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Devil In The Waters, Book 6, Chapter 5 (part 1)

🕑 Added 2020-08-28 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Tim ziegler

Josh is starting to grow a pair!

RCH

Yes, KT hope all is going well for your battle/recovery. I'm extremely busy of late so haven't had time to check in in awhile. Best to all and KT the most!

DavidnDaria

Believe it or not, we're actually glad there is no KT post. KT, it's cool. We hope and pray that you're still on the mend. Still sending all the positive thoughts you can bear! Keep getting better, and remember to smile. Smiles make you feel better!

Tim ziegler

KT we luv ya,have a great day!

DavidnDaria

Thing is, Devlin has always said Kimmy could do better. Better job, he's proven. Better sex, proven. Better life? Still up in the air. Kimmy keeps saying she loves Josh, but it's growing thin and Devlin clearly doesn't give a rat's ass about how she thinks about Josh or her time with Josh. To him Josh is an insignificant ant to step on; to crush while he's scurrying back to his hill. Therein lies the question: What does Josh do?

DavidnDaria

KT, we're hoping your new medication has helped you. Regardless, we're still sending you positive thoughts and wishes. Please, KT, take care of yourself.

CSH

No, he doesn’t at least not by the dictionary or traditional usage which is “a man whose wife is sexually unfaithful”.

Tim ziegler

Question here,doesn’t Josh have to know Kimmy’s cheating not suspect to be considered a cuckold!

CSH

Strangely, I’m not convinced that Devlin wants to break up Kimmy and Josh. Looks to me that he wants to turn them into a cuckold couple. That’s from all the “we’ll screw in front of him” comments. To be fair that would probably qualify as him “ruining their marriage”.

DavidnDaria

At this point, we really don't know what's going on except with the subterfuge. It does SEEM like Kimmy is trying to assert herself, but I read later in the thread something I've been saying all the while: Devlin wants to ruin Kimmy's marriage. He's a sleaze with a big dick. Kimmy, we think is starting to wake up, but we're probably wrong. Flattery is still new to Kimmy, maybe she'll see through it, maybe not. She's got her agenda, Devlin has his, and Josh? Well, he wears stupid T-Shirts. Get him a Dream Theater T-Shirt... naa... too cool. Get him a Winger T-Shirt--it's more his speed. Or get Devlin a T-Shirt, "Buttholio".

CSH

The whole issue of control is interesting. She’s obviously planning on using Devlin to tease Josh. I wouldn’t be at all surprised to see it slip out of her control and go much farther than she intends. We have seen she can’t really control Devlin.

CSH

Yeah I think actually including all the contradictory tendencies in the characters is the key to this whole story working. I also like that we have all the ingredients of the traditional cuckold recipe but all separated and not yet stewed as it were and we can see how each one affects the other.

Donkatsu

Yep, shouldn't ignore those. Gee, KT's got a lot going on here, n'est-ce pas? A regular three-ring circus.

CSH

And Josh kinda likes Kimmy messing with him and he gets all twisted up over Devlin’s big dick and....

Donkatsu

The power of "And." Devlin wants to mess up Josh's marriage - hence the appearance at both the party and the Cayman weekend; AND, Kimmy wants to mess with Josh, at least a little; AND she likes what Devlin has to offer; And she considers him a real man, while Josh is still an online game-playing boy; AND Devlin has a big cock; AND Amy wants to mess up the Josh-Kimmy thing in the worst way. Have we missed anything here

CSH

Kimmy asking Devlin if he wants to hurt Josh is ironic. Devlin can only do it with her help. She’s might crush Josh to save him from Devlin crushing him. Plus she really has zero control over Devlin.

Tracey52

Have you guys seen the new series “Brave New World” talk about cuckold themes!

zaddiethebaddie

When she said "you want to hurt him?" I was like yes!!!! And I want her to be the one who wants to do it. So hot.

DavidnDaria

And, KT. Don't push. Take deep breaths, very deep breaths, in your nose and out your mouth. They help you just be. Just "being" is the hardest thing to do. Being in the moment. Being engaged. The list goes on and on. As you get better, just remember to breathe. We're still here, sending positive thoughts and feelings your way.

Wess

Agreed. She's definitely getting bolder about what she expects. At the same time she was quite willing to indulge his lust even though she told him this was a time for her and Josh. And it sounds like she's planning something more despite saying she wanted to be with Josh. I have a love hate with her. She's finally owning her sexual desires but becoming increasingly indifferent as to how this could crush Josh and blow up the relationship. Guessing she does the final choreographing for this triad. Very much looking forward to some heat.

DavidnDaria

Anyone have the thought that Kimmy is really starting to feel her oats with Devlin? It almost seems to us like she's trying to draw boundaries, but Devlin is doing his best to ignore them. We're kind of wondering where this is going to go as Kimmy starts to assert herself more with Devlin. Yeah, I know you're expecting her to assert herself with Josh, but what surprises us is her attempts to assert herself with Devlin.

Wess

Glad modern medicine is working its wonders KT. I’m amazed that you keep writing through what sounds like a scary ordeal! This saga has the potential to supplant my all-time favorite, Cherry Blossoms. But I have this lingering paranoia that Josh is going to go total marshmallow and accept Kimmy’s lying and cheating. Of course this would take us down a well-worn path and KT always seems to find a twist. I will keep the faith and hope you do too KT.

CSH

There’s nothing simple in this story which is part of what makes it interesting. All the characters have mixed motives.

Glaucon

It seems pretty clear to me, personally, that Devlin gets off on the ego boost of taking someone else's wife/feeling superior to others.

Tracey52

I agree with JamesIsAsleep but there’s got to be more selfish reasons for Amy than just wanting Devlin and Kimmy together.

Chinookfan72

Thanks for the chapter and the update. Glad to hear you are on a more stable protocol for recovery, hoping for no more relapses! These last two chapters are exactly what I’m looking for in an erotic fiction story (a hot sex scene followed by a focus on the mental gymnastics the wife is going through).

Tim ziegler

Great having you back!

MTO

While waiting and worrying, I am rereading David McManus. I recommend the books to all who like me are concerned about what is coming down on Josh. KC, all the best to you. Don't worry about us, like Josh, we are not going anywhere.

TF

Glad you are back, KT! Looking forward to more 'trials and tribulations' of J, K & D but, as others said, no need to push it.

CSH

Welcome Back!

VN

Glad to know you are good. This was a warm up dose.

BNR

And Welcome back KT!!!

BNR

I think Amy is dangerous. And more involved than we know. Playing down her Devlin time was a smart move. Chess move!

RCH

KT is alive! Just keep recovering. Don't write unless it is somehow therapeutic! Nice chapter! Kimmy just can't tell the truth not even to Amy.

JamesIsAsleep

KT, I really hope you find what works best for you to get over what you have going on. I feel like things are clearing up for me now. I'm now seeing a clear angle where Amy wants Kimmy to let loose with Devlin, and I get the genuine feeling that Devlin just wants to get with Kimmy and he doesnt really care about messing with Josh, it's only an afterthought. The cliffhanger makes me think Kimmy wants to instigate a little teasing shenanigans between the three of them, hence why she invites Devlin with her. Either way, I'm still here KT whether you write at all in September or not, just get better!

Donkatsu

Hope you are through with the relapses and have a reliable course of treatment. Thanks for thinking of us with the latest deviltry from Kimmy and D.

DavidnDaria

More than this book, it's your life. We, and I'm sure everyone here were and remain so very worried about you and your health. While it's great you took the time to write, please don't push yourself. We're going to continue sending you all the positive energy and thoughts we can muster. Just be, KT. BE. Now to read...

Michael Monroe

Glad you are making a great recovery KT.....Kimmy is up to her manipulation with Devilin and Josh....it's hot...but my heart strings hurt for Josh....being played like a fiddle by the Love of his life...


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