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Liquid mercury RE p29-30

🕑 Added 2022-07-11 23:13:25 +0000 UTC

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Pohwaran_TH

here, this is first version https://www.patreon.com/posts/liquid-mercury-p-59601861?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copy_to_clipboard&utm_campaign=postshare and this is second version https://www.patreon.com/posts/liquid-mercury-59993712?utm_medium=clipboard_copy&utm_source=copy_to_clipboard&utm_campaign=postshare

Blackstripes 08

What do you mean the first version and where can I read it

Ian Hsieh

Last dialogue of the second panel is missing a space between "and" and "removed". Last dialogue of the last panel, shouldn't it be "press firmly against my body..."?

Ant992

Pity it's only 6 remaining

Jaegar Media

Good to see people have been loving the post on deviant art. I can't stress enough how your hard work paid off. And while you should sharpen your craft I would still advise you to take a break so you don't burn out. I'd love to get to my commission at some point XP i'm as patient as the Rock ;)

Keimori

so in the second panel on page 29 I think "my apology" should be " my apologies" as the phrase uses plural. Same with "Belief" it should be "Beliefs" as the reprogramming changed all of Miller's beliefs, not just one.

tinpin

I'd be touching her! Y'know, for science...

Canti

I think that last panel should say “on my body” not “his body”

Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)

Fantastic work as usual. Wonderfully done. Did notice one problem in the last dialogue bubble in the second panel of page 29, it says "andremoved" when I'm assuming you meant "and removed". Didn't see anything else out of place.