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Summer Swap 4.6

🕑 Added 2023-02-16 01:00:06 +0000 UTC

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L_S87

Yeah, he does, but not at the sacrifice of who he is. Carla pointed out his "game", and i know that's why she likes him so much. I'd hate him to sacrifice that for bravery. Hell, it's the reason i pull SO hard for him to actually have a good outcome here that's all about him. Because he's a great guy and deserves it!

KT Morrison

I like Byron, ha ha. He wants to be a good guy! But, yeah, he needs to get braver...

KT Morrison

Thank you!

L_S87

I think it's probably important to point out after reading my own comment that i don't dislike this chapter at all. KT did an amazing job with it, i could "feel" Byron flopping around like a beached fish trying to find his way through this conversation, which made me cringe at how awful it was. When an author can draw those kinds of emotions out, it's rather special. Also completely forgot to mention Lily. That was spectacular, and rather hilarious. Such a temper tantrum she had! A bit miffed at Chey because she should have told Byron her plan, now Byron is saying "i can't" because he thinks he doesn't have permission, even though he does. Could lead to all sorts of hilarity, but in this instance, given how much pain Byron's gone through, i think he deserves a bit of a break and a night of enjoyment rather than confusion, anxiety and doubt. (which, funny enough, was what Chey was trying to avoid. Way to spike the wheel of your own plan, Chey)

Birchowl

Great chapter, I think Summer Swap has become one my favorites among your stories! I've really grown attached to these characters, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!

L_S87

That conversation with Carla had to be one of the MOST painful things I have read in my life. Cringe worthy doesn't begin to cover it. I figured Byron's recent experiences would make him more open and confident, which clearly wasn't the case here, though his lie is obviously tripping things up. I'm sure part of my cringing is due to the fact i HATE it when people use "I mean" constantly. It's the current version of "Like", and makes the user sound vapid and moronic. Things I never really associated with Byron. I'm sure it's mostly due to him still being flustered around Carla. I sure hope his "reward" for being a hero isn't distilled down to a 15 minute titty job in a bedroom. That would be disappointingly mundane. What's not mundane? The "Secret". Obviously Chey told Scarlet something earlier in the afternoon and now Sully is being inducted. Hopefully soon we get to find out too!


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