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Devil In The Waters, Book 3, Chapter 2c (partial)

🕑 Added 2020-02-23 02:00:00 +0000 UTC

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RCH

I would think that Devlin would have a shower in his executive bathroom back at the office. If Kimmy had a change of clothes in her office or gym bag it would be additional proof of her planning to be prepared to cheat again when the opportunity presented itself. Oh wait she hasn't cheated yet in her reality. Being the constant optimums; looks like Josh is in for another killer BJ from Kimmy! There is another option she could just make up a story of how her Devlin and the client had gone on a tour of the ship or something and she slipped in her heals. That is how she got dirty. It depends on what happens next before she gets home. Do her and Devlin go any farther? Then there maybe a need to get cleaned up before she heads home. Don't know what the distances are between home and the offices vs Toronto (I'm a SoCal boy). But are the distances enough that Kimmy may need a stay over to deal with Devlin's impounded freight problem? He gave her a challenge that she will not back down from. Kimmy is going to fix that problem due to her competitive nature. I could see a bonus coming her way when she solves it in record time. I can see this being a central topic if her and Josh go out tonight. I can see her making plans to leave the next day to go to Toronto. Being a greedy fan MORE! WE WANT MORE! You've created a monster KT!

Donkatsu

Maybe Devlin has another cargo container at the port outfitted with a bed and plumbing that was used "in theatre" as lodging for Canadian troops. Kimmy will need to keep a few clothing and toiletry items there. This is certainly going to make the homecoming interesting tonight. "Going right to the gym tonight for a class, sorry forgot to tell you. . . . Oh, this outfit, I've had it in my locker at the gym for months."

RCH

Mind you it is very hot! Kimmy being so excited that she has engorged and opened up!

KT Morrison

Nope that was my mistake! Thank you—fixed now and updated...

RCH

KT the following doesn't read correctly to me: The blood had rushed between her legs; her sex felt heavy with engorged weight, her opening had widened to a yawn in her underwear—she’d never felt so sexual in all her life. Devlin ripped and pulled her underwear down and it is hanging off her ankle at this point. Are you referencing this as a prior event when her underwear were still on? If so IMO you should tweak this as it reads awkwardly. Now it could be that this is Devlin noting this. He observes her state as he removes her underwear? Just a though.

RCH

KT that was very well done! Very hot erotica! I'm imagining the container is full of chemical fertilizer not the organic variety(poop)! Yes, as the others have pointed out these two do need to clean up. Forget the sex the inside of shipping container can be dusty and down right grimy depending on the cargo. Kimmy's cloths and knees are going to be dirty with dust. She can always make a quick stop at the gym. Possibly Devlin isn't finished yet? We'll see.

DavidnDaria

Yep... that's what I thought, too... unless they stop at hotel on the way back to the TO. Maybe their office has a shower? Maybe they just do the deed in the classy environs in which they find themselves at the end of this installment? Maybe not.

Chinookfan72

Holy crap that was hot... I hope he doesn’t stop or takes the party some place else so they can finish before heading home.

Tracey52

It will be interesting to see how well she cleans up to go home. Second I wonder how Devlin will get the photo to Josh?


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