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Liquid mercury RE Chapter 2 p3-4

🕑 Added 2023-07-13 20:50:04 +0000 UTC

Comments

Arbiter

Brilliant, as usual!

Adolfo

Prima's ass is one of the sexys there is. On the other hand, where did June get a knife so fast in her right hand? I think I'm overthinking it.

Canti

I think you meant “imbecilic” and “you’re in for a surprise”

Nepisa

The coloring is really well done! A few things: Page 1 You['ve] made me blow him []to bits. You['re] in for a surprise, Ms. June! Page 2 ("Subjugating target." if it's still in process; but it looks here like she could already be restrained here? So "Target subjugated." might be better?)

Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)

Gorgeous work as usual. I saw one minor grammar problem. The second to last word bubble on page 3 reads, "You in for a surprise, Ms. June!" I believe you meant for it to say "You're in for a surprise, Ms. June!"

M

Always like the changes you add in the transition from sketch to final draft. It think adds to the scene to see Prima's face up close in p4 before she grabs & subdue June. It makes the action panel in the middle feel like a natural progression to the bottom panel