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Learning Lessons // Book 5 // Laid Bare: Chapter 2

🕑 Added 2025-05-28 01:00:16 +0000 UTC

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Bill F Protagoras

A terribly raunchy excerpt from an agonising juncture of the work... Replete with hurtful moments of offensive irony such as... “You should stop Petey from touching me. Climbing on me in the middle of the night and humping my leg with his tiny pecker.” Tyler sneered. “Pete, stop touching my girlfriend, okay?”

Bill F Protagoras

Then his wife goes on to pile Pelion on Ossa for Pete... just as you pile Learning Lessons on DITW for your readers... And here I see the great divide... as apparently, in another sense, a rapscallion narrator does too from the intellectual wings... "Used to be his wife."

Bill F Protagoras

"Tyler arched his back a few times like he was in pain, face contorted, and Pete's hands covered his own face, his arms flexing and shaking." Compare and contrast those readers who are vicariously lost to the lustful doings of the vicious wrong doers.

Bill F Protagoras

A further insult to the injured Pete is that compared to him, and his wife, Tyler is just a "kid."

Bill F Protagoras

"He was dying. He felt like he was eroding right here in front of these two lovers. Like a good stiff breeze could come along and blow his dusty existence away forever." Brilliant depiction of the result of Jess's gratuitous display of adoration and abasement to another man's overpowering ithyphallic objective sexuality... the diametric opposite of her actual scornful treatment of her doting uxorious husband... and as a cherry on top of her seemingly motiveless malignancy... she laughs. Not just once... and she also urges her smug accomplice to join in.


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