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SUMMER SWAP // Chapter 36

🕑 Added 2022-03-13 01:00:03 +0000 UTC

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JamesIsAsleep

Oops I displaced the wrong name in my last sentence, I meant Byron. Fixed now...

L_S87

Aha! That makes sense to me now, in context with everything else. If Cody knows her better than Byron does, and continues to deliver on amazing experiences, where does that leave Byron when it comes to sex with Chey? 2nd, 3rd, dead last? That would be scary. Though I think that's also what feeds Chey's jealousy too, in regards to Carla.

KT Morrison

Also, maybe something like: there was great fear that Cody's perception was keen, his analysis sharp. (then another summary statement before heading off to the rest of the paragraph as is).

KT Morrison

I think one little sentence plugged in there will fix any misunderstandings

KT Morrison

No worries! I didn't mean it quite the way you understood it. The 'great fear' (and this is my fault for not making it clearer) is more that Cody deciphered Cheyenne's fantasy. That one night with her and he knew what made her tick. Byron's fear is that Cody is right—in that he knew what Chey's kink was before Chey knew it and was able to provide it.

L_S87

After rereading this, I realized my response came out very negative in regards to the Byron's fears section, for which I apologize KT. It simply confuses me, hopefully later chapters will clear that up for me. Regardless, i like where i think this is headed.

Tracey52

Thanks kt

KT Morrison

1. I'll try to make it clearer when I edit! Chey didn't want Byron when the offer was for Cody to send a picture of her blowing him. Cody figured by her reaction that the idea entertained her but she objected because she wasn't ready for Byron to watch her

Tracey52

I might need some help here but I think there are some discrepancies with the stories. 1. Cheyenne said she thought it was Byron initially but Cody says she didn’t want Byron. That’s a big y. 2. No condom. I thought it was only the last time with no condoms, but Cody made it seem like the whole time at Cheyenne’s request?

JamesIsAsleep

See? Everyone can just get along, all it took is a mutual desire for Cheyenne's lovemaking ... Cody and Philippe are more examples of dynamic characters that KT creates. Cody and Philippe both just come across as genuinely sorry, and almost a little bit naive ... I love the image KT put into my mind of Cody trying to handle Cheyenne's sex drive the night before with a sigh, she was a lot to handle. She needs an expert in the bedroom to keep her happy when she's in that mood. Good thing everybody seems to think that's a great idea, even Byron.

L_S87

Well, that went fairly well, though the obvious revelation about the condom rule that Chey and Byron agreed to but Chey never even brought up is a bit painful. I will say that the section about Byron's "great fear" of Cody being right straight up makes no sense to me. Byron already knows he's right, because Chey told him her fantasy, what she was thinking during that whole scenario. He also knew what she was going to ask for before Carla interrupted them. So the fear doesn't make sense to me, he already knows Cody's right. Fear of where that will lead them, that makes more sense, because what happens if Chey gets carried away again? Other than that, this conversation does a good job of setting up a nice scene when they get together again. Will Byron invite Philippe because he knows it would really light a fire inside Chey? Can't wait to find out.


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