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DITW 14-20: Odyssey 15

🕑 Added 2024-05-29 19:54:25 +0000 UTC

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Bill F Protagoras

Josh... to gently make fun of someone or talk to them in a joking way, synonym tease.

Bill F Protagoras

"Glenn, too. He said you’d fingered some skank.” Devlin nodded, slow, eyes burning on Josh’s. “Was that Kimmy?” “Kimmy’s no skank, Josh.” Devlin is daring to snidely rebuke Josh! “Was that Kimmy?” Devlin raised his eyebrows, looked away by a small measure. “Yeah,” he said. “Yeah, it was.” "Trifles light as air Are to the jealous confirmations strong As proofs of holy writ." Iago planting 'evidence' of Desdemona's 'adultery.'

Bill F Protagoras

Netoromanza - Cuckbook or Grandchild: A Novel. "The front door of the apartment opened, someone coming in, and she cursed and jumped up, scrambling naked with nowhere she could escape to." " Now here she was nursing the seed from her husband’s aching balls, comforting him with a prescribed milking, coaxing the poison from his system." “Hurry up and come already, I have to get to work.” “Tell me— Tell me what you did. Tell me what you did with him.” "She didn’t think they had any condoms here in the apartment. They’d been bareback for a while. She liked it raw". “You’re humiliating me now while you’re saying I shouldn’t be humiliated". "The very essence of romance is uncertainty"

Bill F Protagoras

I asked your mother for you She told me that you was too young I wish dear Lord that I'd never seen your face I'm sorry you ever were born Irene good night Irene good night Good night Irene and good night Irene I guess you're in my dreams Sometimes I live in the country Sometimes I live in town Sometimes I have a great notion Jumping in, into the river and drown Irene good night Irene good night Good night Irene and good night Irene I guess you're in my dreams Stop ramblin' and stop gamblin' Quit staying out late at night Go home to your wife and your family Stay there by the fireside bright Irene good night Irene good night Good night Irene and good night Irene I guess you're in my dreams I love Irene, God knows I do I love her 'til the sea runs dry If Irene turns her back on me I'm gonna take morphine and die Huddie Ledbetter

Bill F Protagoras

"Amy clung to his leg and knelt before him in sexual worship." Also the position a suppliant assumes when begging a favour. As did grieving Priam, kneeling before Achilles slayer of men. Kissing the hand.

Bill F Protagoras

It's possible, but I doubt that KT will repeat the same formula. The opacity of Kimmy Chang is like a lustrous golden chrysalis just now... matching the offspring and the buried treasure of her womb. Her husband's gloating rival is all set to pillage the prize he imagines he has won... victory is within his greedy rapacious reach. His allies await the sharing of the erotic spoils. When the city falls the women and children are carried off into servitude. Josh has passed over into the realm of death and is only half returned. His future once ripe with change, is now weighed down by the mordid burdens of the past. He and his wife are adrift, harbourless and apparently rudderless, The power of decision seems to have been snatched from their hands... their own characterization of themselves as the Waters is nullified by the greedy attentions of outside forces that have cleft them apart. Josh and Kimmy are effectively separated... The comfortable prelapsarian innocent existence they once thought to share into a prosperous future has dissolved into a dew... Sometimes going with the flow means being flushed down the drain.

JL23

It’s a pretty easy way to separate them for a while, a la Nia and Geoff in their final book. Josh goes to Rome, maybe starts learning there’s a life for him without Kimmy. Maybe Samara and/or Gabrielle go with him, and he has his “Geoff in the hotel room with the hot agent” storyline. Kimmy stays in Toronto, works for Devlin and starts to see how empty that life now feels. Then, have something that brings them back together at the end, say a little human Kimmy is going to produce in about 6 months? There’s still everything about the money and whether she gets in trouble for it, but if we still have 50 chapters or so, there doesn’t feel like much more story to tell with their relationship as is. Or even if they officially get back together. So breaking them up for an extended period seems the most likely scenario to me.

Andrew Mellein

I wonder if Kimmy is going to go with Josh or stay at Stone?

Bill F Protagoras

Finally finished "For All Mankind"...It did not disappoint! It was wonderful how the lives of the characters were pulled together into a rich but convincing tapestry. It may not have reached the same heights as the new Shogun, but it was an impressive ensemble piece of television. I can't wait to see how KT will take advantage of Josh's absence on business this next time round! Unflagging originality time after time!

Bill F Protagoras

Yup!

Andrew Mellein

Kimmy has inherited her sadism deliciously from her KT universe sister Jess. After all Jess loved to belittle her poor small appendage husband Pete with her big dicked lover Tyler. She loved Pete’s suffering. Although Kimmy wasn’t as flamboyant about it as evil housewife size bitch Jess was!

Andrew Mellein

I kinda of hope she wails on Amy, makes Devlin wear panties, doesn’t sign the contract, and flips them the bird. That might have some form of redemption but even if she does she will still be in the same place with Josh. She should have quit her job after the hotel (who cares about the money) and tried to fix her relationship with Josh. You know how a normal person would have done to an aggrieved cuckolded partner. Instead after Josh tried to off himself we are here. Sad. But I think there is redemption for Kimmy she just wants to want it.

Andrew Mellein

Isn’t Josh supposed to going back to Rome?

Bill F Protagoras

Devlin is a prince! The Waters brought it on themselves! Beggars can't be too choosey!

Bill F Protagoras

"Six months ago, they were pregnant and were about to begin a family." Netoromanza "The whole thing seemed like a blur—no, a greasy smudge on the soot smeared window of an abandoned factory." How can such brilliance be so aptly evocative through grimy miserable urban destitution? And there are miserly wankers who fret they are not getting their money's worth per word! NB. 6 months, and Josh just got back from Rome.

Bill F Protagoras

"He told her to roll over, and she did, unsure, a hint of worry maybe. But when she showed him her back, he reached beyond her and turned off the light, then put his arm around her. At his embrace, he sensed she’d begun to cry, so he held her tighter and fell asleep." Netoromanza

Bill F Protagoras

"And shame accumulated again, but now he didn’t cherish it, didn’t polish it and place it on any mantle to be admired from his leather chair. Now he hated it." What! No sarcasm! No irony, Bill? No... Netoromanza

Bill F Protagoras

"I come so hard hurting my husband. It makes me squirt to know he suffers." A quote from Kimmy's unpublished diary courtesy of Joshua Waters. Netoromanza

Bill F Protagoras

"Only she didn’t supplicate before it, didn’t grease the seed from his reproductive terminals, she lay 'prostate' in horrible sacrifice, offering up her tight sexual core for Devlin’s sacrament." Josh's imaginary rendering of Devlin's sacrament! Netoromanza Should be prostrate...

Bill F Protagoras

"Now here she was nursing the seed from her husband’s aching balls, comforting him with a prescribed milking, coaxing the poison from his system." Aaaah, the milking of human kindness... Netoromanza.

Bill F Protagoras

Good question about her eschewing the evil Stone(s) Empire... can Kimmy reintegrate a humble happiness into her existence and leave envy, knee jerk ambition and affectation behind... or at least make some inroads into the mammoth task?

Mike Monroe

Yeah ..but is there redemption in Kimmy??? She has pulled a order 66...and why would Josh want anything to do with her .. he could never ever trust her! She lies and the truth is not in her! She would have to get rid of Devlin and Amy and the evil empire of Stone businesses! Does she has that in her ? We shall see!!

Bill F Protagoras

Moggies are, as I know from personal experience, extremely noisy uninhibited passionate and shameless lovers... this I offer as anecdotal evidence of their infamous ties to sex! And gangbangs!

Bill F Protagoras

But Vader did make one ultimate redemptive act for his son, did he not, Mike?

Bill F Protagoras

As Prince Tui Teka suggested and Johnny Nash divulged "There are more questions than answers... the more I find out... the less I know!"

Bill F Protagoras

Do Kimmy and Josh take turns carrying her soiled knickers around? Is there more than one pair doing the rounds at the same time? PS I liked and appreciated your reply.

Bill F Protagoras

As I said a lot of what the mind does is none or preverbal... and mixed feelings are rife... while sex or lust really centres our attention whilst simultaneously submerging us in wild great god Pan, Dionysian ecstasy to the delighting detriment of reason. As for 'pussy' like the word 'coney' for a rabbit also associated with the 'vagina', which itself signifies a sheath, it seems to be associated with fur and stroking, though it has also been connected to the Old German word for a purse, which image Devlin attaches constantly to 'his' inamorata's penetralia. At the beginning of "Othello" Iago recommends that Rodrigo, who wants to defile Desdemona, put money in his purse in order to achieve his lecherous goal. Of course, its the black ram who ends up tupping D's rich father's white ewe! 'Spouse', on the other hand, is Latinate and associated to the vows of bride and groom, in Spanish 'esposos or esposas' also means handcuffs... Etymology is, especially when it comes to taboo words and euphemisms, a quagmire for students and scholars who like to get their hands dirty. A serious investigation would be voluminous and we'd most likely still end up none the wiser... With etymology I suspect that what really counts is the thrill of the chase, the journey almost as much as the destination... which brings us back to pussy! I hope you can glean some insight from this rush job, D!

Mike Monroe

When I read this All I think about is Obi Wan line about Vader being twisted and evil...that is how I see Kimmy now turned to the dark side ...Will Josh say there is still good in her?? Possibly not??

Donkatsu

Bill, do you think pussy is a corruption of the French, "epouse"? As to Kimmy's thought process, if she is able to pivot so quickly into the previously unknown Amy and Devlin BDSM situation to exact Josh's and her revenges, then she is the attorney I want if ever I am in Real Big Trouble. Josh would be literally a second's thought, just a referential point, once she saw the situation laid out before her. The plan for vengeance would materialize on the fly and very quickly. I have known people like this and they make better friends than enemies. Or, she just might be getting turned on, big time.

JL23

Kimmy’s spin is that controlling Josh, and him wanting to be controlled, sexually at least, is the integral part of why this turns her on so much. That if he wasn’t in the picture, she wouldn’t enjoy it in the same way. I think we’ve seen a lot of evidence that isn’t the case, all the stuff with Hyun really has nothing to do with Josh for instance. But this is a good test to that theory. Josh isn’t really in the picture now, at least as far as Kimmy thinks their marriage is basically hanging by a thread, if that. So she can’t really spin what she’s engaging in here is ultimately for Josh, something she’ll share with him when he “wakes up” and realizes he wants this. What she’s doing here is really for her own pleasure, and perhaps her need for revenge.

Bill F Protagoras

Although come to think of it... why exactly did Kimmy make Devlin wear her satin panties in the first place? Josh could still be an afterthought... we'll just have to wait and see I suppose.

Bill F Protagoras

I'm really sorry if I came across as critical of your opinion, Donkatsu. I think that while Kimmy was cat (pussy) and mousing her old school chums, I am almost certain, you are spot on and Josh was as far from her salacious thoughts as he was from her revving body!

Pete

Josh may be indifferent to it. Then again, Kimmy might humiliate Devlin not for Josh's pleasure, but for her own. There was a question raised recently about whether Kimmy only enjoys humiliating Josh. This might answer that question.

JL23

I suspect we know everything of note on the previous week panty play. She told Devlin the baby was his, which got him to agree to wear them, then she whispered in his ear all the nasty ways they were going to humiliate Josh while making millions of dollars (Canadian - not sure on the current exchange rate) with their business. I don’t think there’s more to that one. As for the possible panty play proffered presently, Kimmy may have something more extreme in mind, like pegging Devlin maybe? That would be pretty extreme, and not sure Devlin would submit that far yet. But it would be an ultimate power move and something she could show Josh as an ultimate humiliation of his bully. But at present moment, it doesn’t feel like Josh would really be animated by that. He’d see it more as Kimmy humiliating Devlin, not him.

Andrew Mellein

This great series needs a great big send off! Thank you KT!

Andrew Mellein

Yes I hated how she always humiliated Pete. Even though he allowed her everything with Tyler. And Tyler was written as a young buff jock lunatic. For me Jess is KT’s vilest female creation. Bar none. At least we know Kimmy had trauma in her life. What’s Jess excuse!

Bill F Protagoras

Didn't find any errors, KT... except for binds which seems to have replaced bonds in the contemporary American idiom... so 'nuff said, soonest mended...

Bill F Protagoras

What new mysteries have we here? "But just as she’d worshipped at his altar, he had begun to worship at hers, requiring some of the rare sacraments only she could perform." Will Amy bear witness as the apostate Devlin comulgates at the altar of the Church of Kimmy Chang? More importantly when shall we congregants?

Bill F Protagoras

"There had been many times this summer her very own behavior could be observed this way. Many times this summer, she’d worshipped Devlin’s cock and sang hymns to his deep thrusting, writhing on the bed in sultry passion as Devlin did dark and nasty things to her body with his incredible cock, made her cast aside all that mattered for one of those singular moments of intense pleasure unlike anything she’d experienced before." In this paragraph there is no dodging the issue, no passing the buck, no ambiguity or obscurantism, there are no white lies, no calculated omissions or coy understatement... is this the cruel confession she withheld from her sainted husband... are these precious secret thoughts, the mere suspicion of which would lend added propulsion to another comfy chair careening once again at Devlin's offensive features... a blessed opportunity that might never grace Kimmy's sight again... Grandest of Inquisitors or not?

Bill F Protagoras

I've read it at least twice, it is a great beautifully written book. I know I read the last half again on top of that, because I wanted there to be a clearer redemption and reconciliation for the wife and not for her sake alone... She had atrocious taste in the bull she picked and the humiliation game with Pete became unadulterated sadism, and needless cruelty. The heroic transformation Pete underwent was invigorating... compensating to some extent for the ill tempered ungrateful reaction to what was Jess's reluctant rescue from a kind of one-woman-at-a-time cult. What pissed me off most is it seemed like she had every intention of trading her children in for a sleek shiny knob. And until the easter egg, I felt that her return to her family might well be only for her short term convenience. She was lucky to have married 'a real man.' And have kids who hopefully didn't ever learn how badly their mother behaved. Despite the resentment Pete's loving sister felt towards her...

Bill F Protagoras

My mouth waters

Chris K

Good! 😄

KT Morrison

50 chapters are not out of the question

Andrew Mellein

Was thinking about rereading "Learning Lessons". Because I have only read it once. Read half of the first chapter then stopped. I think compared to alot of KT stories and novels which I reread a bunch of times and love. Learning Lessons is too painful and feels like my skin is being flayed off (LOL!) But I do think it helped put KT on the map for me. And that's where I will give it credit. Also it's written beautifully!

Andrew Mellein

I would love for Kimmy to ram a dildo up Devlin's ass for pretty much helping to destroy her marriage! (LOL!)

Bill F Protagoras

Maybe he also yearns for it... like a Norwegian blue yearns for the fjords.

Bill F Protagoras

I certainly have a preference but ripeness is all!

Kat

Devlin…he deserves it.

Kat

Yep, I thought the same thing. Is the Devlin replica in that drawer, too?

Andrew Mellein

Amy?

Tracey52

Somebody is getting it in the arse, but who?

Bill F Protagoras

He means the last book, which KT said would be extra long.

Bill F Protagoras

Yes, the vagary of other useful items gave me a certain hankering.

Bill F Protagoras

Thank you, for your sufferance and consideration.

Donkatsu

perhaps.

L_S87

I'm right there with you, Kat. That's what the HEA lover in me wants to see, but that really hasn't been who Kimmy is for most of the series. So the question is, did what happened to Josh really have that profound of an impact on her to use this moment to secure a modicum of freedom and retribution for Josh, where she then turns towards giving Josh the proof he desires to show she gets it, or does she wallow in the debauchery Devlin and Amy are tempting her with. And all this supposes that Josh is okay with what she's doing. It will be the height of painful irony if she did do the mic drop I mentioned, going home to tell Josh she's done with that asshole, here's the proof I ruined him, only to find Josh gone and a note that he saw where she was at and he's done with waiting, papers are incoming. I'd hate that, but it would make a lot of sense and Kimmy has certainly earned it.

Bill F Protagoras

Maybe this entire scene is all about Josh... Especially, when reading we frequently fall in the trap of only perceiving verbalization as the quintessence of thought. The brain is a prodigious multi tasker! This is a general comment not a dig, not ad hominem I respect your opinions. When I say 'we' it is not underhand sophistry.

Pete

I'm reminded that we still aren't truly certain of everything on that videotape. We know that Devlin wore panties at one point. But... How did Kimmy get him to submit? And what else (if anything) did she do to him? Kimmy just tossed lube on the bed. We might assume it's for Devlin's big pole. But...what if it isn't? What are those "other useful items" she just pulled from the dresser?

L_S87

Lol, Donkatsu. I'm trying to put on a brave face here, but KT is stringing us along perfectly with this. It's artfully done. I really have no idea what Kimmy is going to do. I know what I want her to do... but Kimmy rarely does that, so I'm left spinning in mental circles.

Chris K

So, this last book will be about 50 chapters? So much more going on than the Devlin and Amy shit, but ok!

Kat

She is all over the map in her thoughts. Lol I’d like to see her make them do humiliating things to each other, somehow while taping it, and then leave with her revenge and blackmail secured, her retribution. This only works if Kimmy can resist the sex, which we know is almost impossible for her.

Donkatsu

You think we are not so desperate, but you are not sure, are you?

Donkatsu

This is fabulous! Kimmy is in control and gives in to her dark(er) side as Mistress. At this point I have to believe that she knows more than does Devlin about Sr. and the legal/money matters. She is too confident, compared to how she was just a few hours (story time) ago. OTOH, we all still want/need another good coupling or throupling before we all go our separate ways. As usual for Kimmy, Josh is just an afterthought (or no thought at all) during these machinations.

Bill F Protagoras

Replete with quotables... gonna take a break!

Bill F Protagoras

Yeah! I suppose Kimmy getting so wet accounts for the low consumption. LOL. I think that may have been my first time! (LOL-ing!).

Tracey52

tossing the big pump-bottle of lube onto the bedding. It had been full in the middle of the summer, but now it was down by two-thirds. What a sentence.

Bill F Protagoras

"Devlin chuckled, eyes flicking down at Amy, showing some uneasiness. He said, “Not when we have company, dear.” It's as though Kimmy's slender basket weaving dominant hand could implausibly encompass the vulnerable entirety of his big bossy balls. THEIR house or is it love nest ? HIS tactless insinuations. HIS presumption. HER balls! Shoe, let me introduce the other foot to you!

Bill F Protagoras

A towering triumph of, and over the imagination!

Bill F Protagoras

"Devlin put his hands on his hips, feet shoulder width apart, doing his Superman pose; looking more like an airbrushed barbarian, the way Amy clung to his leg and knelt before him in sexual worship." You really know how to press a nerd's chuckle button! And the 'airbrushed barbarian' frankly puts the cherry on the top of the faux Frazetta.

Bill F Protagoras

If anyone pressed pause I'm sure a glaze-eyed Amy would confess that this was more a beautiful reward than a thoroughly deserved agonizing punishment... and Devlin he is smugly perched on the pinnacle of his casual arrogance!

Andrew Mellein

I'm starting to think she isn't going to do it. But I have been proven wrong before. The problem with Kimmy's POV is she is all over the map in her thoughts. She talks about casting aside everything that mattered for intense pleasure. But then she gets jealous of Amy and Devlin having an affair behind her back! Also performing a rare sacrament only she could provide. So what do I know!

Bill F Protagoras

How naturally Amy AND Devlin take to the roles Mistress assigns. It's the flipside of authority!

Bill F Protagoras

An incredibly powerful lesson in your ever increasing skills in evoking the subtle and supple range of sensuality you have at your metaphorical finger tips...

Bill F Protagoras

At long last we are treated to the revelation of Kimmy's crystal clear perspicacity. KT flicks a a black painted nail against the fine rimmed glass and a chime slices through the sultry damp sex laden atmosphere... and permits herself a sip.

Andrew Mellein

What’s the deal between Amy, Glenn, and Devlin? Glenn and Amy are ex-boyfriend and girlfriend. Are they all swingers? Do they DP Amy whenever they get a chance?🤣🤣

Andrew Mellein

The last chapter. I asked how many chapters were left for this book. And she said this was the home stretch!

Kat

Andrew, where did she say that?

Bill F Protagoras

"Kimmy pointed the leather at Devlin. “Don’t you think he’s the one who should be punished?” Turning the tables playing them against each other.

Andrew Mellein

KT just said this the home stretch. And it’s the last book but super long. So something’s got to happen!

Bill F Protagoras

"the side of sin and heresy. Of sodomy and moral offense.” Like an oyster, or Aphrodite, on a half shell!

Andrew Mellein

Well KT did just say this is the last book and it’s super long! I’m a sucker and holding out hope for HEA! But Kimmy and Josh seem miles apart at this point. This could be another KT instance where the main couple isn’t together at the end. Shades of Maggie and Max!

Bill F Protagoras

Brilliant... what immortal hand or eye could frame her fearful symmetry... why Kimmy's own needless to say. Though it remains to be seen what can be done with the sinews of her heart... " Did he who made the Lamb make Kimmy?" Who is making a mockery of who? From ring through nose to Mistress of a Three Ring Circus? "She doubled the circle of Devlin’s belt into a shorter switch and batted the leather against the wetness." Doubling the circle... one of the important leitmotifs of this book?

Kat

Every chapter leaves me wanting more. It would be something if Kimmy was taping this with her phone. Even if she sleeps with Devlin, in her mind she probably thinks it would turn Josh on. In her mind, it would also absolve her for sins, by showing him how she got revenge on them for him. A part of me thought that the Devlin replica was in the drawer when she went to pull out the bottle of lube. It would be fitting if she had Amy use it on Devlin. Devlin is already submitting quite a bit to her. I’m sure she could find a way to push it further, and love doing it.

JL23

This is some classic KT "ambiguity of motive" dialogue. How many of this is Kimmy submitting to her dark impulses and enjoying this, and how of much of this is her actually getting a measure of revenge on both Devlin and Amy. Revenge on Amy by showing her how much Devlin will submit to her, and revenge on Devlin by revealing to someone else how much he's willing to submit. If she's surreptitiously recording this somehow again, I could see her attempting to use this as some kind of additional evidence to Josh of her devotion to him, and her ability to humiliate his enemies. But clearly, she's enjoying every second of it for herself, not Josh. She still talks of Devlin's body and sexual prowess glowingly, and admits to their remaining connection, even if somewhat unwanted on her part now. So I can't see her giving this up, even for Josh. She wants it too much. As always, it comes back to whether Josh can bring himself to wanting this with her somehow, I can't see it but there's more chapters to read.

L_S87

I thought Kimmy was going to use the video of Devlin in panties to taunt Amy, make her jealous and mess up their little partnership of secrets. Maybe that was her plan. But now... Now she gets to do it live. She gets to show Amy who's boss. And while she might be jealous, I don't even know if Amy would mind at the end of it, as long as Kimmy promises to keep spanking her. This is just as much to show Devlin who's in control as it is Amy. So the question is... were we right from our speculation from the last chapter? Is Kimmy lost in the lust this control gives her... and will she join them... or will she twist them up until they're begging for it, compromise them completely... and then mic drop on her way out. Last chapter I thought no way she doesn't fuck Devlin after having some painful fun at Amy's expense. Now that the panties are out of the pocket... I'm not so sure. Though there's a billion ways this could all go tits up. Show us the vision, KT. We're not quite as desperate as Amy. I think.

L_S87

KT, sometimes you make me pull my hair out... And sometimes, like this time, you make me feel like kneeling and offering supplication, such is how amazing this was. And we're not even done yet.


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