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The end of Chapter One
🕑 Added 2019-06-10 11:11:40 +0000 UTCCalling these chapters now you guys, don’t think I was doing the version numbers right…
Anyway, here is the rest of Chapter One, for those of you waiting patiently for it; I thank you.
All the lead girls have been introduced with the exception of the fifth girl, she was shown but not fully introduced; she will be shown more in Ch. 2.
Would love some feedback, is my writing shit? Is the Story bad, progressing too slowly? Are my renders bad?(I know those are, my week little laptop can only do so much lol.) Constructive criticism will only help me to get better. Thank you again for playing it.
