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A Step Too Far - Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2023-04-21 23:27:30 +0000 UTC

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horuvex

Haha thanks. I mean, this story will be different, but it will also follow some obvious themes...like shrinking and giantesses and such. But I do write firstly for myself. When I've done commissions in the past, they've more often been gifts for women I liked than for money, lol.

jsm109

Funny you say that about the commission opening. Believe it or not, it’s one of the reasons I enjoy yours so much. It’s refreshing to see a giantess fetish writer create paid content where he’s simply doing his own thing. I’m along for the ride no matter what, and your assertion of this story’s difference has certainly piqued my interest.

horuvex

Thanks for your input. I have drafted the next chapter and it will be going up soon. It may address some of your concerns here. Part of that pacing in Nexifem and other stories is due to my preferences possibly. I sometimes lean a bit toward the amazonian or mini-giantess side of the fantasy. Not that I don't also like the smaller sizes too. Most of the tension I enjoyed in Nexifem was his interactions as an employee of diminishing status, so that might have been why I spent more time on that. This story will be different. When I ponder different directions to take it, I know some paths and endings will displease a bunch of people. I'll be curious to see what people say after the next chapter. Thanks for your comment, jsm. One day, I should do a story commission opening, but I am not in a place where I can offer that right now.

jsm109

I’m enjoying the slow build for sure, especially all the little details on how his life is changing. My only concern is what the ultimate pacing ends up like. Nexifem was a huge fave of mine, but I feel like the smaller sizes at the end were rushed through. We’d have multiple chapters where his change in height would be a few inches - from say high 4 feet to mid four feet, all great I might add, then in a span of two chapters he went from foot down to virtually nothing. I’m not suggesting you rush through the slow build, but I do hope that it’s not a trade, where we get the slow build now only for you to rush through the later parts where he’s inhumanly small. A change from a foot to 6 inches and 3 should arguably take more chapters than these because of the greater percentage in height difference, not to mention how different things look from his perspective at each, as well as how each person handles him. So there’d be a lot more to cover in those respects. Whereas the change from say low five feet to lower five feet isn’t really much with respect to any of those, though it looks like you found a bunch of topics to journey us through while you set the stage. Just my two cents.

horuvex

Yeah, sorry. My bad with the delays. Just know that this story is going to get very sexual and kinky later on. So it will 'pay off', if you are into that sort of thing, lol.

GaryL

Amazing again, really enjoying all the small details and the new painting. I love Vivianne and the embarassing thought of asking out a cheerleader he knew before! Though on one hand i'm cherishing taking time with the pacing but it just makes the wait between chapters so much worse.


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