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Liquid mercury RE ch2 p30-31

🕑 Added 2024-04-23 18:34:47 +0000 UTC

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Nepisa

A bit late to the party, but like it! A few typos: Page 1: - "WE[ ]HAVE" (missing space) - "ELIMINATE~D~" (past tense) Page 2: - "Bird-Eye" or "Bird's-Eye"? I would probably drop the "'s" from page 1 - "IS WA[I]TING" - "APPRO[A]CHING" - "I CAN SEE YOU BIR[D]-EYE" - "THE CABLE" - cable feels a bit weird here. Even if it's metal, I feel like "rope" might be better - "BIR[D]-EYE" again - "YOU HAVE [SOME] PROPERTY" - property is uncountable - "POSSES[S]ION"

ibenz009

But it's look cool...

FYMFYM

I have a question. It's already liquid metal. Why use muscles to show strength?

Alfredo

In the first page, it should say “eliminate” instead of “eliminated” Amazing job!

ibenz009

It's from illumination. To be honest I kinda forgot the room got exploded on previous page and coloured Secunda blue out of habbit

Drijunior

Ok, I'll be posting it, even Benjamin having posted about it as well, but I fell that in p30 Prima and Secunda beeing in this more silver tone don't make much sense due to secunda beeing in the bluish tone you have been using. Besides that, loved that Secunda's left eye has a lower brightness, as it was the one removed in p 24, a small detail that add. Also, loves how you do the reflections over them in both pages, amazing work!

Drijunior

The thing in my opinion is that in page 29, secunda had a normal coloration in secunda, so I'm not sure if it's because of the ilumination.

洛晴明

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Mira

Secunda getting to squeeze Prima's butt in that last page I see

Wayne Chen

If the bigger version Jane’s theme horror, that purple fit her.if the maid Jane is theme cute that purple make her evil but not reliable .

Wayne Chen

Maybe more pink is better than purple ?

dlh108

Secunda's right eye (left in our perspective) is a bit strange on p31, looking at different direction?

Schnitzel

I think it's because of the lighting of the room; especially the explosion that happened a few pages ago. They're blue once they're outside, so they probably just reflect the colors of their surroundings.

Arbiter

Excellent as usual!

Adolfo

Prima and Secunda are very beautiful, although I think they should always keep their blue color.

Benjamin Lawton

I mentioned this before, a few pages back, but military radio chatter specifically tries to cut out as many unnecessary words as possible. (Partly for OpSec – having as little transmission as possible for the enemy to potentially intercept – but also because the "boots on the ground" guys are usually so focused that they don't have a whole lot of attention span to spare for wordiness.) "Bird's-eye to Nest. Sample successfully retrieved. Need info on extraction." "Copy that. Approaching West Garden now."

AimlessHalo

Why aren’t Prima and Secunda blue on page 30? Was it from the lighting of the lab reflecting off of them? I think they should be blue all the time, it looks way better. The gray look is just kind of flat and dull in comparison.

Florian75

Is it possible to get a full art picture of Prima and Secunda like they are here with red rgb. The contrast would look beautiful as a background image