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Embracing Ellie: Chapter 10

🕑 Added 2025-04-10 02:05:56 +0000 UTC

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Jay Muney

OMFG...again!

KT Morrison

Ooh, no, but it's juicy, and I love it! I might have heard that sung in my head while I wrote that.

Bill F Protagoras

"Elena Torres, standing 200 yards above Kawarau River in New Zealand," I only now noticed "Elena 'Towers', standing 200 yards above Kawarau River in New Zealand." Was that an intentional bilingual pun?

Bill F Protagoras

Another superlative yet subtle piece of writing, switching mood and viewpoint skilfully and playfully. Captures the feel of uncannily special days, in inexplicably special places. Thank you.

Bill F Protagoras

Chula Vista... good one! When looking "chulo/chula" up bear in mind it has other less salubrious connotations than cute or hot... A "chulo" is a pimp, and the adjective can be a rebuke... to be a wise guy, to be presumptuous or pushy. It's a good example of the unity of opposites, or the differences between Spanish spoken in different countries and contexts. In a Spanish book I read once, I remember it was traced back to 'ciullo' in Italian, meaning little boy in English and also ignorant, inept.

Bill F Protagoras

How well the to-and-fro of voyeurism and exhibitionism is captured in this instalment. A closely run match to a sweaty panting thigh aching finale...

Bill F Protagoras

"the new silence horrified him."

Bill F Protagoras

"Hemi had a much broader and deeper sexual history than she or Danny did, and that both excited and intimidated her." The draw of a man tugging her into a newer more rugged hemisphere into another earlier era of her own country. A more knowing strangely attractive man who'd never been a boyfriend...

Bill F Protagoras

"behind those closed-off blues," A highly suggestive concurrence of words, Ellie doing some of her own delving into the mystery of her partner's sexuality. Using him as ably as he uses her. "Tangled up in blue."

JamesIsAsleep

It's just another outstanding chapter by KT. I obviously obsess over the moments when wifey gets out of hand with someone other than her husband, but this is the kind of connection that gives such depth to a story. I just love the use of the setting for where they doing it as crucial in this, really evoked a lot of imagery, which taken with the realism of what transpired between Danny and Ellie, really made for an excellent scene.


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