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Devil in the Waters, Book 8, Chapter 15

🕑 Added 2021-11-14 01:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Wess

Don't forget, Kimmy has asked Devlin to take her on a trip far away so she won't have to worry about Josh - finding out. Maybe Italy for the lust birds? Sounds to me like they both are feeling an intimacy they didn't predict. Good riddance in my opinion but I would like Josh to find another interest. Maybe like Max and Keely. And yes, I would like that to hurt Kimmy…a lot.

RCH

I have to agree that it does seem like Devlin is getting more emotionally invested in Kimmy. When we started Devlin was a very one dimensional character. Overtime Devlin's character has evolved and broadened. Is he truly trying to mend bridges with Josh? I still see him breaking from his father's firm to strike out on his own. Kimmy would be key for the new venture. I still don't see Kimmy ever falling for Devlin romantically. How's it going to turn dark??? Book break cliff hanger will josh hear the rest of the recording...

RCH

Hi Chinookfan72. Been awhile! Nice to see you again. Good observations, Josh is being manipulated into wanting a hotwife situation. The reality is it's is and always has been a cheating wife situation. It's only in Josh's perspective that it's a hotwife situation. How he'll react if and when he finds out is an unknown. It all really depends on how he reacts to Kimmy having sex with his knowledge. If he has a positive experience with it then he may just experience more angst. This could ramp up Kimmy and Josh's sex to even higher levels. Here is a perspective: Things have been good for Kimmy and Josh, sex has been hotter and money wise things are better. There is no indication that Kimmy wants to leave him or is in anyway unhappy with Josh. She is selfish, yes but she doesn't what to leave Josh for Devlin. If he realizes this then he may forgive her because what has he lost? He still has Kimmy she still love him... It's all on how he reacts to the betrayal.

KT Morrison

I'm not taking a break—tonight will be a *book* break for DITW. I'll be putting up Summer Swap chapters for the next week and some more re-edited Cherry Blossoms, and then DITW should be back by the end of this month.

BNR

(To me) This story is MUCH better if both Devlin and Josh now are in love with Kimmy. And Kimmy is also in love with both Josh and Devlin. More & higher stakes! Maybe even Devlin's dad can make a play for Kimmy to confuse the issue further! And Josh should have another suitor as well. Someone who has a real chance at being a reason for Josh to even look at her. Kimmy is too much a part of him now.

BNR

Agreed! Going to read some HEA stories to take the edge off!

BNR

Yup! Me too! I bought the Maggie collection! It's worth the rebuy to get the whole thing in one file!!

JamesIsAsleep

A couple thoughts I had. I find it interesting that Kimmy stopped listening to the recording so early in the actual recording when she was listening to it with Josh. The chekhov's gun here would seem to be that Josh sneaks another listen somehow to the recording and finds out it's actually longer then she let on? Also, I find Devlin's way of talking during his sex with Kimmy to be a bit telling, it doesn't seem like he is messing around with other women, maybe I'm wrong about that because I've forgotten some details. I wonder if Devlin might be getting hooked.

Wess

I know its break time soon but I've found myself rereading Summer Swap. I would love to read more. Lighter for sure but some nice tension and potential for some serious misbehavior. And I tend not to obsess plotting how Kimmy will be confronted with the pain she has caused. Anyway, have a nice and well-deserved break KT. I will miss your stories - even the ones that piss me off!

Chinookfan72

Thanks for the new chapter. This chapter is what Invisioned this story being when we voted on it all so many months ago. Josh is better thought of but not seen. To me this story was supposed to be different from other KT stories, but for most of book seven and all of book 8, up to this chapter, it had fallen back into normal hotwife territory and diverged from the cheating wife tail I was hoping for.

Tracey52

I just hope kt finishes this series. I really want to read where this goes then buy the books, hopefully she’ll republish as a large volume when it’s done, so I can read it all again in a timely fashion. No criticism intended kt, I know your have a lot of works on the go.

BNR

I agree with everyone! Super Hot! OMG! Hot and painful and hot! I also got Maggie vibes from this. Can't wait for more! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Tracey52

Awesome scene. That recording, of course, is the dagger over Kimmy’s head. Josh will find it, and listen to it, I’m sure. The interesting thing/twist will be his reaction after he pukes. Devlin made it clear this wasn’t the first time. Josh may have blamed himself if it was , he seemed already to accept that it may have happened, but it would be hard to believe him accepting it once he finds out the level of deception. Kimmy could find herself without Josh and then not wanting Devlin.

JamesIsAsleep

I was convinced that Devlin and Kimmy had already fucked before they did the recording, playing video games or something as they acted out the scene. No, they fully committed ... well done. It's too bad that Kimmy is so self aware knowing that she couldn't have the amazing sex she's having with Devlin without the strength of her bond with Josh. Definitely a true statement, but it's too bad she already realizes that lol. But it is hot in it's own way.

Mike Monroe

If I couldn't hate her more...She's the absolute Devil...Great writing KT...there is another level of humiliation awaiting Josh...She is the most horrible wife/GF from KT stories...Worst then Maggie...and I absolutely hate her..but Kimmy is a ATOMIC Bomb!!! Josh doesn't deserve what coming his way....both Kimmy and Devlin should burn in hell..again great writing!!!...I hate to love this series...it is torture to watch this unfold...Kimmy has flashing warn light all around her...pure evil..I can see how anyone can say she love Josh...not possible! KT masterful Chapter!!!


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