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Concept - Large Yume story
🕑 Added 2025-02-21 07:02:23 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Since you guys told me to start work on a new, major comic for this month, I wanted to inform everyone on the story I'm envisioning for this comic. As you all know, this story will center around Yume, and I'm excited to tell what I've been cooking up so far.
Story summary:
We continue the story of last week's smaller comic, in which Yume shrinks our protagonist down. There will be a short summary of the story in the beginning of the story, focusing on how our protagonist got shrunk down, but I'm hoping to keep this short, so that I can focus entirely on our shrunken down adventure with Yume.
After being shrunken down, Yume returns home with her new shrunken down slave, trapped in the depths of her boot. Being surprised by her new slave's endurance, she pulls him out of her footwear, and decides to use him for different things as well. Initially, he's forced to give her a foot massage, but as she grows tired, his job is not over yet; as Yume gets ready for bed, he gets deposited into her underwear, where he's forced to squirm and stimulate her throughout the night.
After a wild night, and in the following days, his treatment stays much the same, or gets even more intense in some situations. Yume decides to not only wear him as an insole, but also decides to trap him in the depths of her stockings, and gets carried along in various pairs of footwear. After long days in her shoes, Yume varies what she does with him when back home; sometimes she demands foot massages, sometimes he gets used as a toy, and other times she simply plays sadistic games with him, such as hide and seek, or tag, where she always plays the big, sadistic captress. I plan to really bring one of these games into view.
Over time, these games become more and more dangerous as Yume grows a little bit bored from his reactions. I've thought of two possible ways to end the story in that regard, and this is where I'd like to hear your opinion.
Option 1 - The cruel games continue, and in the end, our protagonist falls to his demise into Yume's hungry mouth. He'll spend his last moments digesting in the cruel woman's stomach.
Option 2 - a part two, and a to be continued: Because Yume grows bored with him, she doesn't care as much anymore, and in the end decides to host a final game in which her closest friends participate. Whoever wins this game, gets to do whatever they want with him. If Yume herself finds you, she'll kill him. For this option, some of my other girls may be introduced for a story continuation, along with a newly made character. Perhaps, I could also include some OC's of friends. If you prefer this option, I'll make a second chapter of the story focusing on this 'final game'.
Which of these two endings would you prefer? and in case of option 2, which characters would you definitely like to see participate? Leave your thoughts in the comments!
Comments
Goddess Miyu
I have a slight preference for option 1~
Brian Knevitt
I understand being outvoted, but option 1, simply for being my preferred outcome by default.
