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DITW 12-14: Le Baiser

🕑 Added 2024-01-09 03:59:00 +0000 UTC

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Kat

That’s a good question. Josh seems to be into Kimmy with Devlin, not Kimmy with someone else. It has to be Devlin. He wasn’t a cuckold before Devlin started messing with his mind. He may have been predestined to be this way, but Kimmy and Devlin brought it out of him. Devlin seems to be the key. He has a past with Devlin that started when he was just coming into puberty.

Pete

If Josh does end up leaving Kimmie, I do wonder... To what end? Josh fantasizes about being a cuckold. It seems to be the only thing that gets him hard now. Can he even function, sexually, in a vanilla relationship? With a brand new partner, wouldn't he simply re-create much of this, if not all of it? All over again?

Bill F Protagoras

Interval...The Seventh Seal... Do you know how to keep a secret? The voice asks with the sable tones of the night... her opponent looks down at his piece upon the board and bows his humble features as though in confirmation, her handsome companion sneers and lays his large manicured paw in her simmering lap... her opponent coughs apologetically and embarrassed by their unashamed intimacy murmurs 'yes'... then tentatively makes his move... her derisory laughter erupts with patently false sympathy... tightening his scrotum and stirring his unimpressive prick... the beloved back of her hand dismissively brushes the maiden's blush on his cheek and her dulcet chimes ring out over the battlefield... well so do I !!! Frustrated he groans... in check once more...

Bill F Protagoras

Interval...The Seventh Seal... Do you know how to keep a secret? The voice asks with the sable tones of the night... her opponent looks down at his piece upon the board and bows his humble features as though in confirmation, her handsome companion sneers and lays his large manicured paw in her simmering lap... her opponent coughs apologetically and embarrassed by their unashamed intimacy murmurs 'yes'... then tentatively makes his move... her derisory laughter erupts with patently false sympathy... tightening his scrotum and stirring his unimpressive prick... the beloved back of her hand dismissively brushes the maiden's blush on his cheek and her dulcet chimes ring out over the battlefield... well so do I !!! Frustrated he groans... in check once more...

Bill F Protagoras

"My heart was to thy rudder tied by th’strings And thou shouldst tow me after. ” Maybe this should be Josh's motto... or not.

Andrew Mellein

I wonder if his mind will melt in a good way or bad way? You never know with Josh at this point.

Bill F Protagoras

The Poor Mouth... I only know it in translation... It's about poverty in Cork, Ireland... but as I said... "Kimmy's poor mouth", I was speculating on a title in a foreign language... it was originally written as Myles na gCopaleen in Irish but the the English version is credited to Flann though he didn't translate it. It's a parody of other biographical books in Irish... the humour is pretty grim. They were trying to cash in on his emergence from the Irish market... It's one of my favourites but really has no relevance to DITW except my belated schoolboy humour... the illustrations were good, but I no longer have a copy.

KT Morrison

Another Flann O'Brien reference! My writing Irish is quite poor, though. :sadface:

Bill F Protagoras

That fertilizer keeps turning up to stink up Kimmy's wanton langour...

Bill F Protagoras

An Beál Bocht as a title for the next instalment... just a silly joke!

Tracey52

Josh’s mind will melt when Devlin starts to fuck her.

Tracey52

One can only hope. Maybe something to do with the PI or Devlin’s dad and the business?

Andrew Mellein

I have a feeling Josh has an ace up his sleeve. And at the very end he is going to ruin Devlin.

Mike Monroe

This is terribly delicious and awful all the same ...I can't see how even if some part of Josh is turned on by what is happening in front of him how he can live with this . The truth of her betrayal is really now in front of him. There is no hiding that this is not the 1st time or the third that Kimmy has been with Devlin. His arch enemy his nemesis. All the hate he has for this man has to be like a volcano on his insides. This is world ending ..life ending in some cases. Yes he asked for this ...As the says states be careful what you ask for! As much as Josh has seemed weak I believe there will and should be some sort of shift of how this ends. All shoes have not dropped and I look forward to the dramatic ending. As a fan of Dawson's Creek ...I don't want Joey with Pacey ..I don't want Maggie with Cole...But this is up in the air! Bravo KT this is better than a movie it is epic! I am team Josh all the way! I am hoping for a redemption arc!

Kat

Totally better than TV! Lol As much as I really don’t want to see them reconnect afterwards, I suspect that Josh may still be okay with everything Kimmy did after this is over. Although, he seems to putting the pieces of Kimmy’s affair together, he also can’t stop himself from loving it, too. He wants to be in that room. All of his lurid dreams are coming true. Once it all really sinks in, and he finds out that she’s pregnant, that may be his breaking point. I sure hope it is! He’s going to know that the baby is Devlin’s. And as much as Josh is able to watch Devlin defile his wife, and watch how his wife loves it, I can’t believe that he’s going to want to raise Devlin’s child. And what about Hyun? What will she do if she finds out about this, when she realizes Kimmy used her?

Andrew Mellein

Great chapter KT! I wonder how Josh is going to make it through his bully fucking his wife! Will it be reclamation sex or angry accusations of her infidelity! Or maybe a bit of both: angry hard sex. Either way he is committed to watching this act even though he has all the answers he needs. I can’t wait how this plays out! Better than any movie or television show!

Bill F Protagoras

You're lucky to know what you like... I like how KT manages to keep us spoiled for choice... it refreshes my palate.

Bill F Protagoras

Le Baiser ! kimmy now completely naked, oops forgot to send, too engrossed! BTW loved Devlin's 'dropsical' dick, as I did the 'pound of flesh' in an earlier instalment, and its mesmeric effect on doting Kimmy in this!

Bill F Protagoras

Your fault I thought it though... and Keats was one of the Romantics most influenced by Milton's style...

Bill F Protagoras

Inarticulacy is its own form of eloquence! In my book! I am used to people confusing my tone of voice with sarcasm or irony when I have no such intention, it makes me more sensitive when writing... if that's what the exclamation points are about then I shall refrain from similar comments in future... If not I am puzzled... I thought it was a reaction to the efficacy of your work!

Bill F Protagoras

Fucking more enigmatic than ever... excuse my Dutch though the etymology in English is obscure!

Bill F Protagoras

God, did Nia do some silent suffering for a while there, but her mate had her back and nudged her out of the slump... small mercies ey, you can't beat 'em!

Bill F Protagoras

I know I'm coming off a bit exigent recently... but I still luv'er... who wouldn't love a woman with a such pretty cunny (I think it's a term of endearment used by Lady Chatterley's lower class lover... he usually uses "tha cunt"... the character abused his wife if I recall, spoilt it for me).

Bill F Protagoras

I confess I didn't write it...

Bill F Protagoras

Another poignant one worder!

Bill F Protagoras

Nia had her girlfriends though she didn't realize it for a time, but Kimmy Whatever-her-name-is only has Hyun(who has a conscience), her oldest friends she keeps at arm's length (I wonder why?)... Then there's Amy, but who knows where her 'loyalties' lie?

KT Morrison

Frameable!

KT Morrison

Thank you! Fixed in the MS. I sometimes post these without re-reading or editing—speed of delivery vs accuracy, ha ha. I appreciate the input; it helps snipe my errata.

KT Morrison

Oof! ha ha

KT Morrison

I take great joy in provoking a laugh amidst such depravity!

KT Morrison

!!

KT Morrison

Ooh, god damn, that's good.

Bill F Protagoras

There is something inherently desperate and self-destructive in Kimmy's behaviour like she yearns to suffer and be reproached and forces herself into situations of isolation from those who would offer consolation... one way or another she needs to recognize her guilt (or gilt)... and whether she realizes it or not she is hellbent on a vicious circle of exposure... she keeps pushing herself to the limits of her strength... I fear it's time for her to suffer again... and what better thing to suffer from than her excesses whilst blinded by a philistine...

CSH

Yeah I agree that Kimmy has been lying to herself a lot.

Donkatsu

Amazing writing, KT. You made me laugh out loud, even through the hot sex between Devlin and Kimmy and the vacillating confusion of Josh about just what role he ever played in Kimmy's affair. You hint that Josh may be coming to a different conclusion about his centrality in this affair, finally realizing he was not the cause or motive force. Then what? {more hot sex! That's what - ed.}

Bill F Protagoras

Don't doubt it for a moment, Josh... Devlin is gonna make sure you know a gallon of his seed is going to flood that secret place deep inside your true love's sweet cunny where you and no other man has ever reached... and you can't say he hasn't, in all his magnanimity, told you so!

Bill F Protagoras

I just realized Devlin is what is known ironically in modern terminology as a 'bad actor,' one who commits misconduct... He is certainly laying it on with a trowel much to Josh's contempt... he also still seems convinced he is the puppet master as far as Josh is concerned... and though he might not feel as unassailably irresistible to his employee as he used to be, he is using props to up the 'netorare' factor as a stopgap... fetishizing her "submission." Relying, as he frequently does on (love) muscle memory...

Bill F Protagoras

BTW KT Sizzlingly original sensuality... I squeezed my thighs together in existential solidarity with Josh...

Bill F Protagoras

As you see Kimberley Chang still has a ways to go to regain my good report...

Bill F Protagoras

On the other hand, I don't see Josh being smug so much as making a few rash assumptions cos he usually errs on the side of skepticism!

Bill F Protagoras

Well put! And that is not sarcasm.

Bill F Protagoras

Maybe you should rack KT's brains... Also Kimmy's composure? Her dissembling perhaps... one of my theories is that Kimmy has been covering up her discomposure for quite some time... maybe most effectively from herself, except when she is jarred by the shock of Josh's withholding himself... taxing the credulity of her smug haughty airs. Josh still hugs his image of ex-Kimmy, his wife inside his mind even while he glimpses the awful depths of her treacherous salacious nature and watches her going at it salt as monkeys with her overbearing fancy man. I wouldn't be surprised if he were teetering on the high-wire... His delightful cuckoldress may wallow sowishly in impugning the effective reach of his meagre tool but the man has balls!

Jake Hawes

OMG

Bill F Protagoras

In fact, the entire fucking poem... I'm sure Josh and Keats would've got on like a house on fire!

Bill F Protagoras

"Ay, in the very temple of Delight Veil'd Melancholy has her sovran shrine, Though seen of none save him whose strenuous tongue Can burst Joy's grape against his palate fine; His soul shalt taste the sadness of her might, And be among her cloudy trophies hung."

Bill F Protagoras

It's a privilege to see you at work KT... you never disappoint... If Kimmy's song be Josh's muse give me excess of it... it has a dying fall... but that might just be me!

CSH

Josh showing moments of real insight here. Though wavering, he’s still keeping himself composed. Does he make it through this all outwardly tough and seemingly unaffected or does his composure break and his control abandon him as Kimmy’s has abandoned her? He comes off tougher and more honest though just a tad smug. And what’s this, by the way? “For a brief second, he could see the beautiful perfection of his plan.“

Bill F Protagoras

In a word... epic.

Bill F Protagoras

He's gonna need it... if you'll forgive my vile pun, Devlin is really coming into his own... or so he seems convinced... Subtly preparing to be a bull in his very own China shop perhaps... tasteless racism aside, rife with ambiguities... and the eminence gris remains... wherever they do? I think they have a club...

Bill F Protagoras

" A smorgasbord of sexual delights"... I love Josh's bitter humour!

Bill F Protagoras

Maybe now Josh is living his nightmare he will be free to dream...

Bill F Protagoras

It's true KT and you have showed it us to be so... the devil is in the details... Kimmy is the whore who kissed and didn't tell! Yet her treacherous corporeal sins brazenly reveal themselves to her genuine unlauded devotee! Josh is nobody's fool... except for hers... but the sword outwears the sheath... and as each consecutive episode hints... the soul wears out the breast... the heart must pause to breathe, and love itself have rest... alternately Josh has never been but a nerdy profligate, despite the insistence of that temptress, his harlot wife. She keeps on insisting she does it for the money, naturally I take her at her word.

Bill F Protagoras

Kimmy Agonistes grinding like the other slaves... earning her just reward... earning her daily bread... so deplorably banal except in this moment for Josh... the existential nausea... hell is his other person locked in himself! Whose body is lewdly locked with another's.

Bill F Protagoras

Letting (h)er legs flop wide... correction

Bill F Protagoras

Heisenberg's Uncertainty principal, the kiss of Judas! "For a brief second, he could see the beautiful perfection of his plan. It vanished in vulgarity:"

Bill F Protagoras

I don't know KT... Klimt, covered in Kimmy gold, a false adornment... Rodin's rough moment chipped from stone... now this is beauty, the terrible naked continuous betrayal of the flesh just as Josh knew it might be but could never have imagined in all its consequence and disappointment... ongoing riding the wave where the past plunges its lusty tongue into the future's waiting maw...

Bill F Protagoras

Raw reality like heroes clashing on the plains of Troy... the art subtracted from the martial... the basic mechanics of mutilation and death... recorded orally from the stone age to the bronze... the cruel kiss of crude weaponry on human flesh... in retrospect not for fine horses or trade routes... but because Alexandros broke the rules of hospitality and despoiled the disaffected body of Aphrodite's gift to Menalaos... not for revenge or lands but because two bodies betrayed and kissed.

Kat

Very interesting title for this chapter, KT. My grandmother had a replica of the Rodin sculpture “The Kiss” in her house. While it appears to be two lovers in a passionate embrace, it’s actually two lovers committing adultery, and the wife’s husband kills them both when he finds out. Interesting indeed. 🤔


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