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Embracing Ellie: Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2025-04-07 23:00:05 +0000 UTC

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Bill F Protagoras

“You’re the one with Hemi’s cock in your mouth,” he said, realigning her perspective." And unashamedly underlining it.

Bill F Protagoras

Just reread it... seemed 'even' better this time round... you just lick your fingers like they did in olden times and you keep those pages turning... ironically making it seem artless.

Bill F Protagoras

Once more you intrude on more than is immediately apparent... yet giving the homeric immediacy of being right there in medias res when far from quotidian dirty deeds are taking place in broad bare-arsed daylight... Embracing the momentum. "In Newtonian mechanics, momentum is the product of the mass and velocity of an object. It is a vector quantity, possessing a magnitude and a direction. Wikipedia." Ain't that the truth... putting aside a quantum of solace...

Bill F Protagoras

"Ellie’s sexuality was this huge, inexplicable thing he wanted to know everything about." Is this the divine fulcrum on which Hemi's more than long enough leverage is going to rest in order to move Ellie's world? And shake, and maybe even shiver, the timbers that shore up Daniel's? How deeply you insinuate your readers into these freshly, cherry picked characters' pristine relationship, KT. While Hemi elsewhere routinely does whatever worthy thing absorbs his attentions. Whilst out of sight, but far from out of mind, his absent muscular magnificence is sullying the intimacy of what back home would be the couples' private moments, but here in this remarkable territory achieves extraordinary relevance... or might it be strapping beneficence? Consequences be damned...

KT Morrison

Yup, that should just be treated!

Bill F Protagoras

"anyone catching them mid-session would be entreated, wouldn’t they?" Not sure of the specificity of 'entreated' in this context...


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