV-in, you know what I'm saying? But now I'm wishing his name was Devlin, that's even better.
KT Morrison
You're right—new paragraph I gotta reset my pronouns, especially since I mention Kimmy in the same sentence! Fixed.
RCH
I agree with Glaucon let it be a slow slide with many complications. How stupid am I I just realized you can edit your posts!
RCH
Yea, what did happen? Curious situation we've only seen a glimpse into Kimmy's side. We are almost as clueless as Josh. Our only bit of extra information is her worry about ovulation. KT it's common to see a he reference when it was clearly meant as a she. The last paragraph is it he got a text or she got a text?
Glaucon
I do hope that the encounters between Kimmy and Devin follow a gradual progression – maybe starting with stroking (rationalized as “less cheating”)/oral worship/size fixation, progressing to full on penetrative sex – Devin controlling the escalation and Kimmy’s lust, controlling her through it. To me it’s the dynamic of these characters that makes this series so interesting – it would be great to see a slow burn of Kimmy’s submission to Devin.
Glaucon
Another Devon – honestly though I prefer that construction of the name, feels stronger haha. Also I think “Yeah, I know that’s not like Amy” should be Kimmy, right? And the first red Dead Redemption has a lower case ‘red.’
Glaucon
GUILT DINNER UNFINISHED BASKET Kimmy was busy with something else today… Great suspense, KT!
