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Devil In The Waters, Book 3, Chapter 14 (complete)

🕑 Added 2020-03-16 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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TF

Thanks for your concern. In a small town in southern Michigan and, although almost everything is closed, the virus hasn't had a big effect. However, not much testing is going on so who knows. Retired so I've been working (!) from home for a while. You are quite right about the world 75 years ago. I had most of the usual (whooping cough (at age 1), measles, chicken pox, mumps and each summer was shadowed by a polio scare (parents scared not us kids). So people have forgotten...hence, the fear forgetting that not everyone will die. After all the human race has survived a long time despite bugs.

DavidnDaria

We're in FL for the winter. Far more infections here than back in MI. Our friend is staying with us while she has to work from home (at least 30 days and they didn't say whose home). We're doing good. We have toilet paper! We have taken all the precautions we can think of to not get infected. It's really crazy. Thankfully, we have plentry of food and tequila.

Chinookfan72

thanks for checking in, I live in a small community in the central part of Washington state. The town only has 4,000 residents and I work remote already so the virus has had little if any impact on me personally.

RCH

CSH not a bad insight. Maybe Karina? Hum... Josh could have witnessed Karina being ravished by Devlin? She is pissed at Devlin because she was just a notch in the bed post! We'll have to wait for KT to reveal her sinister plan!

RCH

Well this is a bit off topic. Just what to see how every one is doing out there? I'm in the Southern California area work for one of the studios. They have sent the majority of the workers home. There is a skeleton crew myself and one other to keep infrastructure going. A few of the show are still posting (editing, sound mixing etc). All production in Hollywood is shutdown or is shutting down. It's very surreal to walk around a facility that normally houses 350-400+ people everyday. Now there is maybe 35-40 including the security staff. It's weird have to re-calibrate and put things into perspective. My parents dealt with Polio and the Korean War. My Grandparent WW2. My great grandparents WW1 and the Spanish influenza. Before that basic sanitation. Dying in your mid 40s. We live in good times. Help your family, friends, neighbors and don't panic! This Corona virus will pass and things will normalize again. Best

Chinookfan72

Because Amy has been trying to reach Kimmy multiple times and hasn’t had any luck so she is giving Kimmy a taste of her own medicine by letting it ring a few times. Also Amy probably wants to seem busy, as in Kimmy is pulling her away from something else.. Lots of stuff go into phone calls these days.

TF

Five o’clock in Ajax was nine o’clock in England. At her desk, office door closed, she listened to the phone ring. Amy picked up saying “Why haven’t you called?” I still read "she" as Kimmy. I grant you the she could be ambiguous but why would Amy listen to her phone ring? Not a big deal in any case...they made the connection!

BNR

My wife also went to this School for Wives with a Masters in Passive Aggression!

DavidnDaria

My wife doesn't yell, I get the silent treatment or more chores with not so subtle reminders of what I've forgotten to do... two years ago.

BNR

HOLY Crap I almost got engaged to a lovely little Italian girl who was super hot and more than a few handfuls! She wasn't into everything I was into and we just went our separate ways. Never even broke up. Just stopped calling each other almost all at once!

BNR

Tim, no worries! Some women are suffer silent types and some women are loud and let the husband suffer! We have all kinds. But congrats on the 47 years~! I'm almost 10 years in!

Tim ziegler

Mine’s Italian they like yell a lot!

CSH

Didn’t mean directly between Devil and Josh just more a sort of bully takes (sexually) Josh’s crush type thing. Maybe Karina? Though now that you mention it - in the first chapter Devlin makes Josh feel his boner and it’s mentioned that the whole scene of being around Devlin in that state is “not unfamiliar” to Josh.

RCH

Tim it's has a good deal to do with cultural back ground. My wife is Japanese and gives me the silent treatment. Then when I least expect it she sinks my battleships! :)

Chinookfan72

TF the at her desk line is in reference to Amy not Kimmy. The rest is in reference to Kimmy.

Tim ziegler

Joke, but I guess not very good.

DavidnDaria

All women are different, bro!

Chinookfan72

I know I brought up the breakfast club after a previous chapter. But Molly Ringwald’s little smirk after Emilio tells everyone he taped the kids buns together reminds me how I’d expect Kimmy to react if told about a similar situation involving Devlin and Josh in high school. https://getyarn.io/yarn-clip/68e7d67f-9728-4e2d-ac2f-8ee18998782d#ZSvU-4iFG.copy

DavidnDaria

It'll probably be water under the bridge by then. Remind me, if you remember, Red.

Chinookfan72

Another angle,besides being a vehicle for more tension between Kimmy and Josh, and besides being the support person Kimmy needs to help with guilt and normalizing her behavior (both I agree with totally), is humiliation. Amy already talks shit behind Josh’s back about him to Kimmy. After Kimmy has something to compare Josh to in the sack. My thinking is Kimmy will start to voice her preference for Devlin and lack of preference for Josh.. I see Kimmy being reluctant at first but Amy’s persistence will finally get Kimmy to admit all the humiliating stuff about Josh.. It might not go any further than just talk with Amy, but after It’s normalized in Kimmy’s behavior I could see he start to humiliate Josh more directly. I have no idea if this is where KT is going to go, but it’s a possible angle. To me this conversation just solidifies Amy as the one person Kimmy is talking to about this, and we know Amy is the devil on Kimmy’s shoulder so whatever comes of these conversations will not be good for Josh.

Tim ziegler

BNR I’ve been married 47 years and my wife does not believe in silent arguments!

TF

Good transition chapter. Not terribly important but there’s some confusion about door open vs closed. “At her desk, office door closed, she listened to the phone ring.” “She swiveled her chair toward the door, saw the hall empty,” and later “She stepped back and closed the door.”

RCH

Later you'll have to let us in on you insight.

RCH

Thinking it over maybe a scene similar to the Omega Theta Pi initiation in "Animal House" when Chip Diller (Keven Bacon ) is on all fours getting paddled saying "thank you sir may I have another" As a sadistic Douglas C. Neidermeyer (Mark Metcalf) smiles in pleasure? That I could see and maybe Josh springs wood?

RCH

Great job! Did see this approach, great way to hit Josh over the head with the truth, well half truth. Now there is no way he can deny what is going on! He also is still reacting to what is happening despite his inner voice telling him he doesn't like it. He is so confused!

RCH

CSH, I don't know how I would take that. I've had a problem with the level of abuse(bordering on attempted murder). Are we hinting at possible sexual encounter between Devlin and Josh!? (There needs to be a punctuation mark for a shock/question!)

RCH

Tim I'm with BNR silence is the fight.

JamesIsAsleep

I also think that Kimmy is using Amy to be a voice for the id part of her brain (psychoanalysis alert), like Chinook alluded to above, Kimmy is trying to find support because she feels guilty about what she wants to do. She isn't getting that support from Josh obviously (although maybe he might deep down? I think that's where he is headed, personally), so who does she call to help give herself the green light and suppress any of the other thoughts that deny her getting with Devlin? Amy.

RCH

I don't see it as a distraction it is more of a vehicle for Josh over hearing a conversation. It's has been hinted at that Amy could be a factor in the temptation of Kimmy. For all we know there maybe so other connection between Amy and Kimmy. Who knows what perversions lurk in the mind of KT.

CSH

So KT maybe you could give us an incident that somehow connects the development of Josh’s sexuality to his humiliation by Devlin. That might be the secret to his reluctant guilt-ridden arousal. Even more darkly, it would also provide Kimmy the opportunity to eroticize Devlin's treatment of Josh and feed her desire to be sexually dominated by him.

CSH

With Kimmy now acknowledging the Devlin domination angle will Josh’s tale of humiliation at his hands actually increase her lust for Devlin even more ?

DavidnDaria

BTW, something about the believablity of this story went out the window with this chapter. I'm not going to elaborate about what, but until now, it was entirely believable. Now, it's entirely readable, as well.

BNR

I think Amy was in on the ground floor. I picture Any as the snake who "tempted Eve" with glorious tales of Sexual Nirvana. Amy- 'Kim, you have to come to reunion! I know someone who has a huge 'thing' for you since HS and he can't wait to hook back up with you! And he was the greatest fuck of my life, a real orgasm machine. I know you are married and happy but if you just met him you might become successful and horny 24/7. Even in your dad's bathroom!" Something along those lines...

CSH

I don’t really get the Amy angle or why it’s central to the story. Seems like more a distraction to me.

CSH

Can’t say I loved this chapter (not a fan of involving Amy) but if it gets us where everyone here seems to want go then it’s more than worth it. Honestly, I think the phone conversation could have been cut and we could go straight to him trying to win sympathy by spilling out a new story of Devlin’s cruelty. Then cut to Kimmy offering herself up to Devlin. That’s real betrayal for sure and will likely leave Kimmy permanently corrupted. By the way, do I detect some sexual angle to Devlin’s humiliation of Josh in HS? Is that why he gets turned on by this? Maybe he has seen Devlin in action before?

DavidnDaria

Isn't it amazing how she lied to Amy? She's good. Josh and being honest... triple tap... he spills about being bullied, spills about being turned on about Devlin, or spills about being suspicious. Maybe a combination of the three... Interesting.

Chinookfan72

It’s always nice to get some positive reinforcement before you do something risky..

Chinookfan72

Welcome on the bus BNR! I like the picture you are painting.

BNR

Agreed. Any married couple knows that "just avoiding each other " IS THE FIGHT! =P

BNR

I think I'm getting on this bus. One more brutal story as a lame sort of lifeline to his "innocent victim" wife. A final plea that after he tearfully admits another emasculating tale of Devlin's cruelty she swears to Josh that her heart will only ever belong to him and that she could never hurt him. *** Much later, as she is about to be pierced by Devlin, she asks him if this last horrible story could ever be real. With a sneer, Devlin holds back his laughter at the memory and realizing he had caused Josh such lasting pain. "True, all true. I have been more evil than one person could ever be to Josh. Second only to you, my sweet Kimmy!" he hisses as he slides into Kimmy's over-soaked sex... Kimmy cums at the invasion and the realization that she was indeed wounding poor Josh deeper than Devlin ever could!

Tim ziegler

The thing i don’t understand is the lack of dialogue between Josh and Kimmy over Devlin,even a little argument.

JamesIsAsleep

Grade A drama writing, KT! I am with Chinook, Amy's dynamic really helps amplify the reptilian brain in Kimmy, even if Kimmy herself won't be so direct expressing how she feels (though she has been lately), Amy helps say it for her, provide a nice land strip for Kimmy's depravity.

Chinookfan72

i’ll also agree.. That would be the best backdrop... Husband finally opens up about his bully. then the wife opens up..for the bully.. good shit.

Chinookfan72

I loved the inclusion of Amy into this chapter, it would have been nice to get her perspective on Kimmy situation a bit more, and perhaps have her cheerlead Kimmy a bit, but the eavesdropping from Josh is more important. Perhaps we’ll get another check in with Amy after the deed is done on Monday to compare notes on Devlin’s stroke game. Looking forward to Amy being included in a three way on Kimmy and Devlin’s first trip to the UK.. Is Canada restricting travel to the Europe like the US is? stupid virus.

Wess

Same page as Glauc. Don't want Josh telling what he suspects or knows. But another bullying humiliation story would be the perfect backdrop for Kimmy to let Devlin leave her in an exhausted and amazed heap on his bed...of course wanting more.

BNR

Just saw this post! About to read the chapter! SO EXCITED!!! XD

Glaucon

Yes Josh, please, tell her a little bit more. Tell her about some direct bullying by Devlin the night before she goes all the way with him. I love where this is going.


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