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(partial) Devil In The Waters, Book 2, Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2019-12-22 17:28:10 +0000 UTC

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Glaucon

Meanwhile I'm over here cheering for the villains like https://media1.tenor.com/images/bec2096b21d763160dcf531ac2fe4691/tenor.gif?itemid=5498194

TF

Yeah, let's have the victims get some pay back.....but not too soon.

Donkatsu

Whoops! Sorry about the line break. What would be the fun of having these guys figure it out too early? After all, Girls Just Wanna Have Fun. Besides, if all these HS bully victims managed to man up and take action directly we'd be at Defcon 1 in no time. Not saying I want the bullies to win, I just think the guys left behind have to man up differently; stealth and guile can beat might and brawn almost all of the time.

Donkatsu

Maybe Harrison can join Josh in a new story centering around post-HS angst. KT could call it "Clueless."

DavidnDaria

It's not only Devin playing games. Kimmy is complicit. Right now though, Josh doesn't know what to believe. He's got a gut feeling, but he appears to be rationalizing his way through things. He'll get there, he has to! It's a book. :) The journey is where the fun happens in books like these and KT is the best at it, bar none.

Glaucon

There's def some foreshadowing/teasing that path but we'll see where we go!

Chinookfan72

i also agree with Wes and TF. If this were real life he’d confront Kimmy with everything and if their relationship was as solid as it sounded at the beginning Kimmy would likely come clean. However, if that happens then this story likely ends or morphs greatly from it’s original pitch. So unfortunately, Josh is going to have to passively pursue the truth so the story can go on. I know I’ve said this on other posts, but it’s really hard to have the cuckold be an alpha. The only stories like this that are any sort of length are ones where the cuckold isn’t aware of the cheating. (like 6 weeks in winter etc.) Because once they are made aware their actions tend to bring the end of the story.

Sitri

Maybe it's just me but I am hoping the ending is similar to the Losing His Wife series. Basically where the wife gets pregnant by the lover. Lol.

Tim ziegler

I’m so glad some others feel as I do Josh should step it up, even if he gets his ass kicked,it’s his life Devin is playing games with!

TF

Merry Christmas everyone!

RCH

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays! Too!

JamesIsAsleep

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!

DavidnDaria

Daria and I wish everyone, everywhere, of every religion, or those who do not believe, Merry Christmas! May all of you enjoy the holiday and experience the love and joy of the season.

TF

Sorry, I agree with Wess that Josh is weak and obtuse (sort of what I meant by pathetic). He’s no longer in high school and normally should have matured considerably. There are ways to fight that are not physical and this does not necessarily mean engaging with D at all but rather with his wife. If their life together has been as good as implied then once he sobered up completely he should have girted his loins (lol) and simply stated the facts as he knows them directly to Kimmy. I think if she was aware of Devin’s bullying she might have come clean. However, even when he hesitantly broaches the topic in an indirect way and Kimmy fends him off; he immediately backs off apologetically afraid of offending HER. So I’m thinking maybe their relationship has been rather superficial up until now. Of course the story line requires Josh to behave in the manner described otherwise this fascinating tale would already be over.

Wess

And of course the real pay off will be Josh’s realization that sweet Kimmy has a very dark side. I’m in no hurry to get there. Love the anticipation.

Wess

Ok. Obtuse may be a bit strong. But definitely naive. I mean the tent exchange (sorry, never been that drunk), seeing all the women covering something up the next morning and Kimmy won’t talk about it? Devin’s texts with some convincing facts about their apartment? I think our boy has enough for some serious suspicions. But what to do? Guessing KT will keep us delightfully twisting.

JamesIsAsleep

I dont find Josh to be acting particularly weak, I mean the dude isn't a fighter so it's not like hes going to punch Devin into telling him the truth. And besides he has only been led to believe that Kim is a loyal wife, that and Devin has been nothing but an asshole instigator for as long as Josh has known him. All Josh has is innuendos, sketchy behavior, and lies that are obvious only to us who know the other side of this story. I try to think how I would be in this situation, and when Kimmy starts lying like the budding star lawyer she is, is as happy as she is to see Josh, and with the history they have, i think it would really be tough being confident in believing what his intuition is telling him.

Wess

Weak move by Josh. Hope he doesn’t continue to be this obtuse - think Shawshank Redemption. Makes me wonder if Kimmy is looking for as much of an intellectual challenge as physical with Devin. On the other hand I like the slow reveal.

TF

It's sounding like "Portnoy's Complaint" around here--I'll never forget the 'used' liver.

RCH

We're talking Kielbasa Tuesday! Plump and meaty!

Glaucon

Maximum lengthened suspense plz :P. Maximum length other stuff too.

DavidnDaria

Kimmy is getting boned, of course! (How much cruder could I be?) It's tube steak Tuesday at Josh and Kimmy's!

TF

Josh is looking pretty pathetic at the moment. But he got good advice from Amy. Doubt if he will take it. Hope Amy reappears as she is a real pistol! But probably not much chance living in GB. Didn't vote for consulting Amy... as expected just lengthens the suspense...week by week, drip, drip, drip.

RCH

Nice touch KT! What Amy is really saying "Josh you "NEED" to talk to Kimmy". That is my take anyway. I wonder how Kimmy's day is going?

JamesIsAsleep

I like Amy, lol.

Glaucon

That's interesting! In that case I don't know if voting for that option means I'm predictable or just have similar narrative sense lol.

KT Morrison

Don't worry—just stay tuned...

KT Morrison

Total honesty: the passage was written before the poll. I had fingers crossed when I put that up, but had contingencies planned if everyone had a different idea for what Josh would do!

Sitri

Awe man. Was hoping for more "details" from this encounter. Great start to book 2 chapter 1.

Glaucon

KT - I'm curious about your thoughts on this passage as (by appearances) the first section of your writing decided by a reader vote. Or is it too soon to say/discuss?

Glaucon

Real smooth.


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