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Demon lord p10

🕑 Added 2021-03-10 18:36:04 +0000 UTC
Demon lord p10
Demon lord p10

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Asani

10.2.2 How's => How 10.2.3 Well you => You 10.3.1 like => liked 10.3.2 you like => you like. {add a period} 10.3.4 Now, let me put it... => Now then, let me put this... {"it" would be fine following directly from the last page, but them talking about what Aria calls Demon Lord confuses the context of what "it" is referring to.} 10.4.2 Right now, now I => Right now I 10.4.4 How's about => How about {"How's about" sounds a little too folksy for Demon Lord} give you a bigger breasts => give you bigger breasts

Asani

Looking back, I'm not sure I did the most complete job editing these pages. Apologies πŸ™‡β€β™‚οΈ

Arbiter

The effects have come out really well. I'm rather envious of Aria right now!

MagicCobra911

I remember somebody suggesting it in the comments when the page like right before this had its sketch released.

StarGazer

Lol, you couldn't help but add some breasts expansion in, could you? Still looks amazing. Really love how the comic is coming along.

MagicCobra911

Such a physically dramatic yet emotionally foreboding page, the purple goop and it’s consumption of Aria’s body is depicted quite well. In the future I am certainly curious how Aria’s mixed personality will play out if or when there is a part 3.

Jaegar Media

I can work very fast but it won't turn out good I can't seem to practice enough given my situation the last few months in particular. People tell me to find something else that I can do and I have to tell them I can't do anything because I just don't have the time and energy. I work I have to maintain my rental room and I rest up on my days off. I don't have the luxury at the moment to work on hobbies.

DaxJaden

Th slow encasement and look on her face are so good~ ( β—œβ€Ώβ— )β™‘


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