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Dreams of Home Chapter 24

🕑 Added 2023-06-06 17:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Beau Brown

Nice continuity error catch. Glad you brought it up, because I want to say it comes up a 3rd time later that I should go fix 😂

iTzJODA

Great chapter, however I’m sure Elaine has already seen Harry cast the Patronus at the welcome feast. Harry does a patronus to let Dorea & Charlus know what house he was sorted into. And you specifically said Elaine eyes widened. In this chapter its like she’s forgotten

Ross

Great chapter!


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