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Demon lord: Latex demon p1-2

🕑 Added 2024-10-30 10:41:49 +0000 UTC

Comments

Corington

Love to see the sketch turn into a full colored piece of work. As for Grammar in the first page I'd just put an S at the end of Outsider considering Gilda would mean it plurally.

Arbiter

It begins!

Stormfries

yeah

Original_Sin

YES ITS HERE! Have you gotten better at coloring? Everything looks so well done, shading and all. I cant wait for more!

Arthur Yeung

@ibenz009 Here are the grammar changes: Page 1: "what is the meaning of this" to "WHAT TREACHERY IS THIS!?" "What is this thing!?" to "WHAT IS THIS FOUL CREATURE!?" "ANSWER ME!" TO "ANSWER ME ..." PAGE 2: "A few weeks later in the Ash Wood" to "A few weeks later in the ASHEN FOREST" "Can you demon hunters hurry up." to "Can you INQUISITORS hurry up?"

trigger_portal_cleanser

Lookin' good. Some small errors on the first page: "Did you... Did you lure me a trap!?" ↴ "Did you... Did you lure me into a trap!?". "Since you've taken such a good care of this poor refugee, Gilda. How can I not return a favor." ↴ "Since you've taken such good care of this poor refugee, Gilda, how can I not return the favor?" "But some advice from an ex-paladin: You really need to be more wary of an outsider." ↴ “But some advice from an ex-paladin: You really need to be more wary of outsiders.” "Espicailly the cute ones~." ↴ "Especially the cute ones~."