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Devil In The Waters, Book 5, Chapter 4 (complete)

🕑 Added 2020-05-21 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Chinookfan72

Devlin is a sales guy he isn’t well skilled in managing the bureaucracy like Kimmy is so it’s not a matter if Devlin can do it himself, but rather find someone else who could... Given Kimmy has said the job is otherwise straightforward and has now solved seemingly the only major problem Devlin has, I’d argue she has less leverage now than she did while she was making progress. At this point Devlin’s money is saved and he could likely find someone to do the rest of Kimmy’s work pretty easily (and could probably find someone cheaper too.) Kimmy on the other hand has just completed her 7th day on the job so it’s not like she has anything to add to her resume . Additionally, she spent a b7 ch of money on a car, suits and shoes so she needs the job more now than she did before she had it. Kimmy could use sexual leverage, but Devlin sees through her to her inner monologue and there is no down he saw her checking him out (including his dick). So she really doesn’t have any of that leverage either. Not to mention if Devlin has the ultimate trump card, telling Josh what happened last night.. Unless Kimmy actually gets some dirt on Devlin, Devlin is always going to have the upper hand. She’s going to play hard to get because it’s part of the game and she knows Devlin likes that more than just being a push over, but at the end of the day Devlin holds all the cards.

TF

Kimmy gets a large salary and she just saved Devlin more than it by solving a single problem of his after working for what, a week?. If he could have done it by himself, he would have. So it seems like she has a rather long lever arm with the fulcrum next to Devlin with which to manipulate him. I'd like to see her actually do what she thought momentarily. Put on her lawyer mode and threaten him to take his job and shove it if he doesn't give her the respect she deserves. It would be an interesting poker game...or maybe, better, a bull fight with a female matador. Actually this could go on through the three stages of the classical bull fight. This would be the tercio de varas. Well you have to admit it would be an interesting variation on the usual tale of this kind.

Chinookfan72

nah there just isn’t much to discuss as it’s just a build up chapter.. I’d imagine comments will pick up next chapter after once Devlin interacts with everyone.

Chinookfan72

is it possible Devlin sets josh at ease, yes.. probable I’d say no, Devlin is in a fine position with Kimmy (see her internal monologues in this chapter and how she’s looking at his dick and body.), and I think he can see through her external hardness and see she’s still interested in more. Additionally, Devlin isn’t a nice person her isn’t going to try and ease anything, he enjoys making others uncomfortable so he’ll enjoy Kimmy and Josh uncomfort. Now I don’t expect him to do anything that puts more suspicion on Kimmy either. Also he’s not the right person to take suspicion off anyway, Josh and Karina don’t trust him so he can’t really help Kimmy in that regard.

RCH

KT, idea when book 4 will be on amazon?

RCH

Yes, we are an insatiable lot.

RCH

Wow! Has everyone succumbed to the covid-19 virus? It's so quiet here!

BNR

True! I guess my excitement is also angst for more, more, more!

CSH

Yeah, oddly for erotica, it’s not just waiting for the next sex scene, the plot development is actually interesting.

RCH

It's not the lack of sex. I just want to see what is happening next! If this was a NetFlix series I'd be binge watching it!

BNR

At least I'm not the only one that feels like the wait is a killer! I love build up in stories but the wait can be too much sometimes. How many books will have actual full action sex in them?

RCH

So far nothing too unexpected. James is correct the dialog is very real. Josh will spin himself up unless there is some force to counteract it. It's possible Devlin could set Josh at ease as an olive branch to Kimmy? Help take the suspicion off Kimmy. KT's got the answers to all the questions... Just so hard to wait and see what is going to happen.

Chinookfan72

It’ll be interesting to see where this goes.. Does Devlin actually have anything for Kimmy? or is the something for Kimmy and Josh just the angst he knows he’ll cause by showing up? Not a huge fan of Josh spying here, and while I didn’t buy his fake confidence last chapter I would hope he’d have some confidence that he wouldn’t openly spy in them.. Not really surprised, but I imagine this evening isn’t going to end well for Josh. Devlin will be on his best behavior as it’s obvious he isn’t done with Kimmy yet, but regardless Josh is so inside his own head at this point that it won’t matter. Josh will be reading into every look or comment made and it’ll all make him go crazy. Personally I can’t wait, I also can’t wait for Devlin to bring down Kimmy’s walls for round 2.

JamesIsAsleep

"He gestured to Josh to 'come hither' " ... *prerecorded audience track* 'Ooooo!' I love how the conversations feel so true as though they really were had between the characters. It really seems like it's an actual conversation and not just contrived dialogue to advance the plot.


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