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SUMMER SWAP 2 // Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2022-09-13 00:00:04 +0000 UTC

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L_S87

Great insight, KT. Saying i thought it was "odd" was the wrong choice of words, "interesting" would have been better. Mostly because she was so instrumental during their time together in giving him a "shove" down this path. Like he would be wondering how she could seemingly so accurately predict this path. Then again, he's so hyper-focused on Chey, that it makes sense he would have no other thoughts in his head other than the duality of hating this, yet loving it, and wanting to give Chey everything she wants in this moment due to his overwhelming love (hence the hero). It will be interesting to see what Chey takes out of this. I've been dogging her pretty hard for her bad takes (IMO) regarding selfishness, jealousy and deceit. One wonders how Byron's selfless act will resound with her. Also, even with Chey being the star of this show, let's not forget Scarlet and Sully. Their reaction to this is great. I REALLY like how INTO each other they are. I'm a bit worried for Sully in regards to Philippe, but Scarlet, at least to me, seems to filter a lot of her actions/thoughts through how it will affect Sully. Some of that means she can be a bit mean at times, but never in a way where she loses sight of their relationship coming first. (Something i feel Chey could learn from her, as she needs it badly)

KT Morrison

Byron is being selfless (for now). He's submitting and giving Chey what she wants, no holds barred. He's a guy, so, yeah, he's also thinking what this will mean for him, too, ha ha. But for now, he's the hero of our story!

Tracey52

Hot factor 1000🔥♨️

L_S87

Wow, KT. Just wow. So many things to ponder here. All of them amazing. I was hoping you would give us everyone's point of view, because I felt the scene needed it, so we could grasp how each person is reacting to the spectacle, and how it affects each of them differently. So happy you did that. I will say I find it a bit odd that Byron had no thought of Carla in this scenario, given to this point, she has always been wrapped up in his thoughts on this subject, including her being the one to push him towards this moment because she thought he'd enjoy it like she enjoys watching Cody. It will be interesting to see how you insert her back in as she doesn't strike me as the passive type and has already made it clear she wants another shot at Byron, with Byron obviously indicating the same to Chey. (One of the reasons I'm so down on Cheyenne, because she knows this and yet is selfishly trying to stop that from happening while asking for Byron to sacrifice for her and make what we're watching unfold happen) I'm on pins and needles for the next chapter!


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