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Devil in the Waters, Book 8, Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2021-11-12 01:00:00 +0000 UTC

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Mike Monroe

Agreed..but I think as promised by KT this one is a darker one so maybe no path to happy ending at least maybe not to Josh ..anyway...Kimmy/Devlin will possible get their way...at his expense...or he will be like every other husband and be happy as a pig in the mud ..to just to invited to have a ringside seat for all there misdeeds.

Wess

Nice take on this epic story RCH. I love the diversity of our readers! But I wouldn't assume my issues with how Kimmy has cheated and lied and Josh's ignorance were something someone like me was not familiar with. I admit my ambivalence toward this story has me totally enthralled. KT is masterful. My favorite writer in this genre. But MM and I are more sympatico on Kimmy's flagrant deception and carelessness over potentially destroying Josh. She's willing to risk the love of her life for amazing sex with Devlin? It just doesn't work for me. I know there is a path to a “happy” ending here and it seems almost inevitable. Maybe I just wanted to see the sparks fly and misdeeds reckoned. Turn the tables and see if Kimmy would embrace Josh's lust and lies for another woman who had dimensions she could not approach.

Mike Monroe

I love your take but I still feel he is a tool...far to trusting of his wife.. When all evidence of something going on in front of him...This Kink...I feel he has been manipulated to believe this is his idea....Does she really love him?? He is her play thing...She doesn't respect him at all...I love to hate her actions but their is no way she truly loves him..just what she can do to him...and get her cake and eat it as well..Devlin is a wildcard and so my be Amy as well..but there still is no way Kimmy loves Josh...the total humiliation she has done behind his back...So great to see the continued devilish action that she inflict on him and their relationship!!! Josh is the Titanic after the Iceberg.

RCH

Well, I don't think Josh is such a tool as much as he is focused on his Kimmy/Devlin kink! As to "Strains the limits of credulity." well unless you have been in this situation it's hard to believe how well KT's done at writing a believable tale! What's happened is Kimmy/Devlin have managed to sexualize "the potential" of Kimmy's infidelity. All the emotions are based on feeling threatened by the situation. Kimmy's truly loves Josh (yes she is selfish) has no intention in leaving him for Devlin. She is trying to manipulate things so she can have Josh and eat Devlin for dessert too. Devlin is the wildcard here. KT has package him in all his studly bully self but what is he going to do. What does Devlin really want??? If he just wants to hurt Josh then send him a video of Kimmy being unfaithful game over! There is more to it than that. He has spent a good deal of effort grooming Josh and Kimmy both. Kimmy seduction was easy and is complete. Josh is a work in progress but if all goes well Josh will be happy to watch Kimmy get with Devlin. If/when Josh gets to watch Kimmy with Devlin and she still shows him all the same love she has for him, he'll learn that there is more to a relationship than a big dick! Josh feels inadequate because "HE" feels it's all about size. Devlin, now what is he up too? I can guest he is going to make a break from his father and he'll want Kimmy with him for that. So he'll have to keep things cool with Kimmy/Josh. Trying to think if there is some domination angle he can work with Josh but he already has that over Josh... and what about the late period?

BNR

I was picturing the actress who played ELEKTRA on the show Daredevil : Elodie Yung

Donkatsu

Who plays Kimmy in the TV serialization? I would vote for Gemma Chan, since she just put sex back into the future (The Eternals), but she may be a bit too old (and pricey).

JamesIsAsleep

Thanks, KT! Forgot about that!

KT Morrison

(when Amy tricked Kimmy to come over to Devlin's house when they were in high school and it was for a threesome and Kimmy wanted no part of it and took off)

JamesIsAsleep

I can definitely fathom the story progressing to this point. Kimmy and Josh have definitely danced around this idea for a long time now in their time together, and Kimmy is an excellent liar. I thought this scene was particularly well done, Josh feeling as if it was his own curiosities that have led to this point and Kimmy letting him think that way. Now she is serving up to him the bridge that connects the concept of fucking Devlin without Josh's knowledge and fucking Devlin with his full awareness, probably even his sanction. He's right there, she set it up for him, she just needs him to walk across it. It's been a challenge to me keeping all of the parts of this story together with the passage of time, what's the significance of the basement that Devlin talks about with Kimmy?

Mike Monroe

Yep!!! I know KT said this one would be darker..and it is..but like you I just don't want him to be so accepting of everything..He has been played this whole series...would love a little pay back by Josh..in some manner.

Wess

Agreed. Strains the limits of credulity. I wish he could be more real. I get that he's blindly in love but does he have to be so completely obtuse? Still some story to tell so I'm still holding out a little hope that he will emerge from his coma and have some awareness of how this all went down. As it stands right now it seems he will be thanking Kimmy for screwing around on him.

Mike Monroe

Masterfully played Kimmy Chang!!!...Josh is silly puddy...blows right past all the evidence ...SHE DID THIS FOR ME!!...REALLY???...No bra??? Asking about his Dick..watching him jerk off...Here Is a woman who ran from Devlin and Amy proposed 3some...but now she so ok with watching Devlin jerk it?...She did this for me!...Wow Josh is just so trusting ..what able the lateness in Cayman ..what about the lateness coming home...eating dinner by himself..no alarm bells going off ..no red flags...He is just totally blind..Devlin wanting to be his friend...asking how his wife is in bed??? No red flags...He is a Tool!!!


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