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Devil In The Waters, Book 8, Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2021-04-22 00:00:02 +0000 UTC

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RCH

Chinookfan72, well we've been flip flopping back and forth between Josh and Kimmy's inner voice all through the books. I'll sure we'll switch back when KT decides it suits he nefarious plan. Kimmy has everything under control has she peaked to early or will she manage to increase her control?

Chinookfan72

RCH, I’m sure KT has here reasons for presenting the story this way I’m just stating my opinion on it. I’m sure others disagree with me, but I’m not here for Josh’s journey I’m here for Kimmy’s so telling the story this way is sub optimal for my tastes.

RCH

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RCH

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RCH

Chinookfan72 it's just a different more Josh centric view. Possible before talking to the boys he is in his happy zone. Josh isn't angsty because he sees no reason to be. Kimmy has done a good job of convincing Josh there is nothing going on behind the curtain.

RCH

I think Josh is just in a zone where he is comfortable. A livable denial zone that he is happy in. Kimmy and Josh both enjoyed their Devlin play in the Cayman's. Kimmy admonishment of only one day is unlikely to hold as it was too much of a rush for both of them. I can see Kimmy breaking that during their next intimate moment together. I can see her using it to prep Josh prior to her over niter with Devlin. On their trip to the Cayman's Kimmy proved that as long as she can clean up Josh will be clueless that she has been with Devlin. Kimmy is too organized of a person not to solve the soiled/lack of panties problem. I can see her keeping a pair in her desk along with a way to clean up. Kimmy is past denial, and fully embracing the dark side. I wouldn't be surprised if she didn't start keeping somethings at Devlin's. What will have a profound effect is if her and Devlin are able to have that over niter. Up till now Kimmy has always been able to have a Josh reset after Devlin. With Kimmy and Devlin having an away time there will be no reset and I can see Kimmy getting emotionally effected by it. I've stated before I think Devlin has more long term plans for Kimmy. While he may not have the capacity to love I can see him picking Kimmy as his future Queen in his empire. If Devlin ever hands Kimmy a set of keys to the condo then that is the path he is on. Tweaking Josh is fun but Kimmy is the grand prize!

CSH

It just seems odd that he is having that thought in that way three days later. KT has been playing temporal games and tricks with causation so I’m curious if that’s afoot here. Has the connective material been dropped because it is not necessary or to build tension? Between Kimmy at work without Devlin Monday to Josh at dinner without Kimmy Tuesday night, I suspect Kimmy is out for the overnight with Devlin already and Devlin just teased Josh about it before this scene starts.

JamesIsAsleep

Interesting ... I thought the same thing you did when I read it (your initial thoughts)

CSH

“Devlin was running a game on him, and he didn’t care. And he had little fear. The feeling was indescribable.” I initially took this to refer to Cayman but maybe there is something going on now (Tuesday)?

RCH

This chapter makes me hungry! Again these type of chapters really help make the sex chapters work. KT good dialog. Three guy out eat and drinking enough to disable their filters. This is when we usually say things maybe we shouldn't! Josh is bragging in front of his buddies. Both think Kimmy is hot and know Josh is a lucky to have her. Steve can see flaws in Josh's perceived triumph over Devlin questioning why Kimmy would want to make Devlin jealous. We'll have to see how all this pans out in up coming chapters. Is Kimmy home while the boys are out? We know she was looking forward to lunch with Devlin on Monday. It's possible that Devlin could of had a business thing come up and had to cancel their lunch. KT is good at lulling us into certain expectations then making a sudden left at Albuquerque(Bugs Bunny ref). What will be very angsty for Josh is when Kimmy makes her over nighter with Devlin. I'm sure there will be all the reassurances that she'll be fine etc. KT lead us we'll follow, down the rabbit hole we go with Josh. Yea ha! Cowboy hats held high! ("Dr. Strangelove" imagery)

CSH

Meyer should be a bit more cynical having been burned by his ex. Larry Niven is the best ever.

CSH

I don’t think any bubbles burst, just Josh is increasingly dealing with the real rather than the fantasy. Real Kimmy turned on by real Devlin and Josh increasingly accepting that it turns him on, too. So does this discussion with his buds trigger his bringing up Devlin again with Kimmy and strip away the “one day” myth? I appreciate these scenes with friends as they give us characters grounded in the details of their lives. This is also going to make the flipped scenes that much more devastating for Josh. His friends seeing Kimmy and Devlin flirting together and everyone realizing the obvious and by then, Josh having to cover for her and deny it’s happening. This story really does have dark potential with Kimmy steadily emphasizing Josh’s tendency to enjoy his humiliation. And maybe her realizing she’s thrilled by humiliating him as well.

Chinookfan72

that’s what I’m thinking, also what happened Monday at lunch. If I’m picking nits I’d say I don’t like the recent trend in this story of skipping over the Kimmy and Devlin sex scenes and then reliving them later.. I think it takes away from the angst in wonder how she is going to get away with it etc. For instance in this case, whatever happened Monday at lunch Josh doesn’t know.

Donkatsu

has Steve seen something, or is he just less naive than the rest? Let's face it, except for Steve this is a herd of sthondats (https://larryniven.fandom.com/wiki/Sthondat).

Donkatsu

And while they are at Montana’s, where is Kimmy? If he knew the whether of Kimmy’s panties then he would know the where and the what. If Josh were savvier technologically he would have an app for that.

Mike Monroe

Bravo Steve..finally someone not fooled by Kimmys BS...Josh needed the glass broken on this trust bubble he has for her.. Those actions dont make since . .Why open the window so Devlin to ahead...kimmy has built a House of Cards...it going to fall and fall hard around Josh...glad he will have true friends when it happens.

JamesIsAsleep

Funny dialogue, very well done. And you gotta love the moment where Steve says the true thing we all know and everyone ridicules him for being so out of line ... I really like that choice from a writing perspective.


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