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A Step Too Far - Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2023-09-16 22:26:45 +0000 UTC

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horuvex

It is completed and just awaiting a proofread. It should be posted soon.

jsm109

How’s the next chapter coming along?

horuvex

Hi GaryL. That's one I don't hear much feedback about these days. It's nice to know that one resonated. It was a bit more dark and bluntly femdom in nature. Also based on a real personal ad I once saw.

GaryL

Definitively team Vivianne. Casual Encounter is my all time favourite story from you, the perfect mix of dark femdom imo. It was a masterpiece.

horuvex

I get what you mean ;) I often have some element of that kind of character appear in my stories, but some have it more than others. Vivianne does fall into that lane, lol. A blonde athletic young woman who is certainly out of Teddy's league...especially now.

Unknown1

To clarify I love slow shrink and I love insertion, and I prefer characters like the girl next door, the spicy step sister, the cheerleader that was out of his league etc. While a bratty version of it, the imagery of Viviane and the direction this is going.... This is some of your finer work

horuvex

Thanks! :)

horuvex

Oh really? This is an interesting perspective. I am thinking I need to do a more sinister story in the future. My readers are a mix of people who like gentle dominance and maternal vibes, and others who lean toward dark femdom verging on horror erotica.

horuvex

Thanks, bustyshrink! I am glad you are enjoying this story. It was meant to be a shorter one, but it has evolved into a more involved story, which seems to be for the best. You are giving me ideas regarding Andrea. She probably could easily have her own spin-off story if I had the time.

Unknown1

Vivianne is now the main character in my eyes, THIS is a true Horuvex story, I'm here for it!

horuvex

Hmm, it sounds like that is a good thing? Haha. Stacy had a bit more life experience than Vivianne and a different physique, but I guess they might share certain sexual desires. lol. I can't promise anything regarding sizes, but I will keep your idea in mind!

bustyshrink

AAAArgh this story is so amazing! It's already top three of all time Horuvex stories I think. The foreshadowing of whatever maternal dark science is going on in Andrea's lab is so fun. As a shrinking/humiliated by breast milk uberfan I'm so so hoping Andrea forcefeeds him (or some other hapless college chump haha) milk directly down to baby size or smaller!

jsm109

I think Vivianne is the new Stacy Belmont for me. I’m absolutely loving the dildo references. Here’s to hoping that when the time comes, you spend a little more time with him at that size than you did in Nexifem. Perhaps even a few full chapters or so? After all, at 7 feet tall she could really use one around 8 inches. At least for a little bit before he gets too small to satisfy ;)


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