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Demon lord chapter 2 p26-27

🕑 Added 2021-07-20 16:49:51 +0000 UTC

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Asani

27.1.1 stupid => you stupid 27.1.2 criticizea => criticize a Aria, but => but | that. => that, Aria. {On second thought, "Aria" sounds better at the end.} 27.2.1 Look at what => Tsk. Look what (?) {Demon Lord is making a "tsk" kind of face, but either way works.} 27.2.3 What => What a 27.3.1 keep it. Aria? => keep it, Aria? 27.4.3 Aria, I truly enjoyed out fight. Who would have thought facing a Champion of Light could be this exhilarating.

Asani

26.4.3 {stray quotation mark at the end} 26.5.1 you are to weak => you are too weak or You are so weak you cannot even turn yourself into shadow and escape. {The dialog box flow in the last two panels is a little awkward. Both of the second bubbles are placed such that the eye wants to read them first. Really hate covering up your amazing artwork, but they could probably do with being moved down and/or over, particularly the one in panel 5.}

Asani

There are so many lovely little touches on these pages that it's hard to choose which to point out. I especially like Aria and Gilda's expressions when Demon Lord offers to give up the sword. She just offered a dog a bone, and Aria's antennae glowing serve as good stand-ins for her ears pricking up.

MagicCobra911

Yeah that is something I thought of. Maybe that Arch Purification attack was so drastic and so strongly linked to the goddess that it allowed the goddess to re evaluate the sword there by breaking the Hero’s connection to the sword and making re corrupting it impossible. Hopefully the Demon lord’s next weapon will be cool🙂and a worthy replacement.

Asani

Since the sword was linked or bound or whatever to Hero at the time, mayhaps that was enough for it to be caught up in his transformation. Could be that Aria's spell severed their link in the process of purifying it and now Demon Lord is faced with an oil and water problem.

D Banks

Will you work with the original commissioner on that reboot

MagicCobra911

I think I can see why you would want to do a Liquid Mercury reboot since part one didn’t have any built in text.

Arbiter

Looking real good; we're so close to the end now!

Benjamin Lawton

Darn, I've had a couple of ideas for awhile now that I've wanted to submit, that I believe you'd like -- guess I'll just have to wait, then.

ZeroForever

you retcon power

ibenz009

I really want to do liquid mercury reboot. I may skip poll just this once.

Benjamin Lawton

Out of curiosity, will you be doing another poll once this is finally finished, to determine your next project?

MagicCobra911

Is the gold on Gilda’s right shoulder not supposed to be visible in any way with her WAHOOOO!! panel? Perhaps you decided it shouldn’t be in the coloring (I noticed that detail on her right shoulder was there in the sketch but not here) process since she is raising her right arm high.

Nic B

Take as long as you need

Arxynos

Seems like Gilda shows the most cute side fan service humor when she feel bodyshamed by Aria while Hero and Aria is dead serious to each other

Natalie

So good! You should make a print version of this once it’s done

Jagues

these look great

MagicCobra911

Man these are the best pages for Gilda and her expressiveness, she may not have been a main focus but she has been so damn sweet this whole chapter😏.

MagicCobra911

One thing I have wondered is whether the Demon Lord is unable (if so why?) to corrupt the sword again or that she simply chose not to for the sake of a challenge? Either way I’m not gonna lie I’m still a little salty that the Demon Lord doesn’t have her Dark Sword anymore since Hero’s sword changing along with himself was one of my favorite aspects of part one. Well at least I know she will have a new weapon at some point.