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Devil In The Waters, Book 7, Chapter 6

🕑 Added 2021-03-28 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Donkatsu

Yes to #2, and you have to fly back to Pearson in Toronto. Yea, I gave up too easily on Reza. He can be persuasive in more than one way; he has people as well as other outstanding characteristics.

KT Morrison

Ha ha, I expected more pushback from Reza. Can't believe he gave up so easy. Insider question: If one was flying private business to Cayman would one go in and out of Owen Roberts?

Donkatsu

Oh, well, not all ideas are good ones, but Reza would really change the complexion of the negotiations;)

KT Morrison

Now that would be a tough sell. How would Reza work his charm outside of his extreme influence over Jonny and Charlie? He's a man who needs leverage to get women like Maggie, Kimmy, or Keely. They are well-fortified and not so easily assailable!

Donkatsu

Thanks, KT. Cole likes younger(ish) redheads, too. They could probably convince Kimmy to dye her hair. We have not mentioned Josh, yet. He would have to be kept back in T'ronna, in order to maintain his image of Kimmy's purity and sincerity. Devlin could certainly arrange heavy office duty with Josh's bosses. Kimmy would spin a story of grueling all-nighters, having to bring down staff from NY, and all that. Cole, bright enough to make it to HLS and talented enough to snag Maggie, cannot actually do the financial restructuring work to pull Devlin's kischkes out of the fire. Gotta call on someone who really knows this business; enter Max. Eventually Keelie will have to get down to Cayman for a weekend in the sun. And who should be laundering cash in Cayman that weekend? Why, Reza, of course. He would be traveling with Charlie and things might get baroquely complex (and fun!). RCH, you were wondering how Reza fit into all this, nest-ce pas? We're still developing this nonsense; give it time to ferment (gestate?). Dickens has NOTHING on a KT story for complex character and plot line interaction.

KT Morrison

Good golly I fucking love this, ha ha. Also: louche, scut work? I love the vocabulary! Carol in leather for final arguments? Ha ha. Those settlement talks cold get awful heated. Personally I think Cole would stay faithful to Maggie and not bang Kimmy. He would, however, def try to get a three way, trying to convince Maggie how she should go for it and don't you think she's beautiful? Kimmy's about six years older than Maggie. Would Maggie go for an older woman? I heard she likes younger redheads.

CSH

Kimmy lies to herself a lot. First she would never do it with Devlin, then it was one and done, and so on. When she has Josh on his knees politely asking Devlin to fuck his wife, that’s making him stronger? Right.....

RCH

Geoff #1 as I recall he was in on the hotwife thing, his wife just went in too deep. Now she did cheat the one time so that would be grounds. Josh, I would say is #1 in that he has a cheating wife already and is being encouraged to go down the hotwife route by his cheating wife. Now, Kimmy's internal dialog is it's making Josh stronger. Well see, KT said this was a dark one.

Donkatsu

Thanks, RCH.

Tim ziegler

Of all of KT’s husband who need to divorce #1 is Geoff,hut a close second is Josh.

RCH

Wow Donkatsu, your should get a job as a write on one of the soap operas! I had to lookup louche what a great descriptor. If you can manage to loop in the Reza characters you got a sure hit! KT, writing like this would revitalize the whole soap opera industry.

Donkatsu

[NB: for those of you new to KT, this comment connects the Maggie series, featuring money managers, lawyers, dragon ladies, and louche offspring. KT has cruelly denied us a full reckoning of the Maggie saga, so we are left to connect the dots by ourselves.] In this series, Kimmy is a master of mind control and misdirection. You have rendered her flawlessly, KT. But what happens if Devlin takes his eye off the ball, paying less attention to his business, so that things go south and he decides to turn over the firm's pension fund and cash management to Martin (Maggie's dad). Cole would be the customer representative. Predictably, Cole would become infatuated with Kimmy, f*&k up the fiduciary relationship, and end up in court for professional malpractice, with Martin's firm as Respondent. Who's in Martin's first chair, none other than Carol. This could get really interesting, especially if Carol brings in her daughter as an associate to do the legal scutwork. Imagine the two horndogs, Devlin and Cole, utterly unable to focus on the business at hand, or at least the financial business, panting after each others' attorneys. Carol would have to step in to save her daughter's honor, possibly making her final arguments in full leather. Devlin would pressure Kimmy to hold settlement talks, possibly in Cayman. These talks might take a while to conclude.

Synk

She is very good at controlling him, and she enjoys it too, but even she surely can't prepare him for the moment when (if?) he finds out everything she's been doing behind his back. I feel like that moment will be the final fork in the road for Josh, either to face his worst fears, without Kimmy to fall back on, or have what's left oh his self-esteem completely crushed. I'm just wondering whether that happens before or after he begs her to fuck Devlin. 😂

Kade

Still wondering what happened between Kimmy and Devlin when they left Josh at the beach, why was she so late?

Wess

Kimmy gets her nice guy husband, allbeit timid, and her bad boy boss lover too. I guess all the lying and cheating is not only going to be forgiven but endorsed by Josh. I really liked this story despite wanting Josh to be a little stronger. Had me guessing and pondering all sorts of possibilities.

RCH

Another hot chapter KT!

Mike Monroe

Gullible Josh...being played every second by his so called loving wife....Josh doesnt this seem off...Delvin shows up with Kimmy...Ir your time...You get tricked info walking on the beach by yourself...Kimmy showing up late...just talking??...now all this talk about Delvins Dick size...still no having a light bulb moment.....Kimmy now can t have sex unless you this hard...Josh let me continue to look at Delvin Dick...Kimmy is a master. Manipulator...10 Pins being setup... Kimmy is throwing Josh down the lane. 3 Strike ..Josh is a Turkey!

CSH

Here we go! This scene has been a long time coming and I think you got it exactly right. Kimmy loving and tuned in to Josh and yeah, setting him up for the kill. I think both characters are true to what you’ve been working them up to. Some nice foreshadowing there as well. A smoking hot scene and very believable. Fantastic! You’re on a roll.


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