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Keely, Book 3, 003

🕑 Added 2020-11-24 01:00:02 +0000 UTC

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JL23

I agree she's being manipulative here and she's way too over confident in her own feelings and how everyone else will react to this, especially Keely. I think this is where the "angst" is going to come in future chapters. Maggie doesn't comprehend how hard the "Max being with Maggie" thing will be for Keely to handle. And also how much it may screw up Max initially. Cole is going to have to be the one who keeps this train from going off the rails. We know it doesn't...but doesn't mean we're not going to have some "minor" derailments along the way.

JamesIsAsleep

Don't mind me everybody, I'll just be in my corner rooting for Keely and Cole to be a heated mess of a complication ...

DavidnDaria

Here's the funny thing about this chapter... the prior chapter. It felt like an end and a beginning. We're both wondering if the sexual ties are ever going to be cut between Max and Maggie. Maggie is really manipulative. Not that it's bad like Kimmy, but still manipulative. :)

KT Morrison

Love this!

Mike Monroe

Amazing that Maggie and Cole blame Max sort of what happened between Jay and her. Maggie started this all. Yes Max was crazy to suggest that she do something with Jay...but it was going there anyway...wearing his Tee shirt and all...she was going to cheat...she already have ...Max has been painted as the Villain by Cole and Maggie lets him...Max and Keely dont need Cole and Maggie it appears that Maggie does and she wants Cole to go there with her...I love KT writing full of emotional Angst!!! Love to Hate it !!! More Max and Keely pleaase!!!

JL23

Yeah I agree Max is absolutely heading there anyway...I just get annoyed with how Maggie talks about him sometimes, like he is this lost little puppy and needs her guidance to help him through. She needs as much guidance as him honestly. The way I kind of look at the 4 are Max/Maggie are the "selfish" ones and Keely/Cole are the "selfless" ones. By that I mean this is all being driven by Max and Maggie's desires, and Keely and Cole are looking to make them both happy. Maggie seems to want to put all the selfishness on Max when she's as bad as him though.

JamesIsAsleep

Her thought about Max isn't wrong though, we know that he will start thinking that way, if for any other reason than we know what the future brings because we've seen it. It comes across as less a rationalization and more a statement of fact when there's truth. But wow, are these the types of bed talk conversations that Alpha couples have? DnD is this the stuff you guys talk about? 😘

JL23

I didn't like Maggie's attitude here towards Max to be honest....he doesn't need you to "save" him...it was just be more honest if she admitted she wants this cause she wants to be with Keely, and with Max, rather than the idea she's doing it only for Max. She kind of does at the end there, but most of the time I rolled my eyes at some of the things she said. Especially the Jay comment, um Maggie, you brought Jay into your lives, not Max. Anyway, enough complaining about Maggie...I still love her, and she's got a good heart. Her attitude towards Max just rubs me the wrong way at times.

JamesIsAsleep

I am really digging the gravity of the conversation and the tangential thoughts that Maggie has as she weighs the consequences of what they're talking about. It's somewhat surreal (that word again) how casually they talk about sleeping around even though they conscious acknowledge and understand how complicated sex can be, yet know how their relationship with Max and Keely is. Really excellent story that only kind of makes me upset with your choice to fade to black for sex scenes, lol. To your credit, I am on record saying that sex between Cole and Maggie has lost its allure now that Max has moved on, haha. I think that should be dubbed the Cuckold Paradox, it's only hot if someone could get hurt ... 😀


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