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Devil In The Waters, Book 6, Chapter 5 (part 2)

🕑 Added 2020-09-11 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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KT Morrison

Thank you! Dialog is my favorite part of writing, that's for sure. And I'm doing even better these days! Thanks, again...

Glaucon

Wishing you all the best, KT

RCH

I doing okay just very busy! Have a project outside of work that I trying to finish up. Leaving work at two in the afternoon then working 3-6 hours at another facility installing equipment. It's good $$$. So I don't complain too much just don't have extra time to be spending on the form. I'm happy to see KT is doing better! Take care best!

DavidnDaria

KT, we're still sending more positive thoughts your way. Think positive, stay positive. Again, smile and laugh; doing so will make a world of difference!

DavidnDaria

Hey Red! How are you holding up?

jimbo

Tracey52. Charlie, Libby and Jess.

RCH

KT as always it's good to hear you are feeling better. I've been very busy of late so just getting caught up with the story. Good buildup what is going to happen when the boys talk? Take care. Hello everyone.

BNR

Glad to see you posting again KT, because it hopefully means you feel better!!!

VN

I was told it will all come back when the end book is ready.

Mike Monroe

Another great chapter...things are going to get worst for Josh it seems. Kimmy is enjoying cheating behind Josh back a bit to much now...Question for qroup...The Cayman proxy is it in end. At book 4 or is there 5 and 6...cant find anywhere.

JamesIsAsleep

I cant wait for beach shenanigans!

CSH

Don’t agree it’s near the end, just at a crossroads. This is the beginning of the build up for sure. My sense is Devlin will tell Josh not to worry, everything is fine. But he’ll do it in such an arrogant, smug way that it will scare the bejeezus out of him. At this point, all Kimmy needs to do is stand next to Devlin and look at him funny to get Josh worked up. Add booze, bathing suits, suntan lotion, and some pool play and Josh will be about to explode. What makes this erotica though is that afterwards, instead of a big fight, a tearful confession, and a bitter divorce, Kimmy’s gonna tease Josh so far into a state of terrified ecstasy, he’ll spend every waking hour praying that she’ll do it again. I really love the treatment in this story of the twin concepts of the corruption of innocence and the betrayal of trust. These lie at the heart of cuckolding stories but, unlike the core sexual elements of sadism and masochism, they rarely get the nuanced examination we are seeing here.

TF

Great that you are doing better KT. I've given up trying to figure out what's coming next and am just along for the ride...a good one for sure.

DavidnDaria

After reading this four times, it can go a lot of ways. This is one of those stories where I have flipped on so many times, but my wife has remained steadfast. So, right now, I'm hoping shit doesn't hit the fan because I'd like to see it go on a lot longer. My wife? She thinks this is the buildup to the climax and ultimate end--that this is the last book in the series. So, what's coming next is something that I don't think has happened since the beginning--Josh and Devlin alone together. Blowup? Or, Devlin saying, "Hey Josh, remember what you told me you'd like me to do? Well, it's happened, a lot!"

Tracey52

I agree with Jimbo. You’re the best Kt. I hope Josh does get a pair. Reading Cherry Blossoms again. Still my favourite largely b/c Geoff is such a good character. Who else do you rate Jimbo?

jimbo

As a life long reader of erotica, and it's a long life, I can genuinely tell you, you are up there with the best. I think that where most authors fall down is when they attempt dialogue. It comes across as contrived, false, phony or just awful. Your characters conversations do what you intend- they hurt, they arouse, they lie but they sound real. Get well soon. I have missed you

VN

What’s Kimmy planning?

Tim ziegler

KT glad your doing better!

Tim ziegler

Josh is starting to grow a pair!

CSH

I really like the fact that we have Josh working up the courage to set things straight with Devlin. Josh is honest, sincere and naive here and he comes off as a boy playing at being a man vs. Devlin’s actual sophistication. He’s completely out of his depth, steps behind in the game, and embarrassing himself without knowing it. Makes you both pity him and want to kick his ass. In some ways I think this is one of the hardest parts of the series because it is non-erotic and critical to the rest of the work. Really looking forward to the coming chapters. Great job with this KT. Just a simple conversation but with so much more there.

JamesIsAsleep

Hope things keep getting better! Love this little interaction. One of the things I really love about KT is the little nuances that make her cuckold stories so complex and different than others. Like Kimmy making it a point to stand shoulder to shoulder with Josh, apologizing to Josh in private, saying she'll have whatever hes having, its "their time together" and "we're not gonna let him get to us, right?" I feel like as a creative choice, maybe even just in order to provoke the reader if nothing else, other authors would have made other choices in the above, and they wouldnt be bad decisions either. KT is just different. I love how much KT's characters hurt my brain.

Donkatsu

Welcome back, KT. Wishing you the best.

CSH

Welcome back! Sounds like you’ve turned a corner on this thing!

DavidnDaria

Make that three of us! Such good news. Y'know you had us all worried--don't do that again! ;) And now... "Dear Sir or Madam" we will read your book, it's taken years to write, so we'll take a look!

Glaucon

I'm so glad to hear that you're doing better :)


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