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Devil In The Waters, Book 6, Chapter 8 (part 2)

🕑 Added 2020-10-21 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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DavidnDaria

Third it!

Chinookfan72

seconded!

RCH

Hope you are doing well KT!

RCH

Dave the bully part is not erotic in my book too. I never read the books but did see the movie "Clan of the Cave Bear" the son of the leader fails because he is a billy not a leader. Alexander the Great was a leader and men followed his all over the known world. There is a difference between toughness and bully. Devlin is a bully. It would be interesting to see the three of them in a survival situation where brain over brawn was more of a factor. Devlin strikes me as the type that would fold as soon as he couldn't use his physical advantage to win the day.

DavidnDaria

Alphas... Betas. Animal kingdom stuff. Devin comes across sometimes as petulant, especially now. It's an undercurrent both of us feel. Kimmy? Not sure about her being alpha as much as simply being smarter than both Devlin and Josh. Devlin, to his credit, recognizes Kimmy's intelligence and devious nature, while Josh is blissfully ignorant or has chosen to be so, to date. It's brilliant writing but I (Dave) can't get by the bully aspect. As I see it, leaders aren't bullies. Leaders inspire people to do better, either by example, or by who they are. Granted, those characteristics do not fit into most erotic stories, however in one long series we've read, they did--perfectly. I won't mention the series here but might in KT's blog. What Devlin does have in regard to Kimmy is animal attraction, and it's mutual. Of course, there are other reasons for Devlin's actions and behavior, but as a person, he's deeply flawed, and maybe that's the brilliance of KT's writing.

CSH

Yeah something like that giving a perk to the highest Patreon level would be good. I’d previously mentioned the possibility of alternate pathways on some stories as a way to explore what works and what doesn’t. Exploratory chapters of some other series might work as well. So much of this is dependent on the creative artistic process of the author that it would by its nature be highly idiosyncratic and might not be appropriate at all to the way KT works.

Chinookfan72

Agreed! I’d love it ifKT were to share the other series she’s working on here in addition to Kimmy’s tales. I’m thinking most chapters she’s already written so that it can fill in the gap while she gets ahead on this one. I don’t think we need the whole books but a chapter or two to gets us hooked would be a great perk to the highest tier pf the Patreon.

Tim ziegler

To me this is the best part of Patreon,I love the thought and ideas of past and present books.

RCH

Disclaimer: my Jonny/Reza comment is not in anyway aimed at KT to shift focus or apply stress. I just read an article and it made me think of poor Jonny locked away as his sperm backed up! This really is KT's fault for making us love the characters so much. I love to hate Devlin, at times Josh and increasingly Kimmy.

RCH

Whatever it takes to sell it!

Donkatsu

Reza must have turned state's evidence, because the story I heard was that he dumped Charlie for a Brazilian samba dancer. But Jonny's apparent Mossad connections would have enabled some really good surveillance tech in that little apartment and in Reza's cars and offices. RCH, with regard to your most pressing science insights, does this mean that I can claim to remain unfulfilled ("we need to do that again, sweetie.") on the good and valid medical grounds of sperm quality?

Tim ziegler

The reason you didn’t see Reza was because Jonny found the hidden camera’s and went to the police. Reza got 20 in the penitentiary on sex trafficking!

Tracey52

*along

Tracey52

I think the plan is for Kimmy to cuck Josh tonight. Why else would Devlin go only with it?

Donkatsu

RCH, I saw Charlie on the Rio de Janeiro metro a couple of years ago. No sign of poor Jonny, or the evil Reza, for that matter. Rumor has it Jonny ran off with the Mossad hacker and Reza abandoned Charlie on a trip to the Amazon. She was with a local and left the train in a low rent part of Rio. You’d have to Czech with KT for confirmation and details.

Chinookfan72

RCH you post got me thinking. I wonder how far Finn has gotten Libby to go, or what Keely is up to, if Janie is constantly banging the young stud while hubby is away, and what Mr. Finch is up to with his harem of cuckold couples he is bulling. Even a check in with our size curious Brat would be nice.

Chinookfan72

After two years in a cage I’m thinking Jonny’s dick would be in the same shape as a calf’s balls two years after being banded..RIP Jonny’s dick.. you weren’t much, but Charlie still put up with you anyway.

RCH

WARNING! Science content. Red the sex science guy here. Well, there is new evidence that the old advice of obtaining from sex to build up your sperm reserves is not advisable. While this may increase the volume and number of sperm it's seems that it hurts the quality. Men who are able to ejaculate a second time produce healthier sperm that are more mobile and able to get the job done. This does not bode well for poor Jonny still locked in his cock cage for over 2 years now. Reza, is free to keep his equipment in top shape and ready to supply a fresh health supply for Charlie. I wonder what has happen to the young couple in the intervening years? How has Charlie reacted to Jonny being locked up for so long? At this point Jonny must have suffered some permanent effect of being lock in his cage for so long. :)

CSH

Eager to see where this goes. So is she just getting Josh used to seeing her and Devlin together and slowly she’s bringing it together or does she go all out in the moment and cuck him tonight there in the beach house? I was always of the first opinion but I’m starting to see how it could realistically work to have it happen now and right in Josh’s face. He will totally freak out the next day of course. Afterwards, instead of diving into full on open cuckolding, she could claim it was a crazy one time thing that got out of hand - we were drunk, in the islands, and we were playing with fire and we got burned baby, we are all embarrassed about it even Devlin, but I need my job so I have to work there but I would never do it again. Never! Josh would be back to ‘knowing but not knowing’ even after it was literally thrown in his face. There’s a lot of leeway for serious humiliation in there. Even some femdom and chastity. It also works, I think, for the netorare fans. At some point Josh would be twisted up enough to start begging her to do it again. She’d own him at that point. (Sorry, no satisfaction for the revenge seekers though.) Anyway, we will see where KT takes us!

JamesIsAsleep

It really is incredible to me to see from the bird's eye view we're allowed being able to see from both character's perspective, just how dangerous Kimmy is. She is absolutely loving this entire game, and needs Josh to play along to make it worth her while. But more than that, you can tell she knows Josh inside and out and has some level of seeing things from his perspective, or else her attempts at persuasion would just be, "Come on, get your ass down there, Josh!" Instead, Kimmy can pinpoint exactly what is holding Josh back and embolden him. It's scary considering how much she knows what she's done is definitely going to hurt Josh, and then when you combine all that with what is happening here at the Cayman's it's another level of devilish that Kimmy has achieved. I'm here for it. Josh is getting absolutely smashed today, he is constantly going back to the beach house to get another drink ... and again Kimmy and/or Josh keep going back and forth between places. It's kind of funny how little amount of time all three of them can stay in one place in this whole part of the book.

RCH

Yes, this is why I'm a KT fan. The nuance involved in the plots twists. Is this going to blowup in Kimmy's face or is it going to go her way is she the alpha or is Devlin? Devlin is always the wildcard, while he is the shell of an alpha there is something underlying an unrevealed flaw or weakness. True alphas don't need to torment the betas. Alpha lead and the betas follow. Devlin is flawed in this way he is not a good leader there is a weakness that we got a few glimpses of but it's still in the murkiness of the past. Kimmy all alpha, if she is leading you would follow. Yes, she has a weakness for Devlin's physical persona but he is mentally/personality flawed that precludes him ever being a successful leader. He would fail because no one would be willing to die for his cause he is too selfish. IMHO Kimmy will rule in the end. I don't see her as evil just goal driven. It's like she is running a successful enterprise (Josh and her) and now she wants to expand by franchising on her success!

Chinookfan72

I’ll wait til we get Kimmy’s pov before drawing any conclusions for how this is going to turn out. It’s obvious she has Josh wrapped around her finger, the question is will she use the power for good or evil? Zither answer seems obvious to me.

CSH

Yeah, me too. Wonder if she does it when her and Josh come back down?

Tim ziegler

KT such a tease expecting the worse,Jose handled himself ok since I voted for revenge I get to hang around another week!

Tracey52

I was convinced that Kimmy was going to take off her bikini at the beach, it’s like the false alarm in a horror movie. The monster will strike when you least expect it.

CSH

Yes. Get him laser focused on the big issue.

CSH

This is a long game for her. If she can get Josh to associate having Devlin around with his own sexual satisfaction, she’s well on her way to getting what she wants. In any case the upcoming ‘talk’ will tell us a lot. Don’t count on Devlin leaving anytime soon.

Sitri

I like. I foresee Josh coming too soon because Kimmy will tease him. Then she says she'll have Devlin take care of her since Josh couldn't. ;)

Mike Monroe

Wow!! What is Kimmy up to...I Don t trust this ..somehow..I think this a setup..Devilin is too calm...I think they somehow a going to some kind humiliation in store for Josh...She is playing him masterfully right now.. The other shoe will drop I am sure of it.

DavidnDaria

And now, we will see just how evil Kimmy truly is. Not to make a prediction, but who's up for the theory that Kimmy reallly lays it on thick about Devlin while she and Josh have their "few minutes"?


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