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Summer Swap 4-17

🕑 Added 2023-03-28 00:00:03 +0000 UTC

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KT Morrison

Thank you!

Tracey52

I picked up that error too. Great chapter.

L_S87

Another great conversation! I love how Sully so deftly managed this conversation to nudge Scarlet in the right direction. Not typical of him, but so well done. That way, Scarlet doesn't feel manipulated or pushed, she comes to her own conclusion in her own mind with a bit of subtlety from Sully.... and once she gets there and realizes what he's done, boy does she ever decide to reward him for it. Although in typical female fashion, she couldn't just admit that she got his point. I'm guessing that render from a few days ago was foreshadowing? Get the boys all revved up and then point Sully at Paloma and tell him to get to work. Also well done with the "smelling" scene opener. Had me laughing. If Scarlet not admitting anything is typically female, that was very much so typical male. And i was surprised.... and then suddenly not after thinking it through, about Carla's setup. I think maybe she wants them to be equals here? For a variety of reasons. So Byron can feel comfortable, more in control, to show her everything he's keeping inside that he wants to do but is afraid to voice. Also so Byron will trust her. Which i think may be just as much for Carla as for Byron? I think she wants someone she can be comfortable and close with who isn't Cody, and she can't have that with Scarlet or Chey, at least not right now. They have a rather united front against her, and her attempt to be "nice" to Scarlet basically got shoved back in her face. So maybe this is just as much about her feeling free to let go as it is about Byron doing the same. We'll see. I'm not sure Carla has it in her to just be herself without being manipulative along with it. Also, KT, about halfway through, Sully says "What is it about Carla that makes you and Scarlet so jumpy?" Pretty sure that is supposed to be you and Chey.


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