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Liquid mercury RE sketch P1-5
🕑 Added 2021-09-16 18:52:46 +0000 UTCAlright sorry for the late posing this week but here's the first sketch of the first 5 page of the comic.
Well as always if you find any mistake or had any suggestion feel free to tell me in the comment.
Hope you had a great day ahead.
On other news I manage to summon gilgamesh in FGO while taking a dump.
Comments
Curvature
Looks like a completely different story?
Arthur Yeung
@ibenz009 Will both the victims be called Mercury, or will one of them have a different name?
ibenz009
Derrick or Miller still undecided.
ibenz009
Thank you! I will also try to finish your next page in a day or two!
Arthur Yeung
@ibenz009 What is the squad leader's name?
Roxanne Giling
Page 5 1: June! Are you alright?! Aght! That hurts... Wade, is that you? Where is Reed? 2: I've tried my best... but he lost too much blood. I'm sorry. Damnit! Aght...! I think boss got hit too... 3: COUGH! 4: I managed to avoid a full on stab but... ugh..! I'm in no shape to fight. This is bad... Impressive. Even though I calculated my Mercury's angle of attack perfectly, you still managed to evade it. !? 5: Is this a human factor that's beyond machine predictions? Fascinating. I must compliment you on your skill. Your team managed to last longer than any of my test subjects. 6: You... you are... Oh, where are my manners? Please, allow me to introduce myself. I am Amelia Grey Felsen Bern. Current head of house Felsen Bern. I'm delighted to make your acquaintance. So... how do you like my mercury so far?
Roxanne Giling
Page 4: 1: We've reached the lab!! Boss! That thing is still following us! Wha...AGHT! BEAR!! 2: Damnit! Bear is gone! 3: Grrr! This thing is stronger than it looks! Shit, shit! Not like this! 4: Get off of her! Hah! 5: Boss! Watch out! ARGH! GWAHH!
Roxanne Giling
Page 3: 1: Reed is down!! What the hell is that?! Some kind of robot?! 2: We're sitting ducks in this hallway! Push to the lab! June, buy us some time! I got Reed! 3: You heard the man, move! Damnit! the bullets don't seem to work! I got this! My shield should...! 4: !? 5: The hell?! It can penetrate my shield?! This thing can withstand tank rounds, you know! Less talking, more running, June! Push to the lab!
Roxanne Giling
Page 2 1: The main lab should be at the end of this hallway. Our target must be inside. Roger. 2: Say, boss! Don't you think you're being a little too vigilant? It's all been quiet so far besides those servant bots. We can't be too careful, June. Remember the janitor riot? Ha ha! You rushed ahead and got jumped on by a gang of cleaners! Never gonna lte me live that one down, huh? But fair point. 3: Boss! I detect som...! AMBUSH!!!
Roxanne Giling
I am liking this a lot! I'll post some fixes for the spellings here ^.^
Stormfries
m to f !!!! ☺☺
Pascal
neat
Sophia Clay
very promising. I look forward to more
Stormfries
Cool
ZeroForever
you golden poops
Jaegar Media
You've been making your comics much more detailed in the past year or so, so no wonder it takes you a while to make these. They really are worth it though.
M
I see why it took you a while longer because this is filled with the most dialogue I think. Grey's backstory is already intriguing with a classic mad doctor tone. Also I guess she's German now. Nice expansion of the fight, shows how brutal this thing already is. This is a fantastic start, good job!
StarGazer
Wow, this is one hell of an amazing start, love how much more action you've put in for this.
