Liquid mercury RE ch2 p32-33
🕑 Added 2024-05-12 14:57:47 +0000 UTCAnother two page done! Sorry for taking so long. Only 3-4 page reamined!
As always if find any mistake plese tell me in the comment
And thank you for another month of support .
Comments
Murzath
He needs to die. No one messes with a historical house!
Corington
In the second page Papa should have an s at the end and Manor has just one r at the end (Unless you stretched it out a bit to exagerrate Amelias distress). Other than that, it's golden.
gen
Im curious what ur gonna make next
Arthur Yeung
@ibenz009 Page 30: AMELIA: What a shame. I hate to cut our introduction short, but we have more pressing matters. PRIMA and SECUNDA: Yes, Mistress. We nano-organic lifrforms exist to serve you. Your will is absolute. BIRD'S EYE: This is Bird's Eye to Nest. Sample successfully retrieved. Requesting LZ for extraction. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Page 31: NEST: Roger that, Bird's Eye. LZ on standby, west garden. NEST: I see you, Bird's Eye. Preparing the rope. Wait ... watch out! On your Six! PRIMA: Trespasser, you have in your possession private property belonging to Our Mistress.
Arthur Yeung
@ibenz009 Page 29: PRIMA: Scanning ... Damage to Secunda is minimal. It should not affect her personality formatting, Mistress. I am detecting minor glitches with her facial expression subroutine. It has no effect on her combat performance. SYSTEM: Secunda Silver online. SECUNDA: All systems operational, Mistress.
Arthur Yeung
@ibenz009: Page 25: AMELIA: Oh dear ... another guest? It seems there's more vermin that slipped into my manor than I realized. May I ask what you are doing with my property? Page 26: AMELIA: Prima, is he one of yours? Interesting. Amercenary? It's not like Apollo to hire outside help. PRIMA: Pardon me, Mistress. Please keep your head down. It appears he is targeting you, Mistress.
Florian75
I see, that means that we can theoretically see how Amelia studying Segunda and her appearance and character can theoretically be adapted more to her ideas, because Segunda's current appearance was created by Prima. That means that Segunda's core gets blue RGB for her perfection. Amelia then realizes that Prima has evolved through the mutation and can transform other people without the slime from page 9. I see you've looked very far into the future :)
ZeroForever
You mercury milf
Adolfo
Magnificent as always. For a future third part it would be great if there are people who voluntarily accept to be reborn as liquid mercury girls.
ibenz009
I use the same shade maybe it cause different lighning? She got that mark in my sketch design it's give more fox girl vibe in in her small form. Her nanite mutate randomly so she look less perfect than more fine tune Prima.
Florian75
I have two questions, firstly why is Segunda's rgb darker than on pages 22 to 29. Secondly what exactly is the purple under Secunda's eyes? It just doesn't look natural to me in some places and that makes her design not as aesthetic as Prima's. Otherwise, another beautiful work of art from you.
M
This 2nd half has been awesome, almost can't believe it's one or two updates away from part 3. Looking forward to Irons return. Also GIANT, MUSCLE SECUNDA I LOVE YOU!
Arbiter
Oh wow, Secunda is jacked! Guess it's due to the experimental nanites that make up her body now.
Arthur Yeung
I will also offer edits for a couple of past pages shortly.
Arthur Yeung
@ibenz009 Page 33: AMELIA: My Manor! Oh, God! That's Father's Study! He's destroying my home! No, no, no! My century-old family estate, now in ruins! That bomb loving psychopath! BIRDEYE: Dr. Felsenbern. I know you can hear me. I understand this place means a lot to you, so let's not do anything we might regret. That's for me to know and for you to find out. I'll even hand over the trigger if you let me walk free.
Arthur Yeung
@ibenz009: Page 32: PRIMA: If you do not comply, we will use lethal force. You can't exploit Mistress Felsenbern this time. BIRDEYE: No, not yet. I still have an ace in the hole ...
Blackstripes 08
DAAAAAAMN secunda is ripped as hell I love it