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Mecha Belt part 1, WIP
🕑 Added 2025-08-03 06:05:44 +0000 UTCDesigns for the 3 mechas of the main cast. I'll probably change them a bit as I draw them in actual pages.
The title is also a work in progress. I like how simple it is but I might think of something better.
Edit: Added color to the 3 designs. Might not be final.
Edit 2: Added the 3 pilots' designs.
Edit 3: Added another pilot. Secondary-ish character.
Edit 4: Changed some colors.
Edit 5: First sketched page. I was gonna put this one at the start of the comic but I think I'm actually gonna put it as the last page of the intro. That's not a chastity belt she's holding in the last panel btw, in case people think this character is gonna get belted right away, she won't get belted in this first part of the comic. Mostly there will be orgasm denial. I probably should have said that in the poll post but I was still working out the story in my head, my bad.
Edit 6: Page 2 sketch. One thing I wanted to mention: I originally was gonna have the kaijus do something similar to hypnosis to the pilots, but I recently found out Patreon is not too thrilled about those sort of themes so I'm gonna cut that. It's not gonna change the comic too much, it just means most of the kaiju "fights" won't be straight up sex scenes as I was planning, but they will still have sexy aspects to them and there will be plenty nsfw stuff in other scenes. I mention this because this first batch of pages is gonna have fewer sexy stuff because of this change. Also, unrelated, the other sketched page is gonna be the first one after all.
Edit 7: Page 3 sketch. I'm not sure about the composition of the page.
Edit 8: Page 1 ink. I'll start the Jeni page tomorrow.
Edit 9: Page 2 ink.
Edit 10: Page 3 ink.
Edit 11: Page 1 basic colors and shading.
Edit 12: Page 1 done. I felt like switching to this sharper shading that's a bit faster to do, let me know if you have strong feelings about it. Not sure about the colors.
Edit 13: Page 2 finished.
Edit 14: Page 3 basic colors and shading.
Edit 15: Pagge 3 finished. I wanna look into changing the way I draw the speech bubbles. Maybe switch to always do them like in the latest Jeni page.
Edit 16: Page 4 sketch. Let me know if you'd rather I post each batch of pages in a separate post, not all of them in this one.
Edit 17: Page 5 sketch. I left the names as "name 1, 2 and 3" because I'm not sure about them yet.
Edit 18: Page 6 sketch.
Edit 19: Page 4 ink.
Edit 20: Page 5 ink. Sorry, pages with a lot of fugures take me a long time to do.
Edit 21: Page 6 ink.
Edit 22: Base color and shading for page 4.
Edit 23: Page 4 finished. I added the last 2 dialogue bubbles because I wasn't sure if the visual gag was comunicated well. Like maybe it looks like that last panel is meant to be a flashback to when they were about to open the pod instead of Orion slamming the pod closed after hearing all the explanation? I'd remove those two bubbles if I thought the joke works well without, because I think the silence is a bit funnier, so you can let me know if you think the dialogue is not necessary.
Edit 24: Page 5 base colors and shading.
Edit 25: Page 5.
Edit 26: Page 6. The next to scenes have nsfw.
Edit 27: Updated a few things on pages 4, 5 and before posting the for all tiers.
Edit 28: Sketches for pages 7 and 8.
Edit 29: Page 9 sketch.
Edit 30: Page 7 ink.
Edit 31: Page 8 ink.
Edit 32: Page 9 ink.
Edit 33: Page 7 base color and shading.
Edit 34: Page 7 finished.
Edit 35: Page 8 finished. I touched the text a little.
Edit 36: Page 9 finished. I also made the shading a bit lighter in page 8, I wasn't sure you could see the ink through it.
Edit 37: Page 10 sketch. Bottom left panel is supposed to be a flashback, she's not hallucinating lol. Hopefully it's clear with color, since I'll give that panel a different color palette.
Edit 38: Page 11 sketch. I'll almost for sure tweak the dialogue.
Edit 39: Page 12 sketch. And I changed the dialogue in page 11.
Comments
DeprivedArt
Oh thank you for pointing that out! No need to apologize. I like it when people help me correct spelling mistakes, my english is not perfect
Subspacespartan
Looks like a fun start!! Just a note that on page two, there's a spelling mistake; "Beggin" should be "begin"! Sorry, don't mean to nitpick, just noticed it when I was reading! I love your work and I'm excited to see where you take this one!!
