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Summer Swap 6-1

🕑 Added 2023-05-11 00:00:05 +0000 UTC

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KT Morrison

Your insight is sound though! And I'm glad my characters aren't too predictable.

KT Morrison

We will have to wait and see!

L_S87

Not sure how gifted that analysis is. I'm wrong most of the time! But that's a good thing, imo, since it means the story is rarely predictable and each character is a unique individual who views the world differently than I do. I still feel a bit gutted for Chey, because regardless of me being one of her biggest detractors, I wanted her to get here with less pain. Though maybe the pain was required for understanding? We'll see where "here" leads them. Hopefully somewhere good where they both get enjoyment and the jealousy monster doesn't cripple them, especially Chey.

Githa Datadin

Thank you for responding! With the least chapter of Summer Swap 5 I could see that Byron could fall in love with Carla and the other way around. Their interactions are so differant than Chey and Byron. Lets just how their journy goes. Will they stay together or swap partners :P

KT Morrison

Things are definitely changing—it's subtle, but something is going on!

KT Morrison

And I love your gifted analyses! Thank you. I just try to let the characters be themselves.

L_S87

KT, you are so gifted with dialogue like this. It's truly amazing how artful you can make these discussions with the things that are said, and all the language between the lines that's there, but left unsaid. I find it interesting that after her discussion with Cody, the place Chey got to is she needed to put herself in Byron's shoes and force herself to watch them. She thought their relationship needed the sexual balance of Byron being with Carla so she set that up, but found out along the way that it's more than that. They also need the emotional balance that has her being as magnanimous (such a wonderful word) as Byron, and happily being so, instead of begrudgingly so, with all those awful, selfish thoughts of wanting to wreck things for Byron. Thoughts that make her feel unworthy of Byron. I also find it humorous that she doesn't realize Byron sometimes has similar thoughts, he just manages them much better. Even here, he thinks she's decided she wants to worship Cody. What's funny is that she doesn't know that, and Byron doesn't realize that she spent most of last night worrying something very similar. That Byron would fall in love with Carla and want to worship the big titted sexual goddess that is Carla. Oh, and Scarlet, you need to be worshipping Sully, not the other way around. He just gave you, back to back, the two most amazing sexual experiences of your life. Stop cock blocking (yes, it wasn't malicious, but still a block) and go conspire with Paloma to give Sully the most amazing night of his life, he's more than earned it. (Luckily for Sully, Scar has shown a willingness to do so, even if she hasn't actually walked that walk yet)

Githa Datadin

Ow i cant wait what happens between Chey and Byron! I wonder what Chey is thinking about their marriage. Does she want to continue with the swapping thing or did she underestimated it? She wasnt aware of all these feelings before because she was to focused on herself.


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