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Demon lord chapter 2 p21-22

🕑 Added 2021-06-01 18:36:10 +0000 UTC

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Asani

22.1.1 You have => I see you have {Assuming the implication here is that Demon Lord didn't know for sure Aria would emerge from her chrysalis as powerful as she did.} 22.1.2 or you => or do you 22.4.2 you => you're / that's 22.5.1 If that how you want => If that is how you want it

guitar_double

いつも楽しみにしています。杖が隠れた目を写しているように見えてとても凛々しいです。（I always look forward to seeing it. It is very dignified, the cane seems to capture the hidden eyes.）

Asani

Speaking of monkey brains... I’m picturing that "neuron activation" meme with the monkey looking at ibenz art.

MagicCobra911

Alright nice feed back I think I get you on this section now and yeah the Demon Lord chose not to scramble Aria’s brain I definitely remember that.

ibenz009

Well her dark side it's just aria repressed anger and negative emotions mostly not evil spirits.

MagicCobra911

So the dark side that merged with her internally was small? Sorry if I seem overly critical (I only do it because i care🙂) I definitely had questions about the final pages/sketches of this chapter.

ibenz009

Well it's only her small desire mostly. dark aria is still aria she understands her good counterpart reason. She just represents one of aria hidden desire not all the desire . Demon lord didn't add mental corruption in her transformation process also help.

MagicCobra911

I suppose that makes sense, it’s still a little strange to me though that her dark side within voices her intentions (joining the Demon lord and destroying the church that sent the three of them there in the first place) and yet none of that leaked out not one little bit even though Aria seemed to be struggling mentally before this.