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Devil In The Waters, Book 7, Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2021-04-17 00:00:00 +0000 UTC

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RCH

Going back through the earlier books to try and get a perspective. I would say part of the before Kimmy was a Kimmy heavily influenced by her Asian culture. The new Kimmy has cast off that oppression and is going forward with what she wants. Josh will probably get cast aside in the process. It is hard to tell what will happen in the finale out come. It would be best for all parties concerned if they just went their separate ways followed their own dreams. I think Kimmy is just finding her own path. I have a question what is happening with Josh's brother and his ex wife and niece? Was that just filler? Is the ex-wife(sorry forgot her name) have some roll to play? Possible this is the exact reason that that couple broke up. Love all these characters.

KT Morrison

Very interesting...

KT Morrison

hahaha

Donkatsu

How much did Josh's confession about his past at the hands of Devlin and company contribute to the "New Kimmy"? Given that she grew up without a mother at home, she has to view Josh's tales of bullying as the bellyaches of a weakling. She may still love him in some sense and want to keep him around to raise Devlin's children, but she can no longer respect him. She wants to tell him to toughen up but does not know how. Hence, her elaborate rationalizations for what her activities with Devlin will do to "benefit" Josh..

Tim ziegler

Wouldn’t be worth my sanity,Even the best thing get old in time. Or stretched out!

BNR

I'm listening...

Mike Monroe

Yeah agreed Tim...Kimmy is not nice..and At this point If she told Josh the truth he should never forgive her for who it was and the deceitfulness she did it....horrible wife and not his best friend.

CSH

She’s not the good girl anymore and maybe is learning to accept that about herself.

Tim ziegler

She did this with the worst possible person, hard to forgive. She turned into a not so nice person!

RCH

Good one!

CSH

When they don’t open their mouth.

RCH

Well then that's Josh's fault! You have to know when the lying B#%^@ is telling you the truth! Wait that doesn't sound right! I so confused! Kimmy has been using her Jedi mind tricks on us all. When do you know a liar is telling the truth?

CSH

Uh... she already did this and he didn’t believe her.

CSH

She turns a nun into her sex slave!

RCH

Tracey, that's the sane thing! Truth would be the best thing Josh would forgive her and maybe even encourage her to continue.

Tracey52

Tell josh everything

RCH

No, maybe a sex slave!

Tim ziegler

She becomes a nun.

KT Morrison

What could Kimmy do to win your heart at this point?

KT Morrison

This makes me smile!

KT Morrison

I miss Kate and Kiley!

KT Morrison

This makes me feel real good. And bad (heh heh). I've always wanted to create a character like this.

Tim ziegler

Josh losing this bitch is a happy ending!

Paul Hunsicker

I agree, I hope kimmy keeps going behind Josh’s back as long as possible, and when he finds out, she leaves with very little remorse

Glaucon

Well, I'm always here pretty much I just don't say anything unless I have something to contribute :P

Synk

Sometimes Kimmy comes off like Josh's mommy and it really makes me laugh. The uber scene is definitely one of those times. Two typos I noticed: -“You’re sure your going to make it?” -"Good Taste.You can run in to pick up our dinner.

RCH

Reading more of "Cayman Proxy" what an interesting tale really enjoying it!

RCH

Hi, Glaucon long time! Yep, Kimmy is definitely slipping more towards the dark side.

Mike Monroe

I love the story and I know KT says this will be dark...Josh will suffer because of this ..He is not like any other Husband or boyfield. Who wanted to risk everything for a kink...Its almost as he js getting hypnotized into wanted this...by a self serving wife...this is not love for her husband..its her justification for her actions and if Josh is. Convinced its good for him than all the better...Its Hate to love this awesome story. I just want a reluctant Josh not just accepting what his wife is doing behind his back so easy.

CSH

I’m on team Kimmy! Let Kimmy have what she wants and everyone can have some fun.

CSH

What a sweet, loving, evil, self-serving, condescending bitch you have created. Sick, twisted, and smoking hot! And all motivated by love. Irresistibly attractive for all the Joshes of the world. Once demure innocent little Kimmy reluctantly concedes, maybe they can even sit and talk like adults and discuss rules. Like, “Josh I love you and respect you as my life partner. If I agree to do this for you, you must accept the blame for everything that goes wrong and no whining allowed when I permanently lock up your pathetic little dick and have Devlin’s baby.” A really great scene highlighting Kimmy’s genuine love of Josh and her genuinely self-serving attitude toward him now. Kimmy can be good friends with Josh without respecting him but I don’t think she can have a normal sex life with him anymore. Sex increasingly will be with Devlin and Josh gets just his kink. A couple of weeks in and she’s already addicted, Josh soon will be too. Great work bringing these characters to life and giving them complex motivations. We’ve been with them a while and they are like actual people we know at this point. Like real people, their motivations are totally fucked up. It really is like a horror story. Personally, I’m loving it.

zaddiethebaddie

I disagree. I want Josh to always have Kimmy. I want her and Josh to always love each other and stay together. If both Josh and Kimmy want and except Kimmy being a slut for Devlin, that between Josh and Kimmy. Devlin might be getting to run the show, but he doesn’t own the show. Kimmy and Josh do.

Glaucon

Sure, she's fantasizing of spending money not on the family life with Josh she initially rationalized taking the job for, but rather of spending the money instead on something that gives her status in Devlin's world. Her priorities are shifting.

RCH

Another good chapter! These are the chapters that setup the hot sex scenes! We can see more of Kimmy's plans and I stand by a possible Devlin power couple finally! Is there symbolism in the Leaf vs "Something black and low"?

Mike Monroe

What makes Devlin a better man??? I man that cheats with a married woman ? Both of them are pieces of shit really..A supposedly good wife who knows her husband was tormented by a bully and sleeps with him? Devlin is the better man??? Really...Seems to be a spoiled rich Kid to me ..Like Josh said he just fortunate In being born rich! He didnt create anything...he just good at getting into someone else great things...ie his fathers company ..Josh wife....Josh doesn't deserve any of this. He not a asshole or a abusive husband ..He just to trusting of a deceitful ,and manipulating wife

Simoee

I disagree. I want Kimmy to get everything she wants and for Josh to lose her to the better man. No happy endings for Josh here, please, KT!

Mike Monroe

The quiet before the storm...I hope her deceitful and manipulation blows up in her face like hurricane Katrina. No one should be allowed to have their cake and eat it too...I am hoping for a back bone in Josh in sone point...again all of this was driven by Devlin and Kimmy its a hot story but Josh deserves sone kind of turn around on his tormentor at some point...Hopeful he gets sone measure of pay back on one of them. Good setup for upcoming humiliation coming his way. Josh need to be aware of his getting gamed.


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