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DITW 12-13: By Merit Rais'd

🕑 Added 2024-01-06 21:29:46 +0000 UTC

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Pete

That's a good question, CSH. Through several prior books, I think KT has suggested that Kimmie has a had a plan or vision for how she wanted to mold Josh. I think vanilla sex between Kimmie and Josh has long been in the rearview mirror. After this, I can't imagine them returning to it.

Bill F Protagoras

"The cruelty soared her heart. The torment she delivered to her husband lifted a cap off her psyche and her thoughts flitted like fast kingfishers looking for juicy little lake bugs to nip out of the air; fat mosquitoes of humiliation and shame and kink." I try not to quote everything, but this is one of your great 'sui generis' epic metaphors!

Andrew Mellein

I can’t wait for Josh’s POV in the next chapter! That will spell how he really feels about this situation he got himself into!

Bill F Protagoras

A wow and now a beautiful! I am gobsmacked! Right back at you for your stunning writing!

Bill F Protagoras

As a kid I remember being regularly regaled by the frustrated baby-like wailing of feline lust in the back entry (alleyway... not an anal reference this time)! Plenty of spitting and yowling too! Cats know how to party! PS No spaying by our family at least!

Bill F Protagoras

Also if I knew the answer... I don't like spoilers... probably accounts for my distaste for Devlin, who is a spoiler and a despoiler on top of it!

Bill F Protagoras

I know in Paradise Lost... but in this Garden temptation is yet to run it's course... What though the field be lost? All is not lost; the unconquerable Will, And study of revenge, immortal hate, And courage never to submit or yield... The Devil thinks he holds divided empire with God, and can sway the beam of victory in Eden... because him and his cohorts durst defy the Omnipotent... as the Parliamentarians defied the Divine Right of Kings... but in your creation it's dealer's choice... and the world is somewhat changed... That's the first question I asked myself... I ask myself, as I asked management... What are the criteria? They were unable to provide a satisfactory answer... as I suspected... You on the other hand seem more competent... (That's meant to be understatement).

Kat

@L_S87 I agree that Josh is there because he wants to be there. He requested this of Kimmy. But, as you said, Kimmy is starting to become selfish and the denigrating him in her mind is going to lead to something bad for Josh. Yes, he likes to be humiliated by Kimmy, he needs it. Being openly humiliated by Kimmy in front of Devlin is a whole other matter, and one that I think will break Josh’s resolve, and break Kimmy and Josh as a couple. The way Kimmy is going she’s likely to start mocking Josh’s “little dick” with Devlin as she gets more and more into things with him, like they’ve done numerous times before. That’s what I meant about her forgetting Josh being there in the room with him. She’s going to lose control, and throw away all caution. How could she not? She’s already kissed Devlin and let him tie her up. There’s still a long way to go. Josh is the reason that they’re there, and she’s going to lose focus. Josh is going to see the truth he craves, as well as the truth that might destroy him. She’s been so lucky so far, but her luck is running out. I can’t wait to see how this plays out afterwards!

KT Morrison

Beautiful!

KT Morrison

But who sits in which throne?

KT Morrison

Haha!

Bill F Protagoras

Different folks, different strokes...

Bill F Protagoras

Milton also wrote "Samson Agonistes"... perhaps the best known line of which is... "Ask for this great deliverer now, and find him Eyeless in Gaza at the mill with slaves.” Rhetorically, in effect, helpless... Da Da Daaaah!

Bill F Protagoras

Of course, I will say nothing...

Bill F Protagoras

If it is KT's intention to lift us out of the gutter she is surely going about it the wrong way... the gutter was good enough for Milton... it's good enough for me... he went hand to hand against the devil like none before him! And the title is ironic, if not satirical of the English Revolution... Merit amongst the fallen angels! Milton really twisted himself in knots trying to justify the ways of God to Man... and I'm sure he meant to mention all that sweet hot compliance too!

Bill F Protagoras

As he stares down on ardent writhing Kimmy and her work mate, it must occur to hubby that he might be redundant to the requirements of their on again off again mutual infatuation private members club... but it's to be hoped he won't be drawn back into Kimberley's quicksand once more... If he doesn't have the courage of his convictions who else will? Sorry KT many worlds theory is all the rage, as much so as runaway capitalism... Of course, it could be he already is showing the courage of his convictions.. but neither-one he observes has time for wild surmise right now as they are scrabbling to their own sordid peak... clinging together in a sweaty abhorrent mutual embrace! And I look disquieted to Josh... "Silent, on a peak in Darien." Homer, Virgil, Dante, Milton, Chapman, Keats... The Epic Tradition... By Merit Rais'd...

Bill F Protagoras

Josh offered her hunchbacked penitence... it's yet to be seen if she can summon up the good grace to accept it... 'Normal sex' lets leave that one on the hob next to 'an honest day's work' and its sibling 'mental health.' Wasn't Josh just asking for visual confirmation of his suspicions with a heretical nipple twist?

Bill F Protagoras

Well...CSH looks like this vessel is headed where our charming hearts have always not so secretly wanted it to... to a lee shore... to the Great Pretender's pretentious glee... Dumb fuck! Worse things happen at sea! Behold the kinkdoms of this earth on special offer... if you will only bow down and worship me! To the Devil a doctrine! Oh, for a cunning plan! Of immaculate conception and strict design!

CSH

And now she has become Devlin destroyer of souls.

CSH

She will probably regret it.

L_S87

You're not wrong, Kat, and neither are your Andrew. But they are both here because they want to be. There are a million different emotions and thoughts flitting through both of them, but in the end, the darkest part of both of them want to see this through. The question just becomes what does the end once they are through this look like. We know what Devlin is going to do. He's predictable. Kimmy has had him enough times to know exactly what he likes and what he'll do and say. The question is how much does Kimmy lean into that to give Josh what she thinks he wants and how much does she selfishly take for herself. Where's the balance point she works toward? The last couple of chapters before this she was firmly on team Josh, but this... this is decidedly shifting towards selfish Kimmy where she's more about herself, which is what got them here in the first place. Because she spent book after book reveling in cheating on Josh. Now she's reveling in rubbing Josh's nose in it. But how far is too far? The interior monolog of calling Josh pathetic and wormy, of saying he's a kitten, not a lion, portend bad things, I think. Because they give Josh no credit for being just enough of a lion to stand up to Kimmy before Devlin got here and make this happen. Because Devlin can pat himself on the back all he wants, but Josh hates his ass way too much to do this for any other reason than his own. And for Kimmy. But if Kimmy starts denigrating him verbally like she currently is internally... I don't know how Josh will take that, especially in front of Devlin. Ultimately they are a team, married, but you can't have a strong team if one partner makes it clear she thinks so little of the other. And that's where I'm worried Kimmy is headed. She'll regret it afterward, but won't be able to take it back. Because as much as she's made it clear she missed this with Devlin and reiterated they had a "good" thing (which shows how warped she can be), this show really revolves around Josh. No Josh, no show, no pleasure, just pain. I thought Kimmy had figured that out... now I'm thinking she won't get it until it's too late. Josh has given her a massive second chance but between Hyun and this scene, she's blowing it.

Donkatsu

Whilst KT attempts to raise our sights out of the gutters where we most(ly) deservedly belong, by bringing Milton to us for our edification, I suspect a second force is at play here as well. Our Devil here is awfully good at what he/she does. That's how to get the big seat, hence our uplifting title. As Kimmie was taunting Devlin about his ability to keep it up, my thoughts turned to The Devil in Miss Jones (1973), with the lovely Georgina Spelvin. According to IMDB: Miss Jones is tired of her life and commits suicide. She comes to a place where it's decided if she will end up in Heaven or Hell. Because of her suicide she should go to Hell but she has the option to return to Earth and live life according to one of the mortal sins for some time. She picks lust and a few days of carnal pleasure follows [sic]. {that leads to a LOT of great sex - ed} I can add that her sentence in Hell is to remain "in lust's thrall" eternally and to share a cell forever with a nutty guy who mumbles continuous nonsense and is not at all interested in schtupping her.

Bill F Protagoras

And worst of all..." Josh wasn’t lion enough to sink his fangs into the idea’s flesh, consume it, make it his own, nourish himself with the forbidden nutrients that made living this awful life so god damned grand. No, this was her gift to him. She was the one who brought Josh the things he needed. Made it okay. She was the one who nourished him." With the foul sustenance which is all she has to offer... Maybe he isn't so eager as she to find the inequities of her awful shared life with Devlin so god damned bully boss orgasm tainted grandiose... not everyone can survive on sloppy seconds and disparagement... not every one wants to be with the ingratiating mean girl!

Bill F Protagoras

It's the hypocrisy that sticks in my craw! And I'm fucking English technically!

Bill F Protagoras

Kimmy's version of her love for Josh always seems to turn away from satisfying him as she once affectionately did, and devolves into her Pavlovian Behaviourist Bitch experiments which fortuitously coincide with her falling off the wagon and surrendering to the one who is her centre stage lover... Josh becomes the butt of her "jokes" while her well-prepared butt adapts to give access to her boss's latest dam busting burgeoning love "offering." Perhaps Kimmy has merely convinced herself that Josh deserves to share her humiliation as the cuckold she doesn't seem to recognize as her lover, but rather her surrogate child. After all Psychoanalysis is hardly empirical science... any one can replace knowledge with assertion. My evidence for Josh's distaste for suffering is consistent with his actual behaviour... not with some subconscious mental treachery. I know I'll get all the deviant arousal "my" head can hold, but I long to know why Kimmy continues to diminish in my opinion where once she was ensconced like Queen Mab. I know she is indulging herself to sate her suffering, but I want to see her take her recently attained powers and use them for someone else's good than her own... and to the detriment of undeserving Devlin. I understand her greed for sex, but can't condone her allowing it to consume herself, and then crush the man who genuinely cares for her under the soles of her Louis Vuitton, then skewer his heart with one of their stiletto heels... then lap his blood up like a quenchless succubus!

CSH

Go easier on Kimmy guys. Lol! She and Josh both have sexual desires that conflict with their feelings for each other. Josh gets off on being humiliated and she gets off on humiliating him. He asked her, pressured her, to push him off a cliff, she loves him, so she is pushing him off. Okay, she takes some pleasure in pushing him, but, damn, there’s just no pleasing some people. Admittedly, it’s a pretty high cliff and he’ll likely never recover from his injuries, but he did ask for it. But here’s a question? Will she ever have normal sex with Josh again, or will all their sexual interactions now be dominated by their kink? she, herself has noted that what she really gets off on with Josh is tearing those emotional orgasms out of him, with her hand. New sex for a new marriage. Smoking hot scene KT!

Bill F Protagoras

At the moment Kimmy has two obsessions... foremost the whirligig ride of Devlin's totemic pole... and getting her own way insofar as her boss and her vanity permits... as for Josh he seems more a problem to be solved than a lover to share a life and family with... Josh himself has chosen the closed book and keeping his own counsel. Kimmy's familiarity with Josh appears to have atrophied into contempt without her realizing it... She has become so full of her own importance that she has no patience for the little things... and Josh is, and has, one... She will put everything to rights... if he will just go back to his playthings and allow her to deal with adult matters... Like her feud with Devlin...

Bill F Protagoras

If I remember rightly Tommy kept his cards close to his chest because he knew that Suki was seriously addickted... the Happy Ending was his... but he graciously shared it with his wife because he knew what side his bread was buttered on.

Bill F Protagoras

"You’re just mad because he’s got me and you’ve got no one.” “I get every fucking thing I want.” Kimmy and Devlin continue to use Josh as a pawn in their vainglorious foreplay... both ignoring the fact they are under the penetrating gaze of his not inconsiderable intelligence... And he no longer has the patience of a saint for their ostentatious powerplays and flamboyantly gross sexual abuse... They know nothing about what he keeps behind the windows of his eyes...

Andrew Mellein

Just got done reading, skimming “Happy Endings” by KT, about Tommy fulfilling his desires by having his wife Suki have sex with his big dicked young boss Dio! It was all planned and communicated between the couple.So I think it’s funny how Kimmy thinks she’s doing this for Josh by having sex with Devlin when the first ten books she did it behind his back! Total opposite circumstances! No way she loves Josh!

Bill F Protagoras

Does Kimmy not have a clue as to how great her contempt for Josh is, as Devlin's familiar... Doesn't she realize she is insulting and profaning all his efforts at reconciliation in the privacy of her own mind by infantilizing him? She should open herself to the last ditch efforts he is making...

Bill F Protagoras

Mike, Josh is not good with all this... It could be said the entire book recounts the myriad ways he is not good with it... and if he ever manages to turn the key to Kimmy's closely secured conscience she will see it too... She has willingly made herself hostage to the scum that ruined Josh's adolescence... because of a trauma the blame for which she drops on her cuckold's welcome mat... like mangled love gifts from a demented moggy in heat convinced that that is just what a human wants... because it's what she wants... She's just replaced the love she once cherished with something more base and calculating a metaphorical cat squalling on a hot tin roof... I personally think spaying would be going too far as she is, after all, only human...

Mike Monroe

Unbelievable scene KT!!! It is definitely a love hate chapter...I do not know how Josh can sit there and watch this! How how can allow his most hated bully do this to the supposed love of his life . How the love of his life has betrayed him all this time and now the truth cannot be denied. I will never understand any husband or boyfriend who is good with watching this especially since it has been done behind his back. He was not a part of this decision from day one. I am hoping for some type of pay back or revenge for Josh!....To me this is heartbreaking. Love the masterpiece that KT has created but shocking that Josh is good with all of this to this point

Bill F Protagoras

By Merit Rais'd... Wow!

Bill F Protagoras

Nature is a Heraclitean fire... Million-fuelèd, nature's bonfire burns on...Flesh fade, and mortal trash... Fall to the residuary worm... This Jack, joke, poor potsherd, patch, matchwood, immortal diamond... Tell the truth and shame the devil... The devil can go fuck himself...

Bill F Protagoras

Devlin shows the submission he doesn't know he owes to Kimberley by rooting his boarish tongue in her expensive truffle trove showing his fealty to his unowned owner... bowing to her nether lands... (preparing them for invasion?)

Bill F Protagoras

"Josh would delight himself with the worst thoughts he could imagine. They were the truth. They were the truth, and with the confirmation playing out before him, she would earn penitence." This will be her penitence, but will there be absolution? And Josh is in the role of Orpheus her deliverer... here to lead the lost shade of his wife out of Hades... and penitence is showing regret, shame, sorrow and repentance for your sins that's what the penitentiary and the penal system are supposed to be about... Do we really think Kimmy knows that? She's a lawyer isn't she? Devlin's advocate, in fact... But she has important things to weigh in the balance... Like the comparative size of 'her' men's dicks, right?

Bill F Protagoras

I will be revenged upon the whole smug pack of you... I will live a good life...

Bill F Protagoras

Wonderful KT epic metaphors...

Bill F Protagoras

A magnificent directorial moment as the set trembles.. and everyone looks for solidly built doorframes to stand in while they mumble prayers to the patron saint of earthquakes... That's Saint Andrew, right! Also the patron saint of happy marriages.

Bill F Protagoras

The Black Kiss has become a grey area...

Bill F Protagoras

The peasants' revolt... immanentizing the eschaton... punting the nuclear football!

Bill F Protagoras

A sexual, existential struggle which it is now plain for those with eyes to see is subject to the cuckold's encompassing awareness... a vision rais'd by his merit.

Bill F Protagoras

It isn't just Josh who is receiving his Twelfth Night Epiphany this his gift of gold representing kingship, frankincense (worship) and myrrh (death and mourning). He is giving it back to his cheating wife too... Can you teach a prime bitch new tricks...especially when she is building up quite the repertoire? Is it too late for her?

Bill F Protagoras

" Losing control she thought she had over the situation (and the men in her life)."

Bill F Protagoras

The underworld turn'd upside-down, the Devil's kiss given to the one who he would want 'his' suppliant to be...

Bill F Protagoras

This is how it all began with Josh's trembling Vision!

Bill F Protagoras

Scrounging empathy is that like scrounging social security? For the weak and disenfranchised. At last Foucault's Discipline and Punish convinces the accused to confess the sins of their imagination! Imagine Foucault turning over in his grave! Foucault pointed out that the only way to convict someone of an imaginary crime such as devil worship or witchcraft was to extort a confession... The porcine capitalism took his condemnation turned it on his head and called it performance management... That is in and of itself a convincing argument that deviltry exists... If Kimmy only knew?

Bill F Protagoras

Her new cooperation! The Devil's indoctrination...

Bill F Protagoras

A tour de force majeure!

Bill F Protagoras

Her pathetic wormy husband... (I think this is the unkind of thing Mr Dylan was refering to when he said... If my thoughts and dreams could be seen they'd probably put my head in a guillotine.) How far has she gone... a deserving member of the firm an expert broker... A Devil's Epiphany for a Devil's Disciple... Open War meet Covert Guile...

Donkatsu

No question about that!

CSH

This is turning into your hottest scene ever.

Bill F Protagoras

Aaaaaaarrrrrgh! Performance Management! Inhumane Resources! Divide and Rule.... This is Hell! Satan Exalted sat... Let me get it right... this is how Paradise was LOST...

Donkatsu

Wow! What a swift progression straight into the throes of her lust for Devlin. To hell with Josh, eh Kimster? Even in the midst of all this great trashy sex, Kimmy is thinking about how this can be used to gaslight Josh. This is genius level evil and compartmentalization.

Andrew Mellein

The wait was worth it! This chapter is like a four lane pile up on the I-95 (LOL) Get out of there Josh!

Andrew Mellein

Josh needs to get out of there! He has all the evidence he needs. Tongue kissing, sexual body positioning, by Kimmy it's all there! Why is he torturing himself? Does he like humiliation? I hope there is no reclamation sex after this! And anal rimming! most men in this situation would be out of there and calling their divorce lawyer (LOL)

Andrew Mellein

I hope this scene does not dissolve into reclamation sex with Josh after Kimmy gets pounded by Devlin like a lot of hotwife writers do! I know Josh is probably a voyeur cuckold but Kimmy cheated on him with Devlin and Hyun and she needs to be out on the streets! I don't understand why Josh is in the room after Kimmy after she said no tongue kissing and then proceed to do just that with Devlin. Also her sexual positioning of her body with Devlin. If that does not show more hints of her affair I don't know what does! Also anal rimming! I would totally be out of that room and calling my divorce lawyer (LOL!) I cant to see Josh POV next chapter. Get out of there Josh go find a gal at a bar or somewhere and have revenge sex. Kimmy is a hoe!

Kat

But we knew Kimmy wouldn’t last long now, didn’t we? Lol I can see Josh eventually bolting out of there, once Kimmy completely forgets that he’s there.

L_S87

Jake has this right. You're killing us with how well this is being written, KT. I love it. I hate it. It's spectacular. And we see Kimmy losing her resolve, she's trying, but this is quickly spiraling out of control where she's making it more about her than about Josh as she had originally intended. It will be interesting to see how far this devolves and how much Josh can take before it becomes too much. And then what does Josh do? Give in, crumble? Or bolt? While Devlin laughs his ass off at the chaos and destruction.

Jake Hawes

You're killing me


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