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Miko spider corruption p1-2 sketch
🕑 Added 2022-09-21 16:40:29 +0000 UTCFinally begin the first draft sketch!
As always if you have any suggestion or found a mistake. Please feel free to post in the comment.
Comments
ArcQUITE
The goddess actually hesitated a little bit when kyo mentions her room. Lmao
현진 서
너무좋다
Pascal
looking good so far!
ZeroForever
You kumoyasha
At panel 1 both the 'Shrine' are written as Shirne. Top left Spider Mountain & bottom right Mikoto whiney
Arbiter
Interesting; I'm sure their new Goddess will find them appealing!
ibenz009
Thank you!
The7thSage
I love their chemistry!
Benjamin Lawton
Spelling/grammar typos (corrections in all-caps): Page 1: Panel 2: "Dammit, shut up! YOU'VE BEEN yelling that for an hour!" "You shut up!" YOU'RE SUPPOSED to protect me!" Panel 3 (bottom-left): "I bet the head priest forgot to check the damn thing and DUMPED it on us." Page 2: Panel 1 (top-left): "Wha……wha…!? Why ARE these THINGS UNDRESSING me?! Quit it!" Panel 2 (top-center): "HUNDREDS OF years being IMPRISONED within that stone. Curse that priestess! Look at what you MORTALS have done to my mountain!" "Sigh, it SEEMS THE quality of PRIESTESS have been ERODED over the last few hundred years." Panel 3 (top-right): "It's been so long since I have HAD a VESSEL to enact my authority." Panel 5 (bottom): "You will BE bound to this place. Become part of the mountain."
Cryostorm
Looking good, so the mountain goddess is wanting a priestess and champion of her own.
Alfredo
I’d only advice you to double check on the very last dialogue on the 2nd page. I think the message is not quite right (I think)
