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Demon lord ch2 p8-9

🕑 Added 2021-02-25 15:52:20 +0000 UTC

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Zack chia

where is page 6 and 7?

Arthur Yeung

@MagicCobra911 I've unfortunately ran into some kind of writer's block, so I've decided to slow my pace down and try to look at the colored versions to help fill the gaps. Additionally, some of the new scenes I've added - I need to put a lot more thought in it.

MagicCobra911

So how has your story adaptation been going?

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 Also, since you also redraw these pages, mind making one more addition to Aria's demon form, like in this picture? It's by the grey arrow I pointed in. Thanks! https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wkF9nJMmpJn1nklWNu7D4NUYxRPpPNRP/view?usp=sharing

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 Page 9: 1 - "The human mind cannot latch onto an ethereal, intangible body, like you have now." Also, try putting a space in "Lose Track" - it will grammatically make more sense. 4 - "Let alone MANAGE to keep your body solid".

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 I think there's only a small couple of errors in these pages: Page 8: 1- "Like It will just fade away and be forever lost in A sea of shadow ..." 2- Try this - "It's so hard ... to think ... I'm so tired ..." 4- Gilda should use "okey-dokey" in the last panel (Thanks Benjamin Lawton), as she's like a child in the story. The Demon Lord should say, "Her body is losing shape - she's slowly becoming a spirit."

Lilly

lol I thought these exact same words... I approve of her slipping in the seed haha

Alexey Stratulat

It looks so cool that I want to see it in animation.

Stormfries

very cool

Arbiter

The visuals look great, I do love how the purples have been blended together and how the swirling shadows are enveloping Aria.

ZeroForever

"Her body has started to transform into a spirit." I think works better in the bottom left panel

MagicCobra911

I see, yeah I thought so but great work so far your style and quality really is amazing.

ibenz009

You're reading too much into it. Lol

MagicCobra911

I noticed this demon seed looks a little different with yellow lining around the eye, was that a conscious decision with reason or am I reading too much into it🤔?

MagicCobra911

Great visuals, again the Demon Lord slipping the Demon Seed through Aria’s chest was pretty neat😏. Also Gilda has been delightful in every panel she is in no matter how small.